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This is wonderful for a first try, especially since you drew rarity, the hardest to draw. 

Criticism Time c:

It looks like her body is stretching out, you might want to fix that.

Her (right) eye needs more work.

Her head is slightly small while the neck is quite thin.

Lastly, her hooves are a little off.

Just keep on practicing and you'll be one of the best pony artists out there! ^_^ 

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Pretty good for eyeballing and really good comparing to my drawing skills hahahah Few proportions are off but once again, you eyeballed it and drew it in two minutes so I cant complain lol


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It's good for your first time, especially since you drew it in 2 mins, and rarely lifting the pencil. Let's just say no one is good their first time, god knows I wasn't. The main problem you have (and I'm sure you know it) is proportions. If you look at Rarity's body you can see it's too long, this makes Rarity look like a wiener dog. Try using construction lines to help you, it helped me. And if you're not sure how to do it, take a look n deviant art and I'm sure you can find a helpful tut.


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Oh...don't let that get in the way of drawing. Drawing is fun and lets you put your feelings onto a canvas.

Anyone can do it, even you, my friend. c:

I cant draw it is very hard for me to draw i try my best though im embarassed of my art though people laugh it it or something I dont know

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Omg everypony! Thank you so much for your kind feedback and your constructive criticism on my first work! Here's a little secret i forgot to mention, it was all done in pen! I picked it up when my fiance came home and telling my house guests about his day at work! Thank you so much! These have given me the confidence to work on it more AND post more work! :') I knew I made the right decision becoming a brony here!  

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I cant draw it is very hard for me to draw i try my best though im embarassed of my art though people laugh it it or something I dont know

You shouldn't be embarrassed of your artwork. Just because you have a disorder doesn't mean you cannot draw. 

Everyone has their own styles. If you just keep practicing you can get used to it and become better. :)

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I cant draw it is very hard for me to draw i try my best though im embarassed of my art though people laugh it it or something I dont know

 

I personally would love to see your work! Don't be shy or embarrassed my dear, i bet it will have better proportions than Rarity the Dachshund pony! hahahaha!   

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Pretty good sketch  :D I always give the advice to utilize shapes to construct animals/humans and sometimes even objects when sketching. I find this very useful especially with ponies. Recently I constructed my own ears for an AJ cosplay for a gathering within the week and needless to say I have been driving myself crazy with taking them apart and re-shaping the clay. My final product is rewarding and I cannot wait to paint and attach to a headband or hair-clips. Good luck and I look foreword to viewing your art postings. 

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I personally would love to see your work! Don't be shy or embarrassed my dear, i bet it will have better proportions than Rarity the Dachshund pony! hahahaha!   

Well I Will try my best I don't know I may try again tomorrow to draw some ponies, I think I will draw my favorite pony: Rainbow Dash

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Well I Will try my best I don't know I may try again tomorrow to draw some ponies, I think I will draw my favorite pony: Rainbow Dash

Nice cant wait to see your drawing of RD!!!!! shes my favorite character too! I agree with everyone with not worrying about others people opinions. its your art and if your happy with it, then everyone else can be quiet!

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Well I Will try my best I don't know I may try again tomorrow to draw some ponies, I think I will draw my favorite pony: Rainbow Dash

Feel free to PM me your artwork if you're still a little insecure. i would sincerely love to see it! Rainbow Dash is a great pony to have as a favorite, if i didnt connect so much with Rarity i think it would be Rainbow Dash that i would. 


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Nice cant wait to see your drawing of RD!!!!! shes my favorite character too! I agree with everyone with not worrying about others people opinions. its your art and if your happy with it, then everyone else can be quiet!

 

 

Feel free to PM me your artwork if you're still a little insecure. i would sincerely love to see it! Rainbow Dash is a great pony to have as a favorite, if i didnt connect so much with Rarity i think it would be Rainbow Dash that i would. 

Thank you for the support, If I am not busy tomorrow I might try and draw my favorite pony: Rainbow Dash. Thank you for the support, guys.

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Thank you for the support, If I am not busy tomorrow I might try and draw my favorite pony: Rainbow Dash. Thank you for the support, guys.

Anytime, and feel free to PM me it too if you don't want to post it on a board, I would absolutely love to see it! hopefully I can get on tomorrow too

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Anytime, and feel free to PM me it too if you don't want to post it on a board, I would absolutely love to see it! hopefully I can get on tomorrow too

Okay I will PM you the art and the other person if I am online tomorrow but I don't know if I will be on, I have to go to the Doctor tomorrow for a checkup and I might not be on

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The number 1 first time drawing I've ever seen! Maybe if you keep drawing, you will be a great artist. But remember, don't rush. It still looks great from a 2 minute work. Can't wait to see more of your drawings?



The number 1 first time drawing I've ever seen! Maybe if you keep drawing, you will be a great artist. But remember, don't rush. It still looks great from a 2 minute work. Can't wait to see more of your drawings?



The number 1 first time drawing I've ever seen! Maybe if you keep drawing, you will be a great artist. But remember, don't rush. It still looks great from a 2 minute work. Can't wait to see more of your drawings?



^^ Sorry about the triple post. My computer has been really slow in the past few days. Once again, I apologize for it. Thank you very much. :)

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The number 1 first time drawing I've ever seen! Maybe if you keep drawing, you will be a great artist. But remember, don't rush. It still looks great from a 2 minute work. Can't wait to see more of your drawings?

 

The number 1 first time drawing I've ever seen! Maybe if you keep drawing, you will be a great artist. But remember, don't rush. It still looks great from a 2 minute work. Can't wait to see more of your drawings?

 

The number 1 first time drawing I've ever seen! Maybe if you keep drawing, you will be a great artist. But remember, don't rush. It still looks great from a 2 minute work. Can't wait to see more of your drawings?

 

^^ Sorry about the triple post. My computer has been really slow in the past few days. Once again, I apologize for it. Thank you very much. :)

Oh i thought you just like it that much hahah jk jk but it's perfectly fine darling Thanks for the feedback! Much love is felt!

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Very nice drawing! I just noticed, I've NEVER drawn Rarity. I think it's the mane that scares me. Anyways, this is way better than my first drawing, by far. Even better that it's with pen. I don't know how I would be able to draw without layers to work with. I think all suggestions have already been said. Just keep drawing and you'll become great in no time! 

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Aww the divine Rarity, my second pony crush. Good drawing, definetly try using a mechanical pencil next time though, a pen isn't the best illustration tool (mechancial pencils are best IMO though others may say otherwise). Cute pic, and keep up the good work. :)


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Aww the divine Rarity, my second pony crush. Good drawing, definetly try using a mechanical pencil next time though, a pen isn't the best illustration tool (mechancial pencils are best IMO though others may say otherwise). Cute pic, and keep up the good work. :)

 

Oh who is your first pony crush ;) lol yea I would have but I literally had just moved from another state and didn't know where anything was except this one pen. And when inspiration hits, you just go with it my friend lol


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