New Dawn

[Fallen Angel 93]

Hello i was planing to upload it this morning but i had to go to urgent care but u don't want to know about that so here is the new song i have been working on i hope you all enjoy this it is

[Octavia's Cellozoid 1,488]

Hmm... Some criticing in the spoiler

 

 

 

The sounds are kinda random. They don't go together very well. Try to get them to flow instead of compete. Find a nice, flexible beat and tempo, and try to use instruments that compliment each other. You chose nice instruments, but you didn't use them so they blend. Pick a tune, then some little ones that sound nicely with it. Pick a few instruments to work together on the little tunes, and pick 1-3 instruments to work together on the main tune.

 

 

 

Edited October 14, 2012 by Octavia's Cellozoid

[Fallen Angel 93]

in the spoiler

i have tried to do that but my software is limited and i just got some money so i can buy a better one that's why some of it doesn't mix well

[Octavia's Cellozoid 1,488]

Ah, ok. Well, I'm looking forward to when (If you do ) you post something with better software!

 

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