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[HoopHoof 137]

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Edited May 21, 2021 by HoopHoof

[IridscentNionios 1,420]

This is what came in mind when i saw this... needs to look a bit more feminine perhaps. Other than that pretty nice i say! Keep up the good work.

[HoopHoof 137]

This is what came in mind when i saw this... needs to look a bit more feminine perhaps. Other than that pretty nice i say! Keep up the good work.

Eh, it's a work in progress and plus it's just a rough sketch (actually my first) xD I'd draw most of the body but I got lazy (because that happens xD). But hey, I'll work on it.

[Aniki 386]

Looks like Sokka and Suki did get around to makin' babies! (Bow chica wow)

 

It looks good! But there's something about it that I just can't view as feminine. I think the chin just needs to be a bit higher and softer; then you'll be dead on the money. (Course I'm no professional)

[HoopHoof 137]

Yeah, women aren't exactly my forte  But hey, the advice is very helpful. I just need a lot of polishing up xD I had a feeling I tried to make her too manly I think I over done it with the whole warrior woman look and ended up with....well... a guy 

Looks like Sokka and Suki did get around to makin' babies! (Bow chica wow)

 

It looks good! But there's something about it that I just can't view as feminine. I think the chin just needs to be a bit higher and softer; then you'll be dead on the money. (Course I'm no professional)

And I rethought my idea of my character design and decided to choose traits that made her seem somewhat fierce yet still being identified as a woman and I think it's better what I initially did xD It's a rough painting so it may not be tidy :/

 

[Aniki 386]

Yeah, women aren't exactly my forte  But hey, the advice is very helpful. I just need a lot of polishing up xD I had a feeling I tried to make her too manly I think I over done it with the whole warrior woman look and ended up with....well... a guy 

And I rethought my idea of my character design and decided to choose traits that made her seem somewhat fierce yet still being identified as a woman and I think it's better what I initially did xD It's a rough painting so it may not be tidy :/

 

 

Yeeeah! That's much better bro! I'm tellin' ya, "The definition of the chin and eyes speak miles when it comes to masculinity" (I heard it from a gypsy once, no joke)

 

I definitely dig that one a lot more fer sure. And the markings on the nose and cheek really make it look like she's got her war face on. Keep up the good work!

[IridscentNionios 1,420]

@@HoopHoof, Much better! Very nice! The tattoos are a good touch! Hmmm you wouldn't mind some personal feedback? What makes your OC manly for me is mainly the eye-brows... they seem too thick. That and the eyes maybe... you could make em a bit smaller and with more curves. I bet she'd be a real tough Tundra Warrior! Well at least that's what i'm picturing right here.

[HoopHoof 137]

@@HoopHoof, Much better! Very nice! The tattoos are a good touch! Hmmm you wouldn't mind some personal feedback? What makes your OC manly for me is mainly the eye-brows... they seem too thick. That and the eyes maybe... you could make em a bit smaller and with more curves. I bet she'd be a real tough Tundra Warrior! Well at least that's what i'm picturing right here.

@@HoopHoof, Much better! Very nice! The tattoos are a good touch! Hmmm you wouldn't mind some personal feedback? What makes your OC manly for me is mainly the eye-brows... they seem too thick. That and the eyes maybe... you could make em a bit smaller and with more curves. I bet she'd be a real tough Tundra Warrior! Well at least that's what i'm picturing right here.

I totally forgot about the eyebrows xD I was making this late in the evening and I guess I overlooked that. I was planing to make here eyebrows a darker tone of her hair (a much darker one). But I forgot ^^ ehehehe I think I wanted them to be neater too