Skar 324 January 27, 2012 Share January 27, 2012 Sig made by Yours Truly. Want one of your own? PM Me! I've made some pretty awesome backgrounds. Check em' out! http://deviantdalton.deviantart.com/ Check it out my first song! http://mlpforums.com...887#entry453887 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Little Miss Fluttershy 678 January 27, 2012 Share January 27, 2012 I approve! Nice drawing skar! Signature made by Cloud Chaser. Ask her to make you one! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ScottishUnicorn 284 January 27, 2012 Share January 27, 2012 The eyes are too close, the nose nub is too thick, the wings have no structure, the legs are too long. Reference this for some help on getting better with structure. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skar 324 January 27, 2012 Author Share January 27, 2012 The eyes are too close, the nose nub is too thick, the wings have no structure, the legs are too long. Reference this for some help on getting better with structure. Thanks. Back to the drawing board. Sig made by Yours Truly. Want one of your own? PM Me! I've made some pretty awesome backgrounds. Check em' out! http://deviantdalton.deviantart.com/ Check it out my first song! http://mlpforums.com...887#entry453887 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ron Jeremy 2,032 January 27, 2012 Share January 27, 2012 Agreeing with the criticisms people have mentioned before, I will say that it looks nice. The wings look less like pegasus wings and more like Zapdos wings, though. Other than that, it looks nice. Sorry if my post seems useless. I wanted to comment, but don't know enough about drawing to properly criticize. :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skar 324 January 27, 2012 Author Share January 27, 2012 Agreeing with the criticisms people have mentioned before, I will say that it looks nice. The wings look less like pegasus wings and more like Zapdos wings, though. Other than that, it looks nice. Sorry if my post seems useless. I wanted to comment, but don't know enough about drawing to properly criticize. :( Crap, they do don't they. Too much Pokemon then -.- Sig made by Yours Truly. Want one of your own? PM Me! I've made some pretty awesome backgrounds. Check em' out! http://deviantdalton.deviantart.com/ Check it out my first song! http://mlpforums.com...887#entry453887 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EarlofPudding 11 January 27, 2012 Share January 27, 2012 Needs moar Rarity. Work in progres... >.> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
5guysburgersnfries 216 January 27, 2012 Share January 27, 2012 It's good but, the eyes are WAY too close together and the lines aren't very consistent. When doing lineart try and make the basic outline the same size and then the smaller details like eyelashes and lines in the hair also the snout need to be a little bit thinner. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Robojot 152 January 27, 2012 Share January 27, 2012 looking nice to be a drawing but i think the pony anatomy is a bit off ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ezynell 2,037 January 28, 2012 Share January 28, 2012 It's nice, but the head-body ratio is a bit off GAK Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MSVPNYin2D 4 January 28, 2012 Share January 28, 2012 The eyes are too close, the nose nub is too thick, the wings have no structure, the legs are too long. Reference this for some help on getting better with structure. I came across this before but I have a horrible time trying to draw ponies. I am going to attempt again Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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