Nopony

[Bananashy 79]

I promised myself I would do something with SAI during the 31-day trial period.

After 10-20 something days of practicing, I tried making something.

 

 

 

I find it kinda rough, particularly the tail...

 

What do you guys think? As always (sounding like a broken record now but eh), please point out the stuff I should improve on. I'd really appreciate it.

 

  

[LittleRawr 679]

Well, the right eye is a bit wonky. The 'reflections' in the eyes they're supposed to be more oval as well, less circle.

 

The front raised hoof also looks thinner compared to the other legs. 

 

Other than that, it looks quite nice! You should make more like these :3

[Lonely 93]

its pretty cool though but you forgot the cutie mark or the hair is covering it up. the eyes look kida weird. that's the things you need to improve   

Edited October 28, 2013 by shadowbrony

[Guest]

This is most certainly better than ANYTHING i could do in an art-program, let alone on paper....

As far as critique goes do i have very little, but the devils in the detail.
The front right foot looks a bit... odd.
The left eye is slightly derped. Not enough to be derpy. Too much to be normal

I really like the way you made the body. It looks very nice. The head-mane turned out really well aswell if you asked me

Keep it up. Im eager to see more of your work

Edited October 28, 2013 by Guest