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I got bored, and I drew this within 10-20 minutes, it's a pretty shabby drawing, it's not my favorite but I don't know. Here you go!post-15561-0-86090600-1378530379_thumb.jpg

Hope you like it, please reply, scale from 1/10, and if you liked this you can find more at my deviant art, link in my sig.

I noticed that the hat is too big and the left (my left) eye is awkward damn it...

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Pretty good on its own, and even better considering the time. 

 

9.0/10. I'd say just work on the eyes a little more, and maybe make the hair flow a little more naturally.

 

I know eyes have always been a pain from an angle since they have to be similar but aren't the same. The hair should be a little easier to improve upon as you practice, though.

 

As for the hat, I think it's really only slightly too big, but mainly just really far back on the head so it looks even larger. 

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Pretty good on its own, and even better considering the time.

 

9.0/10. I'd say just work on the eyes a little more, and maybe make the hair flow a little more naturally.

 

I know eyes have always been a pain from an angle since they have to be similar but aren't the same. The hair should be a little easier to improve upon as you practice, though.

 

As for the hat, I think it's really only slightly to big, but mainly just really far back on the head so it looks even larger.

Yea I get what you're saying, thank you. I always have problems with applejacks hat, it really annoys me, but I don't get what you mean about the hair I honestly think it's fine. But whatever. Thanks :)
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10 to 20mins is pretty impressive. I like the ink style of this too its very catchy, could be popular in wall art as well if you think about it :D

Why, thank you. It's funny because I made it by accident while making one of my earlier drawings.

Thanks for the reply, really helps ^_^

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On a scale from 1 - 10, given especially that this was drawn in 10-20 minutes, I'd have to give this a solid 8!  Very lovely for such a quickly drawn sketch, and thanks so much for sharing it with us PelateOvercast!!!  :muffins:

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On a scale from 1 - 10, given especially that this was drawn in 10-20 minutes, I'd have to give this a solid 8! Very lovely for such a quickly drawn sketch, and thanks so much for sharing it with us PelateOvercast!!! :muffins:

Thanks dude! Means a lot to me. :)

But the hat and the eye still bothers me though -_- but anyways thanks for replying and telling me what you think.

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I would give it an 8.5 out of ten! You did an amazing job on it. It's amazing how you did that in under 20 minutes! :o The only thing I really see is that the hat is tipped back a little bit too far. I know it's kind of hard to draw something at an angle.

 

I can't wait to look at your other work! :)


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Brutal honesty, away!

 

The eyes look strange, and the hair design is a bit off. The hat also appears to be sitting too far back on her head. In addition, her neck appears far too long.

 

Other than that, it's well done. 6/10


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You are far too harsh a critic on yourself! The eye and the hat look great imo, haha :). I understand the feeling though, we're often our own harshest critic. Anyway, I say it's a solid 8/10, very nice!!!

I'm just telling myself the truth so I can work even harder on the next one(s) if I don't push myself I don't improve. Anyways thanks for the reception. :yay:
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Its awesome c: I dont like to critisize others, thats not personally, just how i am. 


I think this particular piece is one to be proud of, as all drawings are. One more step to perfection and the ultimate goal for any artist, and the feel of progres might be hard to sense, but its there, for every page you make.

 


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