writing Forgiven or Forgotten?

[Pan the Fabulous Ferret 2,642]

By the lesser ends of my desires, I wronged you.

Through meager attempts and pity, I fear I have hurt you.

And to such acts I am alone.

For sins unwanted and not needed.

All Anyone would ever want, to never have to fear losing hope.

 

Against the stronger will, and other's meaning.

Standing alone in the pits with my heart at full arrest.

A dead man standing, the victor.

I just want to be forgiven.

Of not only lust which I find.

More so the hate I have given.

Left behind upon words imprinted to others emotions.

I toyed with them endlessly.

I only want to be forgiven.

 

By independent reason, and rhymes of bliss and harmony.

Joys of the beating heart.

All which come to testify.

My judgment bearing down upon me,

your eyes keep careful watch over it all.

Artificial pain and acted sorrow, all my fault.

And I feel the gravity of choices made.

 

Why child...?

 

I wanted to be forgiven, and seek retribution.

All I ever desired was to do no wrong.

Finding myself the center of affliction.

Nothing seems to make sense.

My apologies do not reach out the way they used to.

My words fall flat to the ground, writhing in the pain of the world.

A pain I forced them to endure, as I spoke them into life.

Acted sorrow turns to grief, and the pain, oh so natural.

 

I only remember what I wish, and I have forgotten my will.

Your eyes, of the kindest nature, and my deviations of spite.

Am I lost in your eyes?

I know Ive lied.

Memories that seem to have left.

I have only just been forgotten.

And by the wounds of a broken heart which battle the senses,

the world's problems are diminutive.

 

And smiles resonate through the empty halls.

Ones that I walk through bitterly.

Not knowing.

 

 

 

-David Favret

[RainbowDash_25 5]

Dude that's awesome writing. Keep at it because It will most likely get you somewhere in life. Not a whole lot of people will say that because they don't want to lie to you but I'm speaking the truth.