I need opinions on my fanfic please!

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Okay, I've been writing this fanfic, and I think it's pretty good, but I honestly don't know because nopony bothers to review it. I feel obliged to state up front that my character is an alicorn, but please don't judge her immidiately. I have gone to great pains to make sure that she isn't and multiple tests have proved that she is not. Here's the link. http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8481621/1/Loyalty-of-Sand