fan fiction Finding Rainbow Dash (My Fanfic)

[iRilo 2]

Finding RainbowDashMade by iRilo

“Rainbow Dash!”, called out Twilight Sparkle. “He-he, maybe she’s under this string!”, said Pinkie. “My hooves!”, said Rarity. “Let me clean your hooves, Rarity,” said Spike. Rainbow Dash was missing, and no one could find her. Fluttershy was in Cloudsdale with her friends from when she was little. Rainbow Dash came too, but, surprisingly, she was the one that was shy and crashed somewhere in the Everfree Forest. Fluttershy didn’t notice, though. “Does somepony need an extra hoof?” asked Apple Jack, bravely. “Oh, yes, we most certainly do!” said Twilight. Apple Jack got rope ready and told the girls to step back. The ponies obeyed the almighty pony. “Alright, here goes nothin’!” said Apple Jack. She swung her rope and it landed on a stiff cloud from Cloudsdale. She pulled herself up and searched for Fluttershy.

 

“Fluttershy! Fluuuuttershy!” called Apple Jack. “Have you seen a shy girl, pink hair, yellow body?” asked Apple Jack to numerous people she’s never seen before.

[Finesthour 7,287]

Is... this it?

[Nah 3,182]

MOAR! Wait is this whole story? wow.

[iRilo 2]

No, this isn't the whole story. I was actually looking for ideas. Like where RD would be. If she was playing a game such as hide and seek, and then finding her. And maybe a few dramatic pauses.

 

Anyone else?

[Ninja Derpy 343]

She is dead. How about that?

[iRilo 2]

She is dead. How about that?

 

Sure .

[Zero000 435]

Looks interesting! *bookmark*

[iRilo 2]

Looks interesting! *bookmark*

 

Thanks! I worked real hard on it!