(Request - Open) Need pre-readers/Proof readers for a Fan Fiction

[Quilled Inc 161]

PRE-READERS/PROOF READERS REQUEST

Greetings everypony, Silver Quill here!  

I need someone who is willing to read over and/or proof read a fanfiction work that I'm writing (my first MLP fan fiction ).  I'm doing it chapter by chapter whenever I have time (which, with work and school, is not very often, but I'm making slow and steady progress by writing whenever I have a few minutes [including between classes, in the evenings after homework, in the mornings while waiting for classes to start, and even occasionally in the rest room when doing my business XD]).  Chapter one is now finished and while I work on the second and subsequent chapters, I would love someone who isn't me to read over what I have written and provide some constructive, critical feedback!

I need someone who can easily spot grammatical mistakes, has a feel for flow and consistency, and doesn't mind a mesh of British and American writing styles (I'm somewhat culturally challenged), or who is just a patient reader and can give me advice on how to appeal to more readers as a whole!  

Please send me a PM or reply to this topic if you are willing to help, or even better, e-mail me!!!!!

 

P.S. Also, it would help if you have, at some point, read A Series of Unfortunate Events by Lemony Snicket.

Edited November 3, 2013 by SilverQuill

[ghostfacekiller39 23,860]

Well, I'm open, but I need to know how long each chapter is. I mean, I don't want to be hit over the head with some 5,000 word chapter filled to the brim with grammatical errors and OOC moments (Which, believe me, they usually are, and it's very hard to fight your way through them. Never again...) So...begs the question...how long is it?

[Quilled Inc 161]

Well, I'm open, but I need to know how long each chapter is. I mean, I don't want to be hit over the head with some 5,000 word chapter filled to the brim with grammatical errors and OOC moments (Which, believe me, they usually are, and it's very hard to fight your way through them. Never again...) So...begs the question...how long is it?

In Google Docs right now it's about 4 1/2 pages.  And yeah, that's a realistic concern but I tried my best to abstain from any 'OOC' moments, and I find that I have a pretty good grasp on proper grammar.

[ghostfacekiller39 23,860]

Hmm...

 

If it's in google docs, isn't that the same as google drive? If so, I have an account for that you could send it to. It's barrettr15@leonardisd.com.

 

If not, PM me.

[Mr. Critical 434]

I'll give it a look see if I find the time. After I'm done I'll get back to you on it. However, I will be honest with you. So if its below average... well, let's cross that bridge when we get there.

[Quilled Inc 161]

Hmm...

 

If it's in google docs, isn't that the same as google drive? If so, I have an account for that you could send it to. It's barrettr15@leonardisd.com.

 

If not, PM me.

Yes, it is Google Drive.  I can just PM you the link so that you will be able to read and comment on it!

 

I'll give it a look see if I find the time. After I'm done I'll get back to you on it. However, I will be honest with you. So if its below average... well, let's cross that bridge when we get there.

Brilliant, I would expect nothing less!  I personally don't think it is below average, but then again that is the bias of being the author  I'll PM you with more details!

 

I can probably use one or two more people to preread this for me if anyone else is interested!

Edited November 3, 2013 by SilverQuill