My OC Bringing the Wubs

[galaxysquid 2,122]

Okay so uhhhhhhhhh I made this and I think it's alright...? What do you think?

 

Bahhhhh 14 layers. v.v I don't think it's that good. But give me your critique. Thankssss. /)

Edited September 16, 2013 by PrincessOfWub

[~Silver Essence~ 2,625]

Damn! Nice and great!

 

The green magic and looks remind me alot of the magic from chrysalis from the canterlot wedding.

 

Just thought I say that, and I love the color pattern and wub upsrise!

 

Excellent sketch and I give it a 9/10.   

[galaxysquid 2,122]

Damn! Nice and great!

 

The green magic and looks remind me alot of the magic from chrysalis from the canterlot wedding.

 

Just thought I say that, and I love the color pattern and wub upsrise!

 

Excellent sketch and I give it a 9/10.   

Thanks! Well I thought since my eyes were green the magic glow would be green too.

 

I'm glad you think it looks good. It took me 2 days to do this and 14 layers. I don't know if it was necessary for 14 layers but oh well. xD

 

It sucks though because I don't have any other art programs besides dA Muro. Can't download anything on these computers because they're old.

Edited September 16, 2013 by PrincessOfWub

[Bojo 1,376]

Sup PrincessOfWub (gotta love your username and your avatar... WUB WUB WUB)

Let this humble gentleman critique your art and say that it is awesome! I'm not an expert on pony anathomy but I guess eyes seem a little short for me, I don't know, maybe it's just me, and in the part of the neck (more or less by there) I think it must be a little bit more round... as I said, may be it's just me Anyway, it is amazing! keep practicing and you'll reach perfection 9/10 beacause art can always be improved I like your OC as well, how is she named?

 

*sees signature* darn, that banner is awesome!

[galaxysquid 2,122]

Sup PrincessOfWub (gotta love your username and your avatar... WUB WUB WUB)

Let this humble gentleman critique your art and say that it is awesome! I'm not an expert on pony anathomy but I guess eyes seem a little short for me, I don't know, maybe it's just me, and in the part of the neck (more or less by there) I think it must be a little bit more round... as I said, may be it's just me Anyway, it is amazing! keep practicing and you'll reach perfection 9/10 beacause art can always be improved I like your OC as well, how is she named?

 

*sees signature* darn, that banner is awesome!

My OC is Dj Starlight  

 

And thank-you. I think I may work on something for the body a bit more. I just finished creating my brother :3 His name is Lightning Flash. I may make another topic on opinions on his colorand shtuff.

[HeartFeltPuma23 180]

Really good drawing,i don't see any errors,just keep practicing to improve the technique,i really like your OC,the colors are really nice    

 

 

It sucks though because I don't have any other art programs besides dA Muro. Can't download anything on these computers because they're old.

Know the feel :comeatus: Damn old computers XD 

[Bojo 1,376]

Hey that's a cool name! And I'm up to see your next creation

 

I just finished creating my brother :3

That sounds so amazing! xD gotta create bros and sis every 5 minutes

[galaxysquid 2,122]

Really good drawing,i don't see any errors,just keep practicing to improve the technique,i really like your OC,the colors are really nice    

 

 

Know the feel :comeatus: Damn old computers XD 

Yeah. And my dad wont let me download anything on his computer. My laptop is also broken. XD But thanks for the opinion. Really appreciate it!

Hey that's a cool name! And I'm up to see your next creation

 

That sounds so amazing! xD gotta create bros and sis every 5 minutes

Yup! I am going to upload it in a second. I have to create his cutiemark first though...he wants something to represent video-games. (Don't all brothers...? xD)

[Sir Xarthas VI 470]

It's not bad, especially compared to others I have seen. The Vinyl disc isn't perfectly round, and if it's supposed to be at an angle, it isn't the right shape for that either.

I can give my professional critique if you'd like, but I don't think you'd want it... (Not saying it's bad or anything, just saying there's a lot of details that I cover when I critique)

[galaxysquid 2,122]

It's not bad, especially compared to others I have seen. The Vinyl disc isn't perfectly round, and if it's supposed to be at an angle, it isn't the right shape for that either.

I can give my professional critique if you'd like, but I don't think you'd want it... (Not saying it's bad or anything, just saying there's a lot of details that I cover when I critique)

Oh go ahead I love the critique. I mean this is only my like 3rd digital drawing though...so it really isn't the best lol. But I do want really well critique.

[Sir Xarthas VI 470]

Ok, well get ready to face pain and agony (my friends told me to say that xD).

 

Should I list off the standing out 'wrong' details? I think I should...

- The disc is improperly shaped
- The magic 'bubbles' around the objects is improperly shaped

- The (I'm going to guess) subwoofer isn't plugged into anything.

- The subwoofer is improperly shaped

- The microphone isn't plugged into anything

- The microphone is improperly shaped

- The unicorn's outline doesn't have even edges

- The unicorn's outline looks a bit off as far as a pony shape goes

- The unicorn's right ear (from our pov, the left ear) looks like it's backwards

 

Should I continue?