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Jack then turned to Charles.

"No idea what I'll do to celebrate," he responded, "any ideas?" After all of the celebration, Jack, his crew, and his friends headed to the garage area to pack up, clean up, and leave the track. However, an angry driver in a blue firesuit came up to Jack and confronted him.

"Mmmhmmfmfmgfmmgfmfmfmf," the driver, Jacob Stone, shouted at him, his voice muffled by his helmet.

"Wait, what?" Jack responded, "Take off your helmet. I can't hear a word you said."

The driver took off his helmet, and spoke.

"Jack, you little bastard," he shouted, "You didn't deserve a goddamn bit of that win with the way you dumped me into the wall."

"Jacob," Jack responded, "You were two laps down, and you didn't even bother giving me that inside line. I had no choice."

"Jack, remember, it's the overtaker's responsibility to make sure the pass is clean, regardless of what lap he is on. Quit being an idiot. Of course, that'll be hard for you to do so long as you're dating her." Jacob motions to Catherine. "Your IQ will hit rock bottom in no time."

Jack did not take Jacob's comment so lightly, and went into all-out rage, something he rarely did.

"What did you just fucking say about her?" Jack shouted, raising his fist. He was about to sock Jacob right in the nose, but he felt an unusually strong, yet soft hand restrain him.

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While Colette corralled the disagreeables out the door, Bowen merely stood to the side. He would have helped, but he was slightly shocked.

 

Clearing his throat after Colette exited her home and made for his car, Bowen followed her, silently starting it up. Well, this was awkward.

 

 

 

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Logan raised an eyebrow as Jacob confronted Jack. It looked like it was about to come to blows, in which case it could possibly be Logan's duty to break it up.. Despite being out of his jurisdiction area. Luckily, the fight was averted before it went anywhere, so far.

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Cicada shrugged. "Damned if I know. Anyway, I'll help you make dinner, if you like. You don't have to make it vegetarian; I and all the other changelings can and do eat meat." She thought to herself that Shawn probably had met some girl... but if that was the case, then why all the secrecy?


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Diliges stood quietly behind Clare as she typed, hands folded over his waist. When she asked if he had a message to relay, he shrugged and began to dictate, "Well... Yeah. I'm a captain in the military. Cicada's the second in command to our queen, and by extension, my commander. Not really sure what else to say."


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Clare grinned. "Yes, that should be sufficient." She finished her message.

 

>>Hiya!

 

This is Sunday Girl. Thanks for believing me and yeah, that's all true!

 

Here's a message straight from the changeling's mouth. He's a captain in the military, and Cicada is his commander. She's second in command to Queen Chrysalis.

 

Hope that helps. Message me back!

 

Sunday Girl.<<

 

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Charles was going to step in looking at the two and then he turn to Jacob. "Listen here Jacob we don't want any trouble here, so take it like a man and go because like Jack say it a accident ok. Also if the Nascar officials see this and then it will be trouble for you Jacob."

Then Charles turn to Jack while thinking what to do and then he got a ideal. "Well I Can Take the GIrls to Shopping in San Diego while you guys celebrated or relaxed and I can pay for there clothing too."

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Jack then turned to Charles.

"No idea what I'll do to celebrate," he responded, "any ideas?" After all of the celebration, Jack, his crew, and his friends headed to the garage area to pack up, clean up, and leave the track. However, an angry driver in a blue firesuit came up to Jack and confronted him.

"Mmmhmmfmfmgfmmgfmfmfmf," the driver, Jacob Stone, shouted at him, his voice muffled by his helmet.

"Wait, what?" Jack responded, "Take off your helmet. I can't hear a word you said."

The driver took off his helmet, and spoke.

"Jack, you little bastard," he shouted, "You didn't deserve a goddamn bit of that win with the way you dumped me into the wall."

"Jacob," Jack responded, "You were two laps down, and you didn't even bother giving me that inside line. I had no choice."

"Jack, remember, it's the overtaker's responsibility to make sure the pass is clean, regardless of what lap he is on. Quit being an idiot. Of course, that'll be hard for you to do so long as you're dating her." Jacob motions to Catherine. "Your IQ will hit rock bottom in no time."

Jack did not take Jacob's comment so lightly, and went into all-out rage, something he rarely did.

"What did you just fucking say about her?" Jack shouted, raising his fist. He was about to sock Jacob right in the nose, but he felt an unusually strong, yet soft hand restrain him.

((Since I feel like this should be done a certain way, I'll go against what I told you earlier and intervene))

 

Catherine put her hand on Jack's and pulled his fist down gently. "In any other situation, I would tell you to do it, but just let it go this time. If it helps, just remember who has a girlfriend who sleeps in the bed with him."


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"Yeah... One I didn't ask her to throw..." Colette answered as she stormed past Chloe, head down as she went back to Bowen's car. "She needs to stop!" she hissed as she climbed back into Bowen's car. Rainbow Dash was out of control, and Colette needed to do something about it! Colette sighed then looked over to the Pegasus. "Come on, Rachel.... We'll talk a little once we get to the school." Colette was still very angry, as was apparent in her voice, but she didn't want to give away Rainbow's identity, not yet realizing that she already did...

 

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"Sure, why not??" Stephen said as he waved Cicada over. "Aren't most animals sentient in Equestria?? Shawn told me that once, but I didn't really believe him..."

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"Hey, I didn't set this up!" Rainbow protested with a great sense of chill as she led the way out the driveway. "I just put your address on the internet, and bronies started thinkin' it was a free invitation to show up. I'm responsible. After the fifth guy, I decided it made sense to get some drinks and invest in a bouncer. You know, for security reasons."

She eyed the other occupants of the car. "S'up, everypony. No need to get up or anything. I'm off the record for today. Keepin' it relaxed, you know."

 

(gimme' a list of who's in the car again?)

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"Oh!" Fluttershy looked with some pleasure at the sweet-looking cafe. "That's so nice. How did you know?"
Shawn certainly was polite so far. Flutterhsy knew that ponies could easily play all sorts of facades for the wrong sorts of reasons--despite her lack of skill at dealing with social situations, she was scarcely ignorant or inexperienced. But--ach! Fluttershy mentally punished herself. How could she keep being so suspicious? Shawn had been nothing but nice to her. "Maybe Bronies were alright," she murmured to herself.


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(It's only Colette and Bowen in his car. Johnny and Chloe drove separately (I'm pretty sure)

 

Bowen nearly choked. She put her address. On the internet. That was just asking for trouble. Anyway, on to the irrational theorist. This girl, 'Rachel', looked exactly how he would imagine a human Rainbow would. The hair, the color scheme. Heck, even her eyes! And if Colette was serious when she called her 'Rainbow Dash'... Could 'Rachel' be the pony who appeared in Racine? Well, only one way to really find out. Ask, "So, Rachel, Colette tells me a you're a pegasister. I'm going to assume that's correct, considering the cosplay."

 

OK, maybe not be to straight up about it.


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Jack heard Charles in the background, presumably getting ready to break up the potential fight, but he felt Catherine's hand grab his fist right as he was going to swing it at Jacob.

"Bet it won't be years till that sunavabitch gets laid," he responded to Catherine. "Making fun of me is one thing, Jacob, but when you bring up my friends or family, that's a different story. You're not getting off this easily with me, you little punk."

With that, Jacob was escorted out of the 56's garage by Jacob's crew chief.

"Kid, don't let him under your skin," Ray said to him, "You already proved your manhood by beating him on the track today."

"Thanks, Ray," Jack responded, "I'll be ready to kick his ass at Road America next week. And Charles, I think Rarity and Applejack are taken care of with the clothing situation. AJ isn't much a fashionista, but Rarity might want an extra outfit or two. And I've made arrangements with the team so that I can spend the whole week in Wisconsin. So... anyone up for dinner? It's on me tonight."


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"Well ok, also yea I will join you guys for dinner since I am hungry anyway and Yea I know Rarity want to shop too but I will take her to the store when we in Wisconsin." Charles saying as he was looking around then walking to his car as he took a picture out. Then it was showing his older brother and his dog while he smiles. Then he put it back in his pocket and then combing his hair too.

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((It's just Colette and Bowen in his car, Shadow's character Chloe and Mellon's Johnny are riding in their own cars-- Ditto to what 00Pony said!))

 

"You WHAT?!" Colette said as she looked to Rainbow, eyes wide. "Rainbow, why did you do that?! You should NEVER post personal information on the internet!" Colette then pulled out her phone and shoved it into Rainbow Dash once she got into the backseat. "Take it off. Now." she then turned around, huffed and shook her head. "Rainbow, the internet can be a really dangerous place! What if someone came in and started taking alla my shit, or worse!" Turning back around, once again forgetting that she had not informed Bowen that Rainbow Dash was really in his car. "Rainbow Dash, you really need to stop! There aren't too many people who'll put up with your antics before they kick you out!"

 

Colette then placed an elbow on the opened window, putting her forehead in her palm. "Are you this out of control back in Equestria??" Colette fell silent before looking over to Bowen, only now realizing what she had just said.. Groaning, she shook her head a little. "In case you're wondering, yes, I'm a Pony Finder, and as crazy as it sounds, that is indeed Rainbow Dash. Don't tell the others, okay??"

 

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"I've been there once or twice," Shawn answered, "They have some really good food and coffee there. Cakes and muffins, too!" he said before he noticed Fluttershy's hesitation, muttering something under her breath. "Come on, I won't bite!" Shawn said, holding out a hand. "We'll search for your friends over a meal and coffee."

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Bowen merely shrugged, "Well.. I had been going to take that as a major joke but... I can't entirely deny the fact that she does look, and sound, convincing."

 

He clears his throat, putting his escort into reverse, Bowen began to back out of the drive, "I'll keep this a secret, if that's what you want."

He drums his fingers against the steering wheel as he made the way down towards the school, "I'm assuming Colette gave you the name 'Rachel'?" He asks, glancing back at Rainbow through the rear view, taking it as an excuse to make sure the others were in tow.


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"Do not judge, or you too will be judged. For in the same way you judge others, you will be judged, and with the measure you use, it will be measured to you." -- Matthew 7:1

"If you can't fly then run, if you can't run then walk, if you can't walk then crawl, but whatever you do you have to keep moving forward." -- Martin Luther King Jr.

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"Uh...heh. Yeah, yeah." Rainbow's face was turning a red, and not a nice red like feathering Fluttershy's either. When Rainbow turned red it liked like she'd been through a pizza oven. "It'll..just a part of layin' low..."

Or not... Rainbow quickly got on her tumblr and scrubbed the entire post where she'd mentioned the address she was staying at. What had she been talking about? Oh yeah, something about...coffee beans, and people offering to put her up. Anyway...Rainbow scrolled through a few of the comments, bronies saying they were going to show up to meet her...one of them was a link. She followed it.

oooh-ooh. How did her address end up here? Rainbow glanced up quickly and stifled any sign of what was going on, tapping away at the phone as if everything was fine. Okay, so message this guy, see where he sent the address...oh ponyfeathers.

"So, Bowie, right? Like the knife? That's kind of awesome."

 

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"Oh." Fluttershy hesitated with her mouth open at the sight of Shawn's hand extended. Carefully, she fit her smaller hand into his grip and let him lead her to the cafe.

There, she scanned the menu for anything that looked like a carnation salad--it had been a long time since Fluttershy had had any flowers, and she was open there was something she could eat at the moment that would at least remind her of the taste. Even hay fries. It was amazing to Fluttershy that she could miss hay fries. She'd hated hay fries, especially that summer when she spent all her time around Rainbow Dash. 

She settled on a cranberry-walnut salad, and, since there were no fries, a muffin and some coffee.


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Bowen smiled a little when he caught her face turning red. Admittedly, it was a little cute. Of course it was cute. She was a pony turned human. Even if it was unflattering.

Returning his eyes to the road, Bowen chuckled, shaking his head slightly, "Close. It's actually Bowen. Like.. I can't really think of an example you'd know. But yeah, anyway. How long've you been in our world?"

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"If you can't fly then run, if you can't run then walk, if you can't walk then crawl, but whatever you do you have to keep moving forward." -- Martin Luther King Jr.

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"Too long and yet not long enough," Rainbow grumbled. At least she had a phone; while she was working on her existing problem, she sent a couple message to the plushie guys, and the unauthorized trading card dude, and a couple others.

But still--Rainbow peeked around her van seat. Colette still looked mad. Getting yelled at like that in front of a bunch of strangers was--not cool. That was the best description Rainbow could find for it. Her blood thus refused to settle down, and she squirmed back into her seat, for once, trying not to make a nuisance of herself. 


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"Sure, why not??" Stephen said as he waved Cicada over. "Aren't most animals sentient in Equestria?? Shawn told me that once, but I didn't really believe him..."

"Well, the ones in Equestria are," Cicada replied. "There are animals who live around the Hive who aren't, tho. And some in the Everfree Forest. But the ones that live around the ponies are. I expect that's one of the reasons why they think we changelings are monsters. Cuz we eat other animals, but honestly, the ones we eat are definitely not sentinent. They're like the ones in your world."

 


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"Wow..." Blaze said, in anstonishment, even though he knew half the stuff. Your life seems perfect, except for the fan fictions..." And Blaze shivered. "They have you all doing crazy things." and he smiled. "I've only read several. One of them was really short." And then he recalled the rainbow.

"I hope you know, if Rainbow Dash didn't to that Sonic Rainboom that day, it kinda seems like you and your friends would have totally different lives..."


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Colette hoped against hope her address didn't get anywhere else… "No more parties until the others get here. God knows how many weirdos saw your post!" Colette remained silent for the remainder of the ride back to school. If only Bowen knew just how much of a handful Rainbow was! At least she was with her now, so there wasn't too much mischief she could get into now…

 

Once Bowen pulled into the school's parking lot, Colette stepped out of the escort, heading to the music room. "Follow me, Rainbow!" She said as she did so.

 

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Shawn's heart skipped a beat as Fluttershy took his hand, a smile spread across his face as he led her to the cafe.

 

He waited for Fluttershy to order before emulating her and ordering a blueberry and almond salad and small cup of spiced coffee. No sense in putting her off by eating meat in front of her! "Have the people who found you tried to get in contact with anyone else who found a Pony??"

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Johnny drove back to the school too, deciding to check out this shindig everyone's been talking about. With this Rachel girl around, it's bound to be...interesting. Plus, he could jam with some of the other musicians there. He parked next to Bowen and stayed with the group.

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"Wow..." Blaze said, in anstonishment, even though he knew half the stuff. Your life seems perfect, except for the fan fictions..." And Blaze shivered. "They have you all doing crazy things." and he smiled. "I've only read several. One of them was really short." And then he recalled the rainbow.

"I hope you know, if Rainbow Dash didn't to that Sonic Rainboom that day, it kinda seems like you and your friends would have totally different lives..."

 

"Yeah," Pinkie said. "It doesn't bear thinking about." She then changed tack suddenly. "You know," she commented, "You remind me a bit of Cranky Doodle Donkey. He was sad and grumpy, til I found out that his one true love was living in Ponyville. Then he was happy. I wonder if there is anything I can do to make you happy?"

 


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((Gonna skip ahead a little bit!))

 

"Any Pony who's here is not gonna like hearing that…" within minutes, dinner was finished, and Stephen was serving. "Okay, what was happening between the Changelings and Ponies, and what led up to guys being ported here?? " Stephen asked. "I'm sure I won't find anything you tell me on any Pony source, and if I did, it'd be in the Ponies' favor."

 

((We gotta get more action and dialogue between these two!))

 

@, @,

 

((Gonna bring Connor and Co. back in-- if anyone wants to know where they are, they're in the music room!))

 

Connor and Zach were now in the music room, joined by Eric their drummer, tuning their instruments and adjusting their amps. The mics were set and ready to go, all that was missing now was Colette… "Where is she??" Connor said, wondering aloud.

 

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((You both can post whatever Dr. Clark and Chloe are doing to prepare for the rally))

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Connor and Zach were now in the music room, joined by Eric their drummer, tuning their instruments and adjusting their amps. The mics were set and ready to go, all that was missing now was Colette… "Where is she??" Connor said, wondering aloud.
 Dennis returned to the music room but not all the people he had seen before where there. Curious about their activities he knocked the door and asked. "Sorry... i don't mean to interrupt... i was here before and i was kind of interested at what you were doing. What are you guys preparing for here?"
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Rainbow shot a finger-gun at Bowen and trotted off after Colette, peeking around her at the school. So this was what a human high school liked. It looked a little bit like the set of Equestria Girls, but there were no statues. That was the biggest difference, frankly. Right up there next to the lack of heart shapes.

 

"Where we goin'?"

 

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"Oh, nnno." Fluttershy nibbled on her salad; she'd eaten out in the human world before, but it still made her a little self-conscious. As if she might break some rule. She especially didn't like being near where other humans were eating meat, but she tried not to stare. Staring was rude no matter what you were.

"We didn't know there WERE any others. I mean, oh, I was worried my friends had ended up here like me...do--do you think they are?"

Fluttershy wanted to ask about him, to be nice, since he'd done little but talk about her. But at the same time, she didn't want to make it seem like they were on--urp!


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