ooc Equestria Divided (Grimdark)

[discorded 234]

The zebra would be good at using stealth and making poisons, she would suck at combat.

 

Also take all the time you need, im in no rush to getting the name suggestions.

[Zaquiop 7]

Yo, Zaq, I was given the House Everfree Mod Position just so you know. I haven't been posting much, but I am still very much anticipating the start of this roleplay.

 

Alright then Higurashi, Good to know.  I looked back and saw that you hadn't posted for a while so I was just wondering how often you were on and such.  

 

Though, don't take this the wrong way, but isn't it a little OP to have control of an Alicorn, and and entire house?  Of course you wont abuse the power, but I'm just suggesting to spread it out.

 

This is nothing personal, just an observation.  

[The-Master 1,176]

The zebra would be good at using stealth and making poisons, she would suck at combat. Also take all the time you need, im in no rush to getting the name suggestions.

 

After a tiny bit of research these are some of the names that fit under the description and a bit extra. Sorry I'm not of much help.

Kuzu (Brewer)

Mareke (Forest-Sister)

Markiz (Forest-Maid)

Tîgeke (Arrow-Sister)

Tîgkiz (Arrow-Maid)

Yileke (Wind-Sister)

Yilkiz (Wind-Maid)

These are more traditional so you don't have to use them if they sound odd.

[Nightfall 3,950]

Here is the normal Nightfall:

 

However, for the RP, here is how he would look (image the same mane color and coat color):

 

(Credit to Ballistic456 who drew both pics.)

[HigurSan 195]

Not really. If they were in the same house, oh hell yeah. Not to mention House Everfree appears to  be one of the weaker houses. (At least from my view.)

[Damien Cremin 50]

Not really. If they were in the same house, oh hell yeah. Not to mention House Everfree appears to be one of the weaker houses. (At least from my view.)

Yeah, Everfree needs more shamanistic zebras, and ferocious minotaurs. Not to mention more plant sourcerers... any budding environmentalists here?

[Zaquiop 7]

Yeah, Everfree needs more shamanistic zebras, and ferocious minotaurs. Not to mention more plant sourcerers... any budding environmentalists here?

 

 

Not really. If they were in the same house, oh hell yeah. Not to mention House Everfree appears to  be one of the weaker houses. (At least from my view.)

 

I disagree to both of you.  The house of Everfree may be one of the more animalistic houses, but in my opinion one of the strongest.  It's military really makes up for that.  They may be unorganized, but Fluttershy certainly knows how to rally up a force to get what she thinks the house needs.  In my opinion, all of the houses are rather evenly matched, the house of Everfree is no exception.  

 

Honestly, who wouldn't be scared to go up against the army of the house of Everfree?  Only those who aren't scared to be ripped to shreds and devoured by their enemies on the battlefield.  The house of Everfree has more to do with intimidation, and fear, than actually strength.

[Descant 1,898]

I disagree to both of you.  The house of Everfree may be one of the more animalistic houses, but in my opinion one of the strongest.  It's military really makes up for that.  They may be unorganized, but Fluttershy certainly knows how to rally up a force to get what she thinks the house needs.  In my opinion, all of the houses are rather evenly matched, the house of Everfree is no exception.  

 

Honestly, who wouldn't be scared to go up against the army of the house of Everfree?  Only those who aren't scared to be ripped to shreds and devoured by their enemies on the battlefield.  The house of Everfree has more to do with intimidation, and fear, than actually strength.

Rose is totally plant sorcerer enough for the Proud House of Everfree. Have you all already forgotten the Yateveo Tree?

 

Speaking of Rose, I'm thinking of changing her name... Options include flowers and fruits including Morning Glory, Honeysuckle, Persimmon, or perhaps something along the lines of herbs, like Rosemary, Thyme, Lavender, Sorrel, or Fennel. Any ideas or opinions? I've decided 'Rose Petal' doesn't exactly match her colour scheme. Any suggestions or opinions on the matter?

[MagicalStarRain 599]

Rose is totally plant sorcerer enough for the Proud House of Everfree. Have you all already forgotten the Yateveo Tree?

 

Speaking of Rose, I'm thinking of changing her name... Options include flowers and fruits including Morning Glory, Honeysuckle, Persimmon, or perhaps something along the lines of herbs, like Rosemary, Thyme, Lavender, Sorrel, or Fennel. Any ideas or opinions? I've decided 'Rose Petal' doesn't exactly match her colour scheme. Any suggestions or opinions on the matter?

What about Ginseng, no wait that's Star Rain's father.  What about Rosewood or Ylang or Clove? Those three are healing herbs.

[Descant 1,898]

What about Ginseng, no wait that's Star Rain's father.  What about Rosewood or Ylang or Clove? Those three are healing herbs.

I totally didn't think about Rosewood or Clove. Although I've never heard of Ylang. I sort of like Thyme, too. 

 

Vey Thyme might work. Or Clove. I like Clove. How would that work, though? I want two words. Haha.

 

I want to change it since Rose, as I just realised, is a background character.

Edited December 16, 2012 by Descant

[TheImaginaryAlicorn 147]

I totally didn't think about Rosewood or Clove. Although I've never heard of Ylang. I sort of like Thyme, too. 

 

Vey Thyme might work. Or Clove. I like Clove. How would that work, though? I want two words. Haha.

 

I want to change it since Rose, as I just realised, is a background character.

 

What about Holly Sprig? That doesn't really match the color either, but it's two words and it has three syllables.

[discorded 234]

Yo, Zaq, I was given the House Everfree Mod Position just so you know. I haven't been posting much, but I am still very much anticipating the start of this roleplay.

I'm using Standoff (top link) and Red Alert (middle link). Feel free to look at either of them and give feedback!

Here is the normal Nightfall:

LowColourShadeDark (2).jpg

 

However, for the RP, here is how he would look (image the same mane color and coat color):

Nightfall001.jpg

 

(Credit to Ballistic456 who drew both pics.)

 

Ok i looked over the oc's that still need to be accepted and have some information on things you guys need to change or add.

 

Halfnote's dogmatic:

is being looked over by equestrian scholar

 

Higurashi's Diamond holder:

He needs more detail, but one of your oc's have already been accepted so you should know what you need to add in terms of detail.

As equestrian scholar said his age needs to be changed; in the episode were Twilight got her cutie mark, Twilight was around 8 years old when skipe was hatched. It looks like Twilight is now around 18 and Spike look like he's around 10. So drgons do seem to age more or less normally, with a life expectancy of maybe 1000 years(guess). Because in the episode Dragonshy, he was going to hybernate for 100 years. In short, i would estimate that for him to be the size he is in the roleplay, he would need to be in his 20-40's

 

Nightfall's Nightfall Starline:

Your oc is coming along nicely but their are things you need to add and change. Like Equestrian Scholar said your engine will help give power to the houses but not determine the outcome of battles, so you should make it weaker. As for why he left Canterlot, it dosnt make sence because of the timeline, Canterlot wasnt dangerous for alicorns as soon as the princess's went missing, over time Twilight became more evil. So you might want to change the reason why he left. As for why he joined house moon and star makes even less sence, he would be in alot of danger in that house and didn't have a real reason for joining them. I do have a suggestion: maybe the reason he joined moon and star was because his engine required strong magic to be made, so joining house moon and star would help him come closer to completing his engine.

 

acualy is dolan:

I had alot of things i needed to discuss with you. You have a lot of things you will need to change and add. If you need help i will give you a hand.

 

Your oc's backstory for equestria divided look ok, but you need to make some changes. Also your oc's general backstory are no good because there are alot of groups not mentioned in the Equestria divided setting (like the PKVD) and there are no guns(with the exeption of house earthborn's hoof cannons, which have one shot until you need to reload, prone to misfire and have bad accuracy, but they are very powerful) I suggest you make a diffrent backstory of how they were raised just for the Equestria divided setting.

 

About Standoff: Firstly, this roleplay has no rockets, the closest thing would be canons, wich are heavy and take a few ponies to opperate. Secondly, Stormwing wasn't losing any battles, they flooded the city because Twilight tricked Rainbow Dash into thinking their were rebels in ponyville.

 

 

About Red Alert: Snipers dont exist, the closest thing to a gun for him would be a hoof canon, which would have a fairly long reload time. Im not sure were Equestrian Scholar would stand on the smilling doll.

Edited December 17, 2012 by discorded

[Descant 1,898]

I created Standoff and Red Alert's Equestria Divided pages... My bad if I interpreted the story wrong. I assumed that there was an actual battle of Ponyville before the flooding. And about the Smiling Doll... I could find another way to work that... 

 

To be fair, I did advise against the firearms, and said the riot shield might be pushing it. I tried to work with what he gave me.

 

 

 

And I'd like to notify Scholar that Rose Petal's name has been changed to Evergreen. So... That'll need to be changed in the OP.

[discorded 234]

I created Standoff and Red Alert's Equestria Divided pages... My bad if I interpreted the story wrong. I assumed that there was an actual battle of Ponyville before the flooding. And about the Smiling Doll... I could find another way to work that...

 

To be fair, I did advise against the firearms, and said the riot shield might be pushing it. I tried to work with what he gave me.

 

 

 

And I'd like to notify Scholar that Rose Petal's name has been changed to Evergreen. So... That'll need to be changed in the OP.

The laughting doll could work, im not sure what Equestrian scholar would think about that though.

But all and all you did a fairly good job. Just maybe take away the battle at ponyville, because it was after the flood of ponyville that Earthborn decalred war on stormwing. Maybe you can write that they took a hoofcanon from earthborn.

 

And acualy is dolan, maybe i can help you make the changes to your oc.

Edited December 17, 2012 by discorded

[Descant 1,898]

The laughting doll could work, im not sure what Equestrian scholar would think about that though.

But all and all you did a fairly good job. Just maybe take away the battle at ponyville, because it was after the flood of ponyville that Earthborn decalred war on stormwing. Maybe you can write that they took a hoofcanon from earthborn.

 

And acualy is dolan, maybe i can help you make the changes to your oc.

If you're going to help Dolan now, I don't mind if you tweak my work on his EQ Divided sections. I don't really have the time anymore to do it myself. 

 

But thanks. 

[Senor Citizen 516]

 

 

Ok i looked over the oc's that still need to be accepted and have some information on things you guys need to change or add.

 

Halfnote's dogmatic:

is being looked over by equestrian scholar

 

Higurashi's Diamond holder:

He needs more detail, but one of your oc's have already been accepted so you should know what you need to add in terms of detail.

As equestrian scholar said his age needs to be changed; in the episode were Twilight got her cutie mark, Twilight was around 8 years old when skipe was hatched. It looks like Twilight is now around 18 and Spike look like he's around 10. So drgons do seem to age more or less normally, with a life expectancy of maybe 1000 years(guess). Because in the episode Dragonshy, he was going to hybernate for 100 years. In short, i would estimate that for him to be the size he is in the roleplay, he would need to be in his 20-40's

 

Nightfall's Nightfall Starline:

Your oc is coming along nicely but their are things you need to add and change. Like Equestrian Scholar said your engine will help give power to the houses but not determine the outcome of battles, so you should make it weaker. As for why he left Canterlot, it dosnt make sence because of the timeline, Canterlot wasnt dangerous for alicorns as soon as the princess's went missing, over time Twilight became more evil. So you might want to change the reason why he left. As for why he joined house moon and star makes even less sence, he would be in alot of danger in that house and didn't have a real reason for joining them. I do have a suggestion: maybe the reason he joined moon and star was because his engine required strong magic to be made, so joining house moon and star would help him come closer to completing his engine.

 

acualy is dolan:

I had alot of things i needed to discuss with you. You have a lot of things you will need to change and add. If you need help i will give you a hand.

 

Your oc's backstory for equestria divided look ok, but you need to make some changes. Also your oc's general backstory are no good because there are alot of groups not mentioned in the Equestria divided setting (like the PKVD) and there are no guns(with the exeption of house earthborn's hoof cannons, which have one shot until you need to reload, prone to misfire and have bad accuracy, but they are very powerful) I suggest you make a diffrent backstory of how they were raised just for the Equestria divided setting.

 

About Standoff: Firstly, this roleplay has no rockets, the closest thing would be canons, wich are heavy and take a few ponies to opperate. Secondly, Stormwing wasn't losing any battles, they flooded the city because Twilight tricked Rainbow Dash into thinking their were rebels in ponyville.

 

 

About Red Alert: Snipers dont exist, the closest thing to a gun for him would be a hoof canon, which would have a fairly long reload time. Im not sure were Equestrian Scholar would stand on the smilling doll.

 

 

I created Standoff and Red Alert's Equestria Divided pages... My bad if I interpreted the story wrong. I assumed that there was an actual battle of Ponyville before the flooding. And about the Smiling Doll... I could find another way to work that... 

 

To be fair, I did advise against the firearms, and said the riot shield might be pushing it. I tried to work with what he gave me.

 

 

 

And I'd like to notify Scholar that Rose Petal's name has been changed to Evergreen. So... That'll need to be changed in the OP.

I AM FROTHING AT THE MOUTH RIGHT NOW WHY ARE YOU MAKING MY LIFE SO DIFFICULT ALL THE TIME I HATE EVERYTHING

[discorded 234]

I AM FROTHING AT THE MOUTH RIGHT NOW WHY ARE YOU MAKING MY LIFE SO DIFFICULT ALL THE TIME I HATE EVERYTHING

Sorry man but their are some rules and guidelines to follow. When making an oc you need to make sure it fits in with the setting, you can add some things to help add to the setting also but still need to stay withing reason.

 

Sorry to say but as they are now, your oc's wont be accepted. I can help you out as best i can, iv'e got good idea's and can help you make your oc's acceptable for Equestrian scholar.

[Senor Citizen 516]

Sorry man but their are some rules and guidelines to follow. When making an oc you need to make sure it fits in with the setting, you can add some things to help add to the setting also but still need to stay withing reason.

 

Sorry to say but as they are now, your oc's wont be accepted. I can help you out as best i can, iv'e got good idea's and can help you make your oc's acceptable for Equestrian scholar.

Cheese grater. My face. Grievous bodily harm.

Bwaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh.

 

Okay. We had better continue this in a PM.

[Nightfall 3,950]

@@discorded, I have updated it. Here is the update, and please let me know if anymore changes are necessary, and if the changes are good.

http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/nightfall-starline-r104

[Senor Citizen 516]

@@discorded, I have updated it. Here is the update, and please let me know if anymore changes are necessary, and if the changes are good.

http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/nightfall-starline-r104

Question-how do I go about changing the title that says "Members uh, Squirrel" on it above my avatar? You've done it, so how do I?

Edited December 17, 2012 by Mr. Grinch

[Nightfall 3,950]

Question-how do I go about changing the title that says "Members" on it above my avatar? You've done it, so how do I?

 

Ha. You must not have been on during the week we all had subscriber perks. That's when it shows up, under "Edit Profile." Soon enough, we'll all get subscriber perks for about 8 days (because of the donation to the hospital), and you can change yours then.

[discorded 234]

@@discorded, I have updated it. Here is the update, and please let me know if anymore changes are necessary, and if the changes are good.

http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/nightfall-starline-r104

 

Your oc looks better, i cant see any more big changes. Equestrian scholar will have the final say on your oc, he might want you to add more detail. 

 

ps the pike like axe your oc has, i think the word your looking for is halberd

Cheese grater. My face. Grievous bodily harm.

Bwaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh.

 

Okay. We had better continue this in a PM.

I will PM you, to help you change your oc's, but there's a couple things i would like to make clear first.

 

When i help you, their WILL need to be some big changes of your oc. I will try to keep your oc as much to your liking as possible, but still make him fit in with the equestria divided setting. We will need to comprimise  

 

This roleplay is based on reality in the sence that, the choses your oc's make will effect weather they live or die. Example: If your oc is taking on 10 equally armed ennemis by himself, he will die. You cant do whatever you want and expect there not to be consequences.   

 

Also you when roleplaying you need to stay in reality, you cant just make things up as you go along. I brought this up because i roleplayed with you once in the past and your oc left the group to die. When my oc confronted you i held a crossbow to your oc. And you wrote that your oc managed to pickpocket the bolts and unload the crossbow without my oc realizing it. Just saying that that's unrealistic because my oc would have realized if he was pointing an unloaded crossbow at you, and if you do something like that in this roleplay Equestrian scholar probably wont tolerate it.  

 

Im not trying to scare you or anything, im just letting you know what you can and cant do when the roleplay starts. Now ill help you with your oc.  

[Damien Cremin 50]

Hmm... No one's posted for a while... Uh.. when is this starting again?

 

Has everyone moved topics or something XD

[MagicalStarRain 599]

Hmm... No one's posted for a while... Uh.. when is this starting again?

 

Has everyone moved topics or something XD

 

It'll probaly start after the holidays. And I don't think everyone moved topics. I think everyone is just waiting to get started.

[Senor Citizen 516]

Your oc looks better, i cant see any more big changes. Equestrian scholar will have the final say on your oc, he might want you to add more detail. 

 

ps the pike like axe your oc has, i think the word your looking for is halberd

I will PM you, to help you change your oc's, but there's a couple things i would like to make clear first.

 

When i help you, their WILL need to be some big changes of your oc. I will try to keep your oc as much to your liking as possible, but still make him fit in with the equestria divided setting. We will need to comprimise  

 

This roleplay is based on reality in the sence that, the choses your oc's make will effect weather they live or die. Example: If your oc is taking on 10 equally armed ennemis by himself, he will die. You cant do whatever you want and expect there not to be consequences.   

 

Also you when roleplaying you need to stay in reality, you cant just make things up as you go along. I brought this up because i roleplayed with you once in the past and your oc left the group to die. When my oc confronted you i held a crossbow to your oc. And you wrote that your oc managed to pickpocket the bolts and unload the crossbow without my oc realizing it. Just saying that that's unrealistic because my oc would have realized if he was pointing an unloaded crossbow at you, and if you do something like that in this roleplay Equestrian scholar probably wont tolerate it.  

 

Im not trying to scare you or anything, im just letting you know what you can and cant do when the roleplay starts. Now ill help you with your oc.  

Hold on, wait... Which RP was that? Could you refer me to it so I can see for myself?

And I thought that was what an RP was, making it up as you went along...