Doggy Big Mac - crituque?

[SilverSprinkles 44]

Hey guys!

I was wondering if some of you wanted to critique a piece done by me.

If you like any of my art work, I'll gladly let you know I'm doing commissions.

Inbox me for info on that. Alright everypony, let the critiquing begin~!

Go easy,

~Silver.

[Starling 100]

Actually, he looks quite cute xD I'd never of pictured him like this before though. I don't see anything wrong with this at all to be quite honest with you. Perhaps if you did want advice maybe highlight his saliva with white to make it appear shiny etc and add shading to show there is a light source. That's probably the only thing I can think of for improvement. ^^ Good job.

[Slice0Pie 815]

This is so adorable. I love love love it! The saliva though, looks like the tonge is melting. Anyway, Good job! Great job! Is so cute!

[Modphase 1,273]

That looks really great! Even though I don't quite understand the hypno eyes, it's still awesome. Though it would be nice if there was a bit more shading on it, everything else looks real well done on it!

[SilverSprinkles 44]

 

Actually, he looks quite cute xD I'd never of pictured him like this before though. I don't see anything wrong with this at all to be quite honest with you. Perhaps if you did want advice maybe highlight his saliva with white to make it appear shiny etc and add shading to show there is a light source. That's probably the only thing I can think of for improvement. ^^ Good job.

 

 

Hey~

Thanks for replying.

And thanks for the tips!

By the way, this is from the 'return of harmony' episodes,

when Discord returns chaos to Equestria.

There's a scene where Big Mac thinks he's a dog.

 

 

This is so adorable. I love love love it! The saliva though, looks like the tonge is melting. Anyway, Good job! Great job! Is so cute!

 

Hiya~

Yea, I may have over did the saliva a bit.

But since he thinks he's a dog, and dogs drool,

I felt it necessary.

 

That looks really great! Even though I don't quite understand the hypno eyes, it's still awesome. Though it would be nice if there was a bit more shading on it, everything else looks real well done on it!

 

The hypno-type eyes are from when Discord 'hypnotizes' the ponies into thinking they're something they aren't.

Thanks for the reply~

[~Chaos~ 3,971]

To be completely honest, I have no critique for this as of now.

 

I just really love it and think it's adorable! Really nice job on it.