writing Reality

[Pan the Fabulous Ferret 2,642]

Waking up.

Finding myself in the dark, and the dense

Losing everything to the fire.

The invisible flames that give no heat.

No warmth or comfort.

No feeling, no color or meaning.

 

The fire,

Pointless fire.

Did I ever make it through?

Not so much harsh as the thoughts that make it so.

No more painful then those who give it definition.

The fire, pitiful fire.

Judged so harshly and extinguished.

Who is the real threat?

 

It was over long before it ever began.

Predestined.

One path, and it has followed suit.

My greatest failure, is seeing the fire for what others claimed.

An icon, one of fear.

I feel so sorry for these flames.

 

Watch as they consume,

Engulf as they merely take revenge on those who gave them definition of hate.

The fire was as harmless as the kind voice that spoke it here.

Watch as it dances.

What evil is this?

Do you know your own enemy?

 

Not by bitter reality of harsh words that atone for nothing.

 

 

 

-David Favret

[That One Techpriest You Used To Know 2,286]

This makes... two or three of your poems in one day. Is that what you do for a living?

 

And this deserves the same rewards that the others did. Nice job, bro.

[Pan the Fabulous Ferret 2,642]

This makes... two or three of your poems in one day. Is that what you do for a living?

 

And this deserves the same rewards that the others did. Nice job, bro.

 

 

ummm.. no... Im only 16, so I don't have a legitimate career as of yet, though I do plan on majoring in creative writing and putting myself to work in this field.

 

I just enjoy writing very much... on some days I dont write any poems, while on others I can churn out six poems in an hour... it depepnds on my mood, and how much tea I am consuming <3

[That One Techpriest You Used To Know 2,286]

I see..

 

Get... lucky... drink... lots... of... tea...

 

I can do that.

 

Anyways... um...

 

Keep writing man! And when you get there, see if you can publish these poems... They certainly would go down well. And never give up, man!

[Harmonic Revelations 8,835]

ummm.. no... Im only 16, so I don't have a legitimate career as of yet, though I do plan on majoring in creative writing and putting myself to work in this field.

 

I just enjoy writing very much... on some days I dont write any poems, while on others I can churn out six poems in an hour... it depepnds on my mood, and how much tea I am consuming <3

 

Good, we need more talented authors like you in the world of creative writing. I think your poems are really great. Keep up the good work.