dash360 102 May 2, 2013 Share May 2, 2013 Hello every pony! I just finished this pony and would like some comments on what i could do to become a better artist. And would like some ideas for names. thank you for your time. 3 Im just one hell of a butler. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Friendship_Cannon 1,676 May 2, 2013 Share May 2, 2013 I think this is great, especially if you just started drawing ponies. There might be a few things to improve.... Mainly that the eyes are a bit small, and just minor things about a few proportions, practice makes perfect. Is that your OC, btw? If so, I would like to see it coloured, and what is her cutie mark? Signature made by the amazing ~Harmonic Dreams~ I always pictured you as a cross between Demoman and Pinkie Pie for some reason. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NightOwl 912 May 2, 2013 Share May 2, 2013 Really nice drawing especially if it's your first attempt I just started drawing myself. Listen to what Friendship_Cannon said and work on proportions. Keep on practicing and you'll get better . Signature by me avatar by Azura. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SparklingSwirls 21,400 May 2, 2013 Share May 2, 2013 That's a really good drawing! I do agree that some of the proportions are a little off, though. As NightOwl said, practicing will help you get better ֍֎֍֎ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dash360 102 May 2, 2013 Author Share May 2, 2013 thats actually my second attempt, i think i did a better job on the first one i did. I followed a tutorial for the first one, this one i just winged it. Her cutie is supposed to be a cloud i kind of failed at it though. And what is OC? Im just one hell of a butler. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quilava 1,290 May 2, 2013 Share May 2, 2013 thats actually my second attempt, i think i did a better job on the first one i did. I followed a tutorial for the first one, this one i just winged it. Her cutie is supposed to be a cloud i kind of failed at it though. And what is OC? OC stands for Original Character. They're basically unique characters that are created by people in the fandom. Here, they are used for art as well as the Role Playing subforums. If I could give some advice, I'd suggest you to use lighter pencil strokes as well. They can help you to get much cleaner curves/lines. And maybe get a sketch book/diary, paper quality sometimes makes a difference 1 ^~Signature by Me~^ ~^Click on the Image above for already made signatures/graphics^~ Request A Signature | Have a Question? | Signature Tips/Tricks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dash360 102 May 4, 2013 Author Share May 4, 2013 (edited) Hey i listened to your and tried to fix the things you ponys suggested, so again what do think? I think i did better this time. So, please any feedback is appreciated, thanks. This is an OC btw, I dont know what i will do for a cutie mark or name yet Edited May 4, 2013 by dash360 1 Im just one hell of a butler. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SparklingSwirls 21,400 May 4, 2013 Share May 4, 2013 Woah, I think that's great I can tell that you practiced - the proportions, especially the legs in relation to the body, do look a lot better. ֍֎֍֎ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zygen 6,066 May 4, 2013 Share May 4, 2013 I think overall you did a pretty good job honestly. I mean I think there's a couple minor issues here and there, but overall it's good. However I can't offer much feedback on the name for the Oc seeing as it kinda looks rainbow dash like without color from what I can tell. The color and cutie mark really make it stand out. So I'd suggest trying to learn to do that aswell. Good job though! Thanks to Gone Airbourne for the awesome sig! My Oc's, Ponysona, Bella Vocal Covers Blog, MLP Covers Thread Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dash360 102 May 4, 2013 Author Share May 4, 2013 I still got no i dea for the cutie mark or name but i did color her. I am not the best on a computer so its kinda sloppy. Im just one hell of a butler. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nobody Special 210 May 4, 2013 Share May 4, 2013 What I did to my first OC was I just kept drawing it sporting different poses and styles until I found something I absolutely loved. I am not creative so... Battlefield Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Starlight~ 764 May 4, 2013 Share May 4, 2013 Woah I really like your style, I think this pony is a great job! As @Zygen said there are a few little mistakes, here they are so you can learn from them! But anyways great work and I would love to see more in the future! Hush hush, Starlights asleep, hush hush, through her telescope she weeps, hush, hush, as she hunts for mars, hush, hush, and head for stars! Starlight Request shop My page _________________________________________________________________________________ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dash360 102 May 5, 2013 Author Share May 5, 2013 (edited) Woah I really like your style, I think this pony is a great job! As @Zygen said there are a few little mistakes, here they are so you can learn from them! Check out the other drawings i posted on here i think i fixed the problems, please tell me if tthere are spots that still need to work on i just finished this stallion.Tell me want you think Im am still trying to get this computer stuff down. Edited May 5, 2013 by dash360 Im just one hell of a butler. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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