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"well my name would be isaac clarke. CEC engineer and eraser of those who need erasing."

isaac made his helmet fold down into his RIG again and now looked straight into the other pony's eyes.

"but you may also know me by my other boring personality, repsol rave."

when the name left isaac's lips he shuddered in disgust.

"and who may you and your little toy knife be?" 

at this, his wide grin appeared again.


 

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"Thats none of you concern" Equinox said as his left eye turned purple. "My name is Deranged and this guy here holding the katana is Equinox" Deranged said as Equinox got off him. "Damn it Deranged...stay quiet and you" Equinox looked at Issac. "Also this knife is a katana and its name is Medusa"


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"well well well, looks like you have some issues yourself mister equinox. or was it deranged?"

isaac laughed a bit at the pony.

"you know, my boring half was living pretty nicely here before you came in and destroyed everypony."

isaac looked around a bit, there was pretty much blood everywhere.

"guess i got you ponies to thank for letting me out again, much obliged."


 

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"Someone help me" A mare said causing Equinoxes attention to go over to the mare. "Miss are you alright" Equinox said as he went over to the seriously injured mare. "Great...I barely know how to do healing magic without passing out...but she really injured" Equinox thought as his horn glowed


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Fallen gritted her teeth. Her grip was loosening, and Broken was climbing her way up. Whenever she was forced or made to stop killing, was her weak spot. it was the only way Broken was able to regain control.

"Keep talking. You're always at least somewhat talkative, even when you're insane and murderous, which is also always.. You should keep talking.  Keep. Talking." Broken Cloud growled. 

"No. NO!" Fallen screeched out loud in response.

"Yes."

Broken Cloud got enough control to speak. Halfway back. Her eyes and coat became a shade lighter, her streaks became a vivid green in the process of trying to regain authority. Her body trembled with the war raging inside.

"I-If I go back to th-that... Pin me down. Make me stop killing and make it so I can't move." She said to the stallion, just before Fallen shrieked with fury and took over again.

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Fallen gritted her teeth. Her grip was loosening, and Broken was climbing her way up. Whenever she was forced or made to stop killing, was her weak spot. it was the only way Broken was able to regain control.

"Keep talking. You're always at least somewhat talkative, even when you're insane and murderous, which is also always.. You should keep talking. Keep. Talking." Broken Cloud growled.

"No. NO!" Fallen screeched out loud in response.

"Yes."

Broken Cloud got enough control to speak. Halfway back. Her eyes and coat became a shade lighter, her streaks became a vivid green in the process of trying to regain authority. Her body trembled with the war raging inside.

"I-If I go back to th-that... Pin me down. Make me stop killing and make it so I can't move." She said to the stallion, just before Fallen shrieked with fury and took over again.

Shimmers was completley unaffected by any of this and merely listing to what she was saying.

*Oh look. She practically wants you over her!*

"Do shut up."

*Pff you're no fun. I was sinply adding a little humor to keep you sane*

"I don't laugh anymore." Shimmers said to himself as he shoulder barged the mare over and pinned all four hooves down.


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Ooc: Argh! Stop posting so quickly! O.o

 

Jay simply smiled sadly at the other ponies. "You can't kill me, so don't even try," she replied. "My other half Jinx would kill you even before you had a chance."

 

The unicorn's eyes shrank to pinpricks and turned bright red. "That's right," Jinx said, with a smirk. "Altho, I much prefer not to kill if I have to. I much prefer to use torture and leave the victim alive, broken and in agony."

 

She indicated the cloak she wore, with all the cutie marks sewn to it.

 

"Each one of these marks was taken from the flank of a pony I tortured."


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"I have to admit, even I find that disgusting."

AURGH, thought Comet as she tried to regain control.

"How could you do that? Why not just kill them? I prefer quantity over quality!"

Comet's whole appearance seemed to flicker from her own to Astral's. Her voice sounded incredibly pained.

"AAARGH!"


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Jinx snickered, then replied. "My dear, I prefer quality over quantity, by far. I find it much more enjoyable, and far more satisfying. Plus, as a bonus, it ensures that ponies fear me more. A dead pony cannot remember our meeting with the utmost terror and dread."


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Fallen screamed with fury and thrashed, trying to break free, but to no avail. After a few moments, Broken was able to completely return. Her colors changed back, and she stopped moving. 

"Well done, Broken Cloud. I'll stay here for now. I'll be back out soon."

Broken nearly sighed with relief and looked around. Blood was thick almost everywhere. The colt Fallen had thrown the broken sword with was crying and bleeding. She looked away and up at the stallion.

"...Thank you. The longer she is unable to kill, the weaker she gets, and the easier it is for me to regain control. That and if someone attacks her. By she I mean my dark persona, Fallen."

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Fallen screamed with fury and thrashed, trying to break free, but to no avail. After a few moments, Broken was able to completely return. Her colors changed back, and she stopped moving.

"Well done, Broken Cloud. I'll stay here for now. I'll be back out soon."

Broken nearly sighed with relief and looked around. Blood was thick almost everywhere. The colt Fallen had thrown the broken sword with was crying and bleeding. She looked away and up at the stallion.

"...Thank you. The longer she is unable to kill, the weaker she gets, and the easier it is for me to regain control. That and if someone attacks her. By she I mean my dark persona, Fallen."

Shimmers pulled himself up and then helped cloud. "It was not a problem. Such distractions can be quite a hassle to remove."

*Aww. And for a moment I thought you could get a mare without my assistance!*

Shimmers pursed his lips to avoid talking to it.

*And now you try ti drown me in silence. Tisk tisk. I still nee my time.*

"You'll have your time as schedueld. But I would reccomend you remain quiet untill such time."


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Broken tilted her head at the stallion's answer, her face expressionless.

"I'm guessing you have a dark personality as well? That makes a lot of us. The name's Broken Cloud. Well, I should probably go see if Deranged and Mind Trick are still wreaking havoc all over Invermare. If you're living in Invermare, I'll probably see you around."

She lifted into the air and looked around for Deranged and Mind Trick. She saw them, but they looked like Equinox and Mind Trick's other side. she didn't feel like flying anymore, so she landed and started walking in their direction.

((You should probably follow xP otherwise they'll have to wait for you to find them. We need everypony there so the plot can really get going.))

((DH, mind if I put into detail what happens when all the ponies are there? for the Sombra thing?))

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((Yeah that might be good to do))

 

Equinox turned to see Broken walking up to him and Mind Trick. "Great...please tell me you normal and not crazy" Equinox asked for he left Issac and wasn't paying attention to him. "We have another pony thats like us also...tried to shoot me with some type of plasma also" Equinox said


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Broken tilted her head at the stallion's answer, her face expressionless.

"I'm guessing you have a dark personality as well? That makes a lot of us. The name's Broken Cloud. Well, I should probably go see if Deranged and Mind Trick are still wreaking havoc all over Invermare. If you're living in Invermare, I'll probably see you around."

She lifted into the air and looked around for Deranged and Mind Trick. She saw them, but they looked like Equinox and Mind Trick's other side. she didn't feel like flying anymore, so she landed and started walking in their direction.

((You should probably follow xP otherwise they'll have to wait for you to find them. We need everypony there so the plot can really get going.))

((DH, mind if I put into detail what happens when all the ponies are there? for the Sombra thing?))

*Did the mare just say something about others? I think that would be enlightening! Si many ponies will die! So many ponies to cook!*

"No. Only when I allow you. We made a deal remember?"

*Deal schmeal! I just want you to go with her!*

"Very well."

Shimmers stood there for a minute to talk to himself before clearing his throat and leaving the scene. He followed shorrtly behing the mare untill je reached the so called ponies. "I believe we're here." He said to the voice.

*Mmm. Yes. How about you do a little talking?*

"You know I don't do that."

*Why not? Because you don't want ponies to see your shiny teeth? Afraid they'll run? Look just hand me the wheel!* The voice soon took controll and shimmers found himself briskly trotting over and bowing. "Fillies, Gentlecolts. Your chef has arrived." He flashed his teeth in a grin.


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Jinx laughed, scornfully. "If you're the chef, then I'm the tailor. There's gotta be room for a few more cutie marks on my cloak."

 

Jay wrestled for control and eventually got it. "I don't know how this happened, having an evil personality in my head. If you know how, please tell me and also if there's help."


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Jinx laughed, scornfully. "If you're the chef, then I'm the tailor. There's gotta be room for a few more cutie marks on my cloak."

 

Jay wrestled for control and eventually got it. "I don't know how this happened, having an evil personality in my head. If you know how, please tell me and also if there's help."

Shimmers chuckled. "Oh no no no! I am not here to cause trouble of the sorts!

*Yes your are*

"I merely heard that there is a minor group of ponies who have a similar blessing..."

*Curse*

"To one such as myself. And of course being the noble stallion I am, I thought I should aquaint myself with such ponies! So allow me to introduce myself. Thy name be Golden Shimmers. And I be simply a spectacular cook! Some even say, It's to DIE for!"

*That joke wasn't even funny.*


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Jay smiled shyly. "My name's Jay," There was a slight pause, then the dark purple unicorn's eyes narrowed to red points.

 

"And my name's Jinx," the evil pony personality said. She chuckled. "I'm the fun side, and Jay's the shy side. I come to her rescue, whenever anypony's bothering her."


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"Yes, I'm back to normal. This stallion here distracted Fallen and i was able to regain control. Damn, our other personalities caused a mess. I wonder if there's anypony left in Invermare."

Broken turned to the stallion in question as he began to talk. When he was done, she half-smirked, mocking his attempt at a joke.

"I'm guessing that was a joke to do with what your other personality does when it's in control?"

She turned to Jay, or Jinx.

"I'm Broken Cloud. Fallen's still pissed that she's back in my head, so she won't talk. Anyway, that's her name."

 

((Hopefully Cali will join us, and then I'll start up the plot.))

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"Im Equinox my other side is Deranged" Equinox said surprised Deranged didnt interrupt him. "As you can see...we...caused all of this" Equinox said a bit disappointed what Deranged and the other personalities of the other ponies did. "Invermare is not a great place anymore"


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*Are you sure we should even go with this?*

''Why not? It's not like we have anything else to so. Unless you have more ponies you wanna slaughter.''

*I always have ponies to slaughter. You should always know that.*

''Yeah.. But we don't even know where these guys ar- Oh. I think that's them.''

*And you know this.. How?*

''Well, they're obviously the only ponies who aren't blood and guts. Now shush. I'm going to make a good first impression. And by me, I mean you.'' Splinter, the non insane side muttered to his insane side, Cheshire. Who was currently in his head at the time. He got more nervous as he trotted up to them. ''I feel like I was late for something.. Probably a lot of things.'' Splinter said as rolling his eyes and finally approaching the group. ''Alright, come on out, Cheshire.'' Splinter muttered. *Oh boy! Some new friends! Possibly* Splinter said as his eyes turn red and a rather grim smile appeared on his face. 

''Whuzzup, friends of insanity?'' Cheshire said as his smile widened, making it more horrific. 

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Midnight Swirl had regained herself, and Mind Trick was quiet. Maybe perhaps she has been knocked out. She walked up to the group of ponies, and noticed that several new ponies were there. "Hey, I'm.. back to normal.. for now." Midnight said to the group. "My name is Midnight Swirl, and.. my other half's name is Mind Trick." She used her magic to teleport her chainsaw away. There were no more voices in her head. She was thrilled, but worried at the same time. A new pony arrived with red eyes and a grim smile. "Whuzzup, friends of insanity?" 


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Jay returned, looking anxiously around at the other ponies. "I think we'd better leave here," she said, nervously hiding behind her mane. "If anypony catches us here around the bodies, we could be in trouble. They'll take us to Canterlot Criminal Asylum."


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"And we didn't even get a chance to introduce ourselves! I'm Astral Storm, and I'm Comet Fire. I came here because I thought I would be safe from her. I guess not."

She sighed as she saw all the other ponies.

This is going to be interesting.

Couldn't have put it better myself.


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Jay returned, looking anxiously around at the other ponies. "I think we'd better leave here," she said, nervously hiding behind her mane. "If anypony catches us here around the bodies, we could be in trouble. They'll take us to Canterlot Criminal Asylum."

"Oh please." Shimmers retorted. "Those cretins they call doctors couldn't cure ham! Much less the patients. From what I have heard, some of them evsn form relationships with the patients!"

*That joke wasn't funny.*

"Do give me a moment." Shimmers said as his eyes rolled into the back of his head and both voices had an argument over controll, leaving his souless body to sit there. It looked down at his arm and gave it a nibble, but having no voice or emotions, as both were arguing, meant that it just nibbled. Eventually however shimmers regained controll. "Sorry. I do have those occasional moments where I cannot controll my anti-persona."


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Jinx returned, and rolled her pinprick eyes. "Oh, you're talking about Canterlot Insane Asylum," she replied, with a snort of laughter. "That one doesn't bother us in the slightest. The one Jay's talking about is the Criminal Asylum; Equestria's biggest secret, that I managed to find out from a doctor who, shall we say, fell into my hooves."

 

Jinx indicated one of the cutie marks sewn to her cloak, which was of a serpent entwined around a staff. "He didn't want to talk about it at first," Jinx said, carelessly. "But I soon managed to persuade him otherwise. Think he's currently in the Canterlot Insane Asylum at the moment."


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