OC Sketch: Aegis Dare

[EcstaticWind 572]

A sketch of my OC, Aegis Dare.

 

His manestyle is different from his picture on the OC page. Also, I personally don't think it's that good, but it'd be nice to get others' opinions.

 

Please be polite, though.

 

Edit: Changed position of his foreleg slightly and added colour to his Cutie Mark

Edited June 3, 2013 by Windbreaker

[AskPortalPonies 24]

I think it's pretty good, I think the right fore-hoof could be attached to the body a bit further up/left to make it seem more in place but aside from that not bad