OC havin sum FUHN!

[Tobium Fission 26]

I am pretty new at drawing. I have tried my hand at drawing a filly version of AJ (came out looking like scoots). I have also done a few fluttershy drawing because she is dah bestesist EVER! I have drawn only ponies and now I have drawn some accessories on said ponies, but now I have drawn background stuff. I.E. explosions and distance affects. Please, anyone with art skill or just a critic, point out flaws and if possible inform me of a way to do it better.

[Fender 1,284]

So that's what happened to Megaton...

 

 

Anyway, nice drawing, I'd say. Though the mouth outlines seem a little too dark...and the forelegs a wee bit long. Otherwise, well done.

[Tobium Fission 26]

Yea, I don't know what I was doing but I did something to the mouth and I couldn't fix it and as for the legs, the on is supposed to be right after be pressed the button. (Legs irritate me) love fallout btw! Oblivion is still better than skyrim, fallout 3 and new Vegas. I originally played oblivion so it's my favorite Bethesda game.

[Rocco 567]

lol  the little house being blown away in the distance made me happy! ^.^ well lets see critique, i suck at these so bear with me here!

 

ok the proportions are off but that seems to be the only major problem here. the background and the execution of the explosion are superb! the little touches like the little house being blown away with the roof blown further away show direction very well! the little touches on everything to give this drawing depth really show you have great promise. 

 

as far as advice on how to get better at what you want to draw? i highly recommend drawing from reference, or find a vector of a particular pony and copy it , not trace it, but use it as a visual reference for proportion and direction. the more you do this the faster you will get and the better you will get. speed is another thing, this drawing was going great but the pony seems a bit rushed, it very important to take your time and not be afraid to erase when you mess up! most of the drawings i do take 3-6 hours totally just on the pony and i have spent multiple days on other pieces. keep at it! it takes time and practice but if you really like what your doing, just keep going and keep asking to be critiqued, its the only way you will learn!

[Tobium Fission 26]

I usually take about an hour on the pony and I drew him from memory. I contually ran into problems with the proportions so I understand what I did wrong there. Thanksbfor the tips and I'm glad you enjoyed the house being destroyed.