private The Changelings Attack [Action/Adventure]

[EpicRainbow275 21]

It's a beautiful day in the Crystal Empire. Princess Cadence and Shining Armor are having lunch with the librarian, when suddenly, a loud BOOM is heard. The prince and princess rush outside to see what happened. They then find themselves face to face with the Changeling Queen, Queen Chrysalis. The rulers of the Crystal Empire run as fast as they can to the palace. Cadence quickly writes a letter to Epic Rainbow and her friends. She sends it with her magic as quickly as possible. Queen Chrysalis bursts through the window and captures the princess and prince. She puts them in caccoon-like pods. They are trapped. Epic Rainbow recieves the letter and calls her friends together.

 

Epic Rainbow was trotting to her door so she could go to the market and buy some carrots when a letter magically appeared in front of her face and landed on her muzzle. She jumped back and said, "What the...?!" She picked up the letter and read it. It said,

Dear Epic Rainbow,

 You must come to the Crystal Empire at once, my faithful apprentice. The changelings are attacking. They have never seen more love anywhere in the world. They figured that the Crystal Empire is the ideal place to feed. The Crystal Ponies are terrified. They think it's worse than when King Sombra took over. You must gather your friends and come to the Crystal Empire immediately.

Sincerely,

Princess Cadence

Epic ran to the phone and called her friends, telling them what happened and what they needed to do. She flew up the stairs and woke her twin sister, Lightning Strike. "Lightning," she shouted. "The changelings are attacking the Crystal Empire!!" Lightning sprang up with a start. "We need to gather everypony together," she said. "Come on, we gotta call Cutie, Emerald, Oracle, Mystic, Bladed Hearts, and Night Sky!" Lightning Strike ran out of the room. Epic stopped her and said, "I already called them. They'll be here soon."

Edited August 20, 2013 by Epic Rainbow <3

[Lil' Lovebug 1,042]

Bladed galloped through the streets towards Epic's house. Leaving Chrystalline, his adopted daughter, was a bit tough, but he found somepony plenty capable of watching her.

 

The empty streets make for quick traveling and gave Bladed time to think about the call he had recieved. He pondered what Chrysalis could gain from a direct attack of the Crystal Empire, and what they group might have to do to stop her. As he was thinking, Bladed had stopped paying attention to the street, and ran right into another pony.

Edited August 21, 2013 by Bladed & Verses

[EpicRainbow275 21]

(Who is Chrystalline? and who did he bump into lol)

 

Epic paced around her house frantically, saying, "Where is everypony? They should be here by now!" Lightning Strike said, "Calm down. I'm sure they're running here as fast as they can." Suddenly, Cutie Pie, Mystic, and Oracle burst through the door.

[Emerald Heart 25,223]

Emerald ran to Epic's hpuse in quite a panic. "What is it Epic? You said it was urgent!" She looked at each of the ponies in the room, with an expression if confusion mixed with horror. "Where are the others? Are they OK?" The red earth pony ran up to Epic Rainbow. "What's going on?"

[EpicRainbow275 21]

Lightning ran up to Emerald and started panicking. "ThechangelingsareattackingtheCrystalEmpire!!!" Cutie Pie said, "What?!" Lightning Strike calmed down a bit and reapeated, "The changelings are attacking the Crystal Empire!! We have to save the Crystal Ponies and Cadence and Shining Armor!" Epic then spoke up. "It's okay. We'll find a way to stop Chrysalis." Mystic then said, "But what if we don't!" Oracle then reassured, "Trust me, we will. I know we will. I had a vision."

Edited August 21, 2013 by Epic Rainbow <3

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Nightsky just wakeing up gets the call to go to epicrainbows house nightsky puts on his saddle bag on the way there he wonders what could be going on nightsky was half awake when he got the message and only eard come to epicrainbows house and hurry

[EpicRainbow275 21]

Nightsky just wakeing up gets the call to go to epicrainbows house nightsky puts on his saddle bag on the way there he wonders what could be going on nightsky was half awake when he got the message and only eard come to epicrainbows house and hurry

(First of all, Epic Rainbow is two words. Second, I expect proper grammar. Third, Epic Rainbow called him on the phone. Fourth, You roleplay in the past tense.)

 

Epic Rainbow was still pacing while she waited for everypony else to get to her house. Lightning Strike broke the silence saying, "Can't we just go already?! The Crystal Empire is being taken over again! But this time by Queen Chrysalis!" Epic looked sternly at her sister and said, "We have to wait for everypony to get here! We need more than six ponies to defeat the changelings!"

[Lil' Lovebug 1,042]

(Was gonna wait to see if anyone wanted to be bowled over by me, but alas, non were)

 

Bladed got up and apologized to the pony he ran into. He brushed himself off and continued down the empty streets and soon arrived at Rainbow's house. He knocked on the door and waited. "Wonder who's here already," he murmured.

[EpicRainbow275 21]

(It's Epic Rainbow or Epic, not 'Rainbow')

Epic heard a knock on the door and opened it to see Bladed Hearts at the door. She let him in and said, "Here's the deal: The changelings are attacking the Crystal Empire. Chrysalis is taking over. The Crystal Ponies are all like, 'Oh my gosh, it's worse than King Sombra!' We need to save the Empire. But first, we gotta wait for Night Sky."

(I'm thinking of making another RP, but I need some ideas first. Also I've been meaning to write an MLP fanfic, but I also need ideas for that.)

Edited August 21, 2013 by Epic Rainbow <3

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Night sky got to epic rainbows house after a long time and started to play in his head what first.  He was going to say said sorry to epic rainbow to all the other pony's waiting  at her house waiting to get started on going to the crystal empire to get rid of the changelings but first he had to get in the house. So night sky knocked on the door

 

(also sorry about that i had just woken up irl when i wrote the first post on my phone)

Edited August 21, 2013 by Anto677

[EpicRainbow275 21]

Night sky got to epic rainbows house after a long time and said sorry to epic rainbow to all the other pony's waiting  at her house waiting to get started on going to the crystal empire to get rid of the changelings but first he had to get in the house so night sky knocked on the door

 

(also sorry about that i had just woken up irl when i wrote the first post on my phone)

(This still isn't proper grammar. It has no punctuation, improper capitalization, and run-on sentences even though there really isn't any punctuation to signify sentences So, please fix that post or I will not respond. EVER. So, do us all a favor and use proper grammar so that we can understand what you are trying to say.)

[Lil' Lovebug 1,042]

"Okie doke. Sorry I'm a bit late. Ran into someone... quite literally." Bladed walked into the room and took a look at all the ponies that were already there. "Well hello friends," he said, waving. "And how are all you guys doing? Well besides the whole 'Crystal Empire is under attack and we have to save it, what do we do? Holy crap' feeling most of us probably have."

Edited August 24, 2013 by Bladed & Verses

[Emerald Heart 25,223]

"Okay, so the Crystal Empire is being attacked, isn't this a job for the Elements of Harmony? Or are they just away on vacation and we were paid to do their dirty work for them. Rarity didn't want to get her precious hooficure ruined again, I presume? I mean, do we even have a plan?!"

Edited August 25, 2013 by Emerald <3

[EpicRainbow275 21]

Epic growled at the jokes everypony was making. "The changelings are attacking the Crystal Empire," she growled. "The Elements won't work. This is a job for the power of love. We're gonna have to fall in love with each other somehow to stop the changelings. Me and Rengade are already strongly in love so you guys are gonna have to figure it out yourselves."

[Lil' Lovebug 1,042]

Bladed snapped his head up. "F-... f-... fall in love!?! You must be kidding. You expect us to just spontaneously fall in love with each other!?! Ha!" Bladed let out a chuckle. "You can't just go 'Hi I'm Bladed Hearts, I need to save the world from changelings, and I need you to fall in love with me.'"

 

(So who want to ship with me by the end of this XP)

[EpicRainbow275 21]

"No," she replied. "I don't expect you to spontaneously fall in love. It'll take some time, but I know for a fact that each of you will fall in love with each other." Cutie sputtered, "Wha-what?! I have to fall in love with somepony to stop the changelings?" Lightning, and Mystic agreed. Oracle said, "I had a vision. This will work. Also, I know who everypony is gonna fall in love with."

[Emerald Heart 25,223]

Emerald looked down at the ground, her mane covered most of her face. She was obviously very nervous. "Um...Epic? I don't know about this..." Emerald had gone from being slightly cocky, to being shy. All of her friends new she needed convincing if she were to go on this trip.

[Lil' Lovebug 1,042]

Bladed put a hoof on Emerald's shoulder. "Hey, don't worry. We can do this. Plus," Bladed smirked, "You wouldn't want us having all the fun, would you?" He turned to Epic Rainbow. "I'm ready when you all are. Though, I feel like I'm forgeting something. I'll remember when it's important I guess."

[Emerald Heart 25,223]

Bladed put a hoof on Emerald's shoulder. "Hey, don't worry. We can do this. Plus," Bladed smirked, "You wouldn't want us having all the fun, would you?" He turned to Epic Rainbow. "I'm ready when you all are. Though, I feel like I'm forgeting something. I'll remember when it's important I guess."

"I guess not....but I still have my doubts. I am just so nervous. What if Oracle is wrong? What if we end up hating each other instead." tears started to spill out of Emerald's eyes. "I don't want that to happen-" *sniff* -"This is the first time I have ever had real friends!"

[Lil' Lovebug 1,042]

Bladed wraped his hooves around Emeralds neck and gave her a large hug. "Shhh. It'll all work out. Don't worry, when has Oracle been wrong? Plus," he said leting go and looking Emerald in the eyes, "I could never hate you, or any one else in this room. You all are my friends and I would to anything to keep us all together and happy, especially you. I know what you went through, and I won't let it hapen to you again. So," Bladed went to take her hoof," let's go save us an empire. Together."

 

(So what's going on with Night Sky?)

[Emerald Heart 25,223]

Bladed wraped his hooves around Emeralds neck and gave her a large hug. "Shhh. It'll all work out. Don't worry, when has Oracle been wrong? Plus," he said leting go and looking Emerald in the eyes, "I could never hate you, or any one else in this room. You all are my friends and I would to anything to keep us all together and happy, especially you. I know what you went through, and I won't let it hapen to you again. So," Bladed went to take her hoof," let's go save us an empire. Together."

 

(So what's going on with Night Sky?)

(Huh?)

Emerald blushed. "Uh-Okay. Yeah, um...I guess I'll do it. You know, so you guys won't get hurt and...stuff. You know what, I'm going to go stand in that in that corner now." Emerald's ears folded down, and she trotted over to the corner. What was happening to her? All Bladed had done was hug her, and hold her hoof...this was so confusing!