Count to a million

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eres the fic for those who are wondering

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/269193/always-there-for-you

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seems with that story I for once made a right hit

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Eeyup

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I mean 6 likes and 0 dislikes ... non of my other stories have 0 dislikes and that comment. usually 99% of comments I get are about grammar or tips

 

Protips: don't write chapters with lengths less than 1,000. They're taboo on this site. Aim for a minimum of 1,200. As well, don't go all crazy with the tags. Three is enough, four is pushing it, and five and up is too many.

 

dude it needs work so ask for help but so far I can understand it

 

dear person who wrote this, please could you respond to this quickly, i notice that you have a ton of grammatical mistakes that stop the flow of reading, if you want i could fix them, no debts or anything, just to help out.

 

I just read the whole story in one sitting. It looked like it needed a lot more work. The story itself was realativly good although i feel as though more people would read it to the end if it had better grammer and more discriptive scenes. Please dont let my critique stop you from writing just learn from these mistakes and whrite a new story after all practice makes perfect.

 

I'll be honest in saying that this story feels  rushed, it is also riddled with mechanical errors and misuse of words.  That being said, the story is not all that bad.  Fix the pacing issue and the mechanical errors and I'd say you have a good story on your hands.

 

Dear, Celestia. Save me.

2/10

I can't believe I even skimmed that entire monstrosity. Apply yourself.

 

 

 

As you guys see, most of the comments I get are ... well, not completly positive :/ There are positive ones(*Looks to Base*) but most of thoise are friends here, its clear they are more positive ... but then this comment by the newest story

 

Wow...

So sad,

yet so wonderful

Have a well deserved like  

Gear leaved me years ago!

I think you mean left

 

 

When I readed that it filled my heart and I feeled really proud. A really positive comment with an little grammar notice. I was surprised to ever get such a good feedback AND it's not a friend I know from somewhere, it's a completly stranger. I really ... feeled undiscribeful when reading it, readed it few times to get sure I got it right

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tough most comments where from my first story, before the rewriting

 

 

I MUST HAVE THIS!

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Nice

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I'm back

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must... resist... eating... other... muffins!...

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nuuu, tomorrow sunday already :'(

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Nu :'c

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You guys don't like Sundays?

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Sunday's are kind of awful.

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not when it means the end of vacation and start of work again

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