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[ActFast231 432]

This doesn't have color for the simple manner in that I cant color well. But the drawing aspect I handle just fine. Mostly. I hope. Anyway, here you are.

[Pixel Mouse 84]

Nice! I think maybe the eyes could be almost.... Maybe even more simplistic? It kinda looks like theyre have glasses/goggles on. I dunno, I personally suck a drawing so idk.

 

Anyway, it's preatty awesome. It looks like kind of a dramatic moment. What was your inspiration?

[ActFast231 432]

Nice! I think maybe the eyes could be almost.... Maybe even more simplistic? It kinda looks like theyre have glasses/goggles on. I dunno, I personally suck a drawing so idk.

 

Anyway, it's preatty awesome. It looks like kind of a dramatic moment. What was your inspiration?

Yeah, I kind of been watching and reading a ton of corny romance and bittersweet work, so I decided to try my hand at it. And I think you are right.

[Mightymags 1,053]

It's a really touching drawing and you captured the moment well. The only suggestion I would have is to make the lines a little softer and curvier. You have the curves but they're too hard if that makes sense...

[푸딩군 48]

it is great, it captures very well the dramatic feeling

i am agree with the user over, maybe if you make the lines softer it with look even better ^^

[Rawzy 1,302]

Sooooo cuute!!!!