crossover Twilight's Bizarre Adventure: Phantom Magic

[AlbinoThunder 42]

So, since I've cancelled one of my fics, Second Sun, I'd figure that I could direct my attention with one more fic while writing Romantic Disasters. And that's when I decided that I wanted to write a JoJo's Bizarre Adventure adaptation with ponies.

 

The first chapter is up and can be viewed here. http://www.fimfiction.net/story/120402/twilights-bizarre-adventure-phantom-magic I would like it if you fine people would help out and give it a read. Tell me what you think! Constructive criticism is welcome. Don't worry I can take it. 

 

If others have seen JoJo's Bizarre Adventure, I'd like your help. I'm having trouble deciding who I want for Bruford and Tarkus. If you have any ideas, feel free to tell me.