Derpy's Heart

[The Temporal Twins 89]

I came up with this poem when i was listening to a youtube video named, "An Ode to Derpy Hooves".

The Track just inspired me to write this...

This is the second Poem I have Ever Written.

 

 

Whether Derpy Hooves or Ditzy Doo,

every step brings something new

 

You bubbly mare of the pegasi,

how we love to see you fly

 

Flying, flying ever so high,

letting your wing tips graze the sky

 

And from the ground, we watch you soar,

our hearts yearning to join you, evermore

 

But from the kindness, of your heart,

from the sky, you then part

 

And as your hooves touch the ground,

our hearts, once again, feel safe and sound

[Arcus (Silver Lining) Wind 983]

I enjoyed that very much. If this is only your second poem I can hardly wait to see more! I read it while listening to the song and found it to be quit fitting.

Edited November 1, 2012 by Thunder Bolt

[Batbrony 16,055]

Very nice, lovely little tribute to everypony's favorite mail mare! Keep up the great work! I look forward to seeing more poems from you in the future.

[The Temporal Twins 89]

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