Little Miss Rarity

[Mirad 217]

Alright, well I've gotten some of the work done for this long fic, I guess I'll give you the link now.

http://www.fimfictio...tle-Miss-Rarity

Tell me you're thoughts on the fiction's current state.

(It may make you have nightmares, and Rarity DOES torture the entire mane 6, this story is NOT for the faint of heart. NSFW)

 

Good luck .

 

[EDIT]: I'm a Grimdark Writer, as you might tell. Once I start a story, I go through with it. Stop telling me to edit and rerite stuff you dont enjoy or like in it. My story, and I dont care about this sort of scenario. This is what I write. If you don't like the way it is and want me to change it,oh well. Not happening. I don't want to seem like a bastard, but seriously.Write your own fiction if you want to edit something, people make alternatives.

 

[EDIT AGAIN]: agh, it won't show the next 3 chapters... Keeps glitching on me... Sorry, but you are stuck wth worthless chapter 1 or now...

Edited August 14, 2012 by Scootalicious

[DeiStar 248]

Well, I would remove the [GRIMDARK] from the title, since you've established is a grimdark on the fic tags and description.

 

Oh, and I would seriously work on that horrid description.

If the readers look at such a messy description like that, they'll only figure the actual fic is even worse.

Edited August 14, 2012 by DeiStar

[Finesthour 7,289]

You haven't added anything yet. And in my opinion, I wouldn't if I was you. This scenario has been beaten to death with gigantic sticks. It is not an interesting concept anymore, just a bore that no one will want to read. I am saying this for your own good, don't go through with this. Pick another scenario.

Edited August 14, 2012 by Incognito

[Alleviate 342]

Well, I would remove the [GRIMDARK] from the title, since you've established is a grimdark on the fic tags and description.

 

Oh, and I would seriously work on that horrid description.

If the readers look at such a messy description like that, they'll only figure the actual fic is even worse.

 

After looking at that, Yeah, I agree that it needs re-doing. I reckon I, or someone else, or even you, could re-write that li'l bit Sooo much better....(I'm not trying to be a complete bastard here ^-^)

 

It's definitely an interesting concept - Writing based off of the Tumblr I presume?

I can honestly say, Write some decent stuff, And I'm IN!

 

-Joe-