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PonyBoy15

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Hello everyone! In my spare time after work I pull out the pencils and draw to get away a bit. These are some of the drawings i've done. I would really like some feedback on some of the drawings like any mistakes, what I could have done better, y'all know where im getting at. It's the only way i'll improve.

Thanks :yay:

 

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wow, these look amazing. pretty much show accurate if you ask me.

i looked over your photo's a few times, and a recurring problem seems to be muzzle/leg proportions. so maybe you can look a little into that.

but that's all i got. very good drawings!


 

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The only thing I can see that looks off is the light in the eyes, it looks like its protruding ever so slightly, like a bubble. However, that isn't a mistake or a skill thing: its because they are hand drawn and the shine wasn't made to be drawn like that - it was computer generated.

 

:P

 

So in conclusion, sorry, your too good at drawing for me to really offer any criticism.


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These are some pretty cool drawings! If I had to criticise then I'd say that sometimes the leg width can be a bit off, but off than that, they're good pieces of work! How long does a drawing take to do?


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Ok well first off you did pretty darn good.

 

Of course there's still some issues.

 

The most common trends seem to be in the proportion of the legs being a bit thin, and the bodies seem to be a bit long, sometimes just buff, it varies between some, but it looks like it could be toned down.

 

Could be the head to, not sure.

 

But overall a good job! Keep it up!


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Thanks for the positive comments and feedback everyone. Looks like the most common issue seems to be the proportions of the legs,body and possibly head compared to the other parts which I am now starting to notice more. I'm gonna practice getting these right now. Sometimes you just don't notice some imperfections when you're looking at your own drawing.

 

 

 

How long does a drawing take to do?

 

On average like half an hour, or an hour. Gotta be listening to some music though :yay:

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