Fluttershy and I, sleeping...

[Byte 50]

This was drawn/made by a friend of mine on deviantART, so all credit for this adorable image goes to her... Here's her deviantART: http://littlecrazyneko411.deviantart.com/

Except for inventing Jay, but you know what i mean, I hope...

 

Just look at us, so adorable! We look so cute, like nothing in the world could seperate us, which is true...

[Solar Wind 595]

Its not bad. But why is the ground where your sleeping darker near the base? Is it because of the shadow from the tree?

Also those hills remind me of Super mario world! All in all its a nice pic! They did a very good job.

[Super Writer 13]

May I offer some criticism?

 

1. Try to darken the lines and either crop it to focus more on the characters or put more details into the background.

 

2. Also, unless you're going for a very specific style of shadow, the individual shades shouldn't have outlines.

 

3. Finally, never place the focus of the picture in the middle, most people find that boring.

[Byte 50]

May I offer some criticism?

 

1. Try to darken the lines and either crop it to focus more on the characters or put more details into the background.

 

2. Also, unless you're going for a very specific style of shadow, the individual shades shouldn't have outlines.

 

3. Finally, never place the focus of the picture in the middle, most people find that boring.

 

Um, I did not draw this... A friend did....

Her name is littlecrazyneko411... You could tell her by commenting on her deviantart...

I only do digital art...