My first oc and pony drawing

[pinkieshyrose 58]

These is day dream shes a filly alicorn that has a diffrent colored horn then other ponys she day dreams while flying through equestria when she day dreams her dreams tend to drift into

equestria she is a loner and shy scince she a loner and has baby fat

 

 

 

 

 

 

[Jlcjcdc 2]

Your pretty good for your fost one

[OkBuddy 586]

This is your first one? This seems like someone's 100th picture. This is really good.

[XUNUSEDXXX 3,459]

This is pretty good, but her legs are a bit... teeny even though she's a filly and I can't see her snout besides just a lump.

[Acoustic Cloud 2,202]

It is really light though, but i'm colorblind so maybe it's just me that can't barely see it, i can only see the eyes... but if it's the eyes i'm judging i give it a 10/10

[pinkieshyrose 58]

Thank you everyone ! sorry its a bit light i tryed to make it have light color to do well with it oh and the lump was supposed to be her snout and yes the legs are tiny i had a leg battle didn't now what size the legs should be originally it was gonna look like she was flying

[Dusty Soul 2,611]

This is pretty darn good for a first one. It looks like the front legs are missing something... I think it might just be your style, but man are those eyes cute...

[pinkieshyrose 58]

This is pretty darn good for a first one. It looks like the front legs are missing something... I think it might just be your style, but man are those eyes cute...

 

Thank you iIl have no idea if its my style or not next time I make somthing ill proably try to make it more umm leggy not sure through.

Edited August 28, 2012 by pinkieshyrose

[Motion Spark 7,807]

@@pinkieshyrose, you have a pretty good concept for an OC, and I could put it as one of the cutest OC's in this forum, however, the drawing is not good, and you need to improve...

 

first of all, the colors you picked for the outlines needs to be much more darker than the colors that you picked because it's really hard to appreciate how your OC looks like, the only thing that I could notice without a problem were her eyes.

the mane and tail, looks good, you just need to polish them with softer curves. the horn is not straight, and the line the is under the horn should be yellow, since the horn is peeking out of her mane, I liked the fact that her horn is a different color as her coat.

 

her head has a lemon shape, when it should be like an orange shape, I don't know if you intended that shape on purpose or what. The body is super off, it has a square like shape, when ponies bodies are based on pure curves, specially fillies. All the hooves are too short, and really square like as well, they should have a little curvature, like a tear shape, at the bottom of the hooves.

 

use this as a reference to draw your filly next time, with time you will get better

[Felix 1,363]

For a first try that's really good. Pretty cute too. I agree that the legs could use work but other than that it's perfectly fine!

Edited August 28, 2012 by PonyInTheFedora

[Regality 233]

It's very nice, you've got talent if that's really your first drawing.

 

The only criticism I'd have is the lines distinguishing her legs, it's almost as if they're one big mass.

 

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[pinkieshyrose 58]

@@pinkieshyrose, you have a pretty good concept for an OC, and I could put it as one of the cutest OC's in this forum, however, the drawing is not good, and you need to improve...

 

first of all, the colors you picked for the outlines needs to be much more darker than the colors that you picked because it's really hard to appreciate how your OC looks like, the only thing that I could notice without a problem were her eyes.

the mane and tail, looks good, you just need to polish them with softer curves. the horn is not straight, and the line the is under the horn should be yellow, since the horn is peeking out of her mane, I liked the fact that her horn is a different color as her coat.

 

her head has a lemon shape, when it should be like an orange shape, I don't know if you intended that shape on purpose or what. The body is super off, it has a square like shape, when ponies bodies are based on pure curves, specially fillies. All the hooves are too short, and really square like as well, they should have a little curvature, like a tear shape, at the bottom of the hooves.

 

use this as a reference to draw your filly next time, with time you will get better

 

Oh thank you! the criticism really helps me improve I was trying to make it light sorta day dreamy but it proably looks less dark on your computer so ill have to make it darker next time the horn is off now that I look at it and now that I look at it the head was and wasnt on purpose I think I started with a normal head but then I changed it the body was done but after drawing it once I really couldn't make it rounder like a normal fillys so decided it would have baby fat . Thank you so much for showing me that reference I was trying to find one that showed it without part of the body and the body messed me up on the legs as well scince it had to fit the body.

 

It's very nice, you've got talent if that's really your first drawing.

 

The only criticism I'd have is the lines distinguishing her legs, it's almost as if they're one big mass.

 

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Thank you! Its my first pony drawing I realize now that I need a bit more lines there

 

For a first try that's really good. Pretty cute too. I agree that the legs could use work but other than that it's perfectly fine!

 

Oh thank you yep I need more lines! Edited August 29, 2012 by pinkieshyrose

[_Magikarp 17]

that i must say is a pretty cute drawing of your oc her back story seems kinda funny in a way with the baby fat

only criticism is probably already heard this but try to draw it like any of the mlp gens

[pinkieshyrose 58]

that i must say is a pretty cute drawing of your oc her back story seems kinda funny in a way with the baby fat

only criticism is probably already heard this but try to draw it like any of the mlp gens

 

Thank you !Yeah ill proably do that next time through that might be a while

Edited August 29, 2012 by pinkieshyrose