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[Forlong 1,726]

My Little Pony:

The Next Generation

 

Almost 10 years have passed since Twilight became a princess, and the Elements of Harmony have disappeared because Twilight and her friends are no longer in tune with them.  Now they must race to find the new ponies of harmony in time to stop a new threat that will take over not only Equestria, but the entire world.

 

Main characters, minor characters, and OCs galore!

Rated: Teen

For violence and suggestive language

 

Anyway, I just wanted to see if I could get some assistance with this.  I wouldn't mind someone proofreading it.  I'd also like a cover picture to go with it.  So if anypony here can or knows anypony that can do a good bit of commission art, I would be grateful.

 

If you have a request for a pony you want to see in this fic, any pony; don't hesitate.  Requests will be appreciated, and the whole thing isn't set in stone.  Except for the new ponies the elements are attune to, and who the main six hoked up with (if anypony).  I've already decided on those important factors.

[CloudFyre 848]

This sounds like an interesting storyline - I'm thinking of picking up the proverbial pen again after a year or so of a hiatus, and I'd be willing to proofread for you. (It'd be good practice for me.)

I'm not much of an artist at this point, so you'll have to look elsewhere for that.

Feel free to send me a PM and we can get a Google Docs page set up, or we can exchange emails for Word documents, etc. (Whatever works best for you.)

[HunterTSN 1,444]

Sounds like a cool prospect. I'm a bit to busy working with other stories and authors to do any full-time editing for you, but I would love to pre-read when you need it. Set up a Google Doc and PM me and I'll take a look for you.

Edited July 12, 2013 by TheSteampunkNinja (TSN)

[LittleRawr 679]

I would like to pre-read for you as well, if you wish. Not for every single chapter, though.

 

Do you know what's the ending going to be like? You should decide on that before you start writing. And why do the elements not work for them anymore?

 

Oooh and can you fit in Dinky and Sparkler in a scene or something? It would be pretty cool if you do :3. (Dinky could also make a good element of magic. Just sayin'.)

[DND 2,355]

Sounds potentially exiting. No one's stopp'in ya! Just... please make all these OCs WORK. That's all I'm asking.   Make believable, relate-able, unique characters. I'm not sure if you've finished yet, but still. Watch out for all those OCs. 

 

I'm actually wondering what the other princesses have overall as a role in this story. Are they going to help Twilight find new element representative ponies?

[Forlong 1,726]

I would like to pre-read for you as well, if you wish. Not for every single chapter, though.

 

Do you know what's the ending going to be like? You should decide on that before you start writing. And why do the elements not work for them anymore?

 

Oooh and can you fit in Dinky and Sparkler in a scene or something? It would be pretty cool if you do :3. (Dinky could also make a good element of magic. Just sayin'.)

I have already decided on the basic plot structure.  Just going to be filling in the details.  I know there is going to be some filler.  You know, a few character pieces that wouldn't work without the setting.  I'm really looking forward to writing Rainbow Dash in this fic.  It's gonna be good!

 

OMG, Dinky is adorable.  Can't make her the element of magic, because the OC I have for that is actually quite good.  I'll probably give Dinky a cameo when I can in the story.

 

Sounds potentially exiting. No one's stopp'in ya! Just... please make all these OCs WORK. That's all I'm asking.   Make believable, relate-able, unique characters. I'm not sure if you've finished yet, but still. Watch out for all those OCs. 

 

I'm actually wondering what the other princesses have overall as a role in this story. Are they going to help Twilight find new element representative ponies?

Well, you'll see when I post it.  I'm almost done with the first chapter; so, depending on how long it takes to get the thing proof read and such, I should be able to get it out in less than a week.

 

The Pony Royalty will indeed play a role in the search and training of the new six ponies of harmony.  Even Prince Blueblood will get in on the action.  The Pony Royalty has also expanded through child-birth and marriage (but hopefully in the reverse order).

Edited July 12, 2013 by Forlong

[LittleRawr 679]

 

 

OMG, Dinky is adorable.  Can't make her the element of magic, because the OC I have for that is actually quite good.  I'll probably give Dinky a cameo when I can in the story.

 

Yay cameo! She is adorable, too bad she's not that popular... And make sure to post the fic here when you finish the chapter, It would be awesome if you do

[7th Boss 102]

If me and my Oc can help in any way just say the word and i'll be there. Also If this is going to be role-play I am very into it, Maybe something happened the elements and they changed there state, or power, to instead of laughter it was Curiosity? don't forget my friends cat SilverStream 

Edited July 13, 2013 by Gearhart7302

[Minath Khalsi 195]

My OC, I personally think, could go great in this story. Not as an element but more of a supporting character.

 

I would love to proof-read for you, and being a writer myself, we could spit-ball ideas. 

 

I could look at what you're thinking of for the art and give it a whirl, but if it's bad I'm not going to show you.

[7th Boss 102]

I'm good at writing bad at every other aspect so my oc can go with an element like loyalty if we don't change the elements power.

[RosemaryPetal 112]

Seems cool, I can't wait to see how this turns out. 

If you need any OCs, I have some to no end. (I seem to have accumulated quite a few adoptables from DeviantArt) 

None the less, I like your idea and haven't seen anything like that before. I love reading all these fanfics