open Saving the Elements of Harmony

[OG Blaze 269]

@Mr. Critical 

Blaze wandered through the hallway keeping his ears open for anything out of the ordinary. Though in a casino what could Blaze really expect to sound "ordinary". He trotted on past a pool and up the stairs to the second floor. He didn't hear anything at all, this was strange, usually there were small parties in rooms like this. Blaze was starting to get suspicious now, Blaze thought about calling for help, but he said screw it and continued trotting till he reached the end of the hallway.

[Mr. Critical 434]

Pinkie and Critical were walking through the casino floors. Searching for the element of kindness.

"Find her yet?"
"No. Not a sign of her. Just keep looking."
The two came across a large stage where there seemed to be a show going on. Mares doing the cancan by the looks of it. It didn't last long though. But the announcement did catch their attention.

"Mares and Gentlecolts! Put your hooves together for the lovely, miss Summer Breeze."
The mare that came on stage was a butter yellow Pegasus wearing a dark red reflective cocktail dress. Her hair was combed into a seductive fashion. She came on stage, grabbing the microphone and she began to sing. The voice echoed through the casino. When it reached the two they both said in unison and confusion...

"Fluttershy!?"

[OG Blaze 269]

Blaze wandered through the hallways, until something caught his eyes. Two what looked liked soldiers were moving threw the hallways at brisk pace. Blaze decided to follow them but he couldn't risk being caught so he followed behind by a lot. The soldiers reached what looked like a large stage, Blaze took a fast peek and turned his attention back to the soldiers. "Wait what?" Blaze said, right as he said that the two soldiers turned around and focused there attention towards Blaze. Blaze turned around just to see a brisk image of a hoof flying towards his face, Blaze caught the punch face first and was sent flying through glass onto a table, the glass shattered and flew to the ground. Blaze wasn't too badly harmed and looked up to see the two soldiers heading around on the top floor to the stage. "Oh no you don't" said Blaze as he picked himself up and ran towards the stage as well.

[dashian500 194]

Steel had followed and was watching fluttershy on the stage -interesting, I hope she remembers me I haven't talked other in ages- steel thought sadly he hadn't meant to become so distant from her ((who's gonna control fluttershy jw and another thing wow you guys post a lot while in in school))

[Mr. Critical 434]

Critical, Pinkie and Steel watched Fluttershy perform for her audience. Which was growing at a small rate.

"This is weird. Fluttershy would never do this. Not with a large audience. And in that dress."
"I know, and especially with that dress."
Fluttershy finished her song and gave a bow. Her audience applauding her. She walked off and The three began to follow suit.

[OG Blaze 269]

(((Eyup)))

@dashian500

@Mr. Critical

No one had heard anything including the glass shattering which was good off they heard it would have created hysteria making it even harder to get to Fluttershy, Blaze was racing to the stage knocking into people, he ran through Critical and Pinkie toppling them both over, he reached the stage but the two soldiers were there first and tackled Blaze before he could get a word out of his mouth, the crowd let out a gasp and started screaming as they flooded out the doors of the stage

[Mr. Critical 434]

"ugh, blaze you idiot."

Critical walked to the guards holding Blaze. He brought out a small piece of parchment.

"Greetings. I'll take this from here. Royal guard, Mr. Critical. I've been tailing him for a few days now. Finally caught up to him. If you gents would be so kind, I will be taking him to the dungeon."

The two looked to each other and to the paper. When they saw it they released him and I began to escort him out of sight. Once we were Critical spoke.

"Did you not think I already thought of that. That it would be that easy."

[dashian500 194]

Steel was fast following blaze and dodging the guards he made it to flutter shy "miss shy we are here to save you" steel said (so who is controlling fluttershy I can since you guys have pinkie and twilight and split stream has rainbow but it's just whoever if it's me then I'll post her reply after I know ))

[Mr. Critical 434]

@@dashian500,

(You can I guess. She barely talks and I guess I can take the ones that the others want that aren't on)

 

Pinkie was the one who saw Steel go for fluttershy next.

"Critical. We have a situation here."

Critical looked to where Pinkie was pointing. In frustration, he left Blaze alone and began to run for the guards.

"I'm surrounded by idiots."

Rushing the guards, he delivered a round house kick th the guards face's, rendering them unconscious.

[OG Blaze 269]

@Mr. Critical

@dashian500

(((You can be fluttershy)))

Blaze looked at Critical with glaring eyes "you idiot! You can't possibly think those are royal guards!? They're assassins!"

Blaze left Critical and turned his attention towards the two assassins "when he tackled me I saw a bounty paper in his pocket!" Blaze took off and hoped he would reach them in time

 

The assassins looked at each other and one said "royal guards" the other shrugged and went back stage here Fluttershy was with another stallion, one took out a pistol and raised it to his eye and held the trigger "my lady, your sweet prince is here to wisk you away"" one whispered as he looked down the sights. Until one pony kicked his partner straight in the face, the other turned around and bucked Critical in the chest, he exhaled ready to fire off his shot.

Edited January 24, 2014 by Burning Endurance

[dashian500 194]

Steel looked down the barrel unfazed by it "what you going to shot me" steel said "I would advise against it..." He whispers "demons bane" and the sword flys in and goes right to steels hoof "I don't want to fight you"

Fluttershy didn't say anything she cowered behind steel shaking

[OG Blaze 269]

@dashian500

The assassin smirked, he took out a second pistol and pointed it at Critical and Pinkie "These pistols have armor piercing incinerary ammo, it'll go right through you and right in between the eyes of that made behind you, if you step aside you won't get hurt, get up John that kick was weak" The other assassin got to his feet and took out an assault rifle "how would you know? You didn't get hit by it, the assassin pointed the fun at Steel, "Lower the dagger and no one gets hurt" the assassin pointed his gun directly at Pinkie, "or maybe your willing to risk the life of a different mare? Either way someone is not leaving alive" The assassins were hardcore ready to fight hand to hand if need be.

[Mr. Critical 434]

Critical saw the assassin's display, willing to shoot Pinkie, Critical stood in front of the assassin's line of fire. He wasn't about to let them harm her. He was sending out a mental message to the tardis, to come to them discreetly. Within a second, Critical could sense the tardis form behind him, in stealth mode. The thugs couldn't see it, but he knew it was there, and the shields were now around them as well.

 

(Did not make those up. Standard issue for any tardis,)

[OG Blaze 269]

@dashian500

@Mr. Critical

"Playing the hero are we?"

"We don't toy with our targets just shoot him if he's going to get in the way,"

The assassin shrugged and pulled the trigger which shot into Critical, but didn't pierce into Pinkie

The other assassin held his stance and his pistols up, Steel took a step towards them , the assassin cocked his pistol, "let's not make it any bloodier then it needs to be" the assassin smirked

"Critical!" Blaze shouted as he glared at the assassin, "damn it, you'll pay for this"

"shut up and stand there idiot! I'm going to ask one more time, give us the Pegasus"

[dashian500 194]

Steel didn't know about the tardis "number one it's a shirt sword number two only weak fools hide behind guns number three you even try to kill any of us and you will die" steel growled anger fueling his blade causing it to be enveloped in a dark aura

Flutter shy whimpered behind steel shrinking down

[Mr. Critical 434]

The bullet mad contact with Critc's skin. The gun was aimed at his heart. For any normal pony they would be dead in seconds. However, the shields of the tardis stopped the bullt, making It a flesh wound. Critical fell back to the ground. He appeared to be dead.

"CRITIC!"

Pinkie witnessed her friend fall to the ground, eyes swelling up with tears. She held him close, muttering, praying to Celestia that he wasn't dead. This looked like the end for Critical. Buuuuuuut, that's not how he dies. Awakening from his small coma due to the shock in a gasp for air. He looked at the thugs who shot him.

"OW! OW! You shot me!"

The group looked to Critical in shock and awe, especially Pinkie. For once, she couldn't explain this impossibility.

[OG Blaze 269]

@dashian500

"I think I already did try to kill your friend did I not? I mean there's a bullet in his chest"

The assassins were teasing Steel "guns are an extension of ones self, it has more pros then cons, you look scared little filly, afraid your going to look like your buddy over there, his flesh cut by the warm slice of a bullet tearing through skin, don't forget the blood either" The assassin shot into the air and then aimed at Fluttershy "a bit loud ain't it?" The assassins knew that Steel wasnt going to give up the bounty, "fine I guess well do this the hard way, open fire John," the two assassins cocked there guns and began firing at Steel and Fluttershy

 

"No!, Steel protect Fluttershy!" Blaze yelled frantically

[Mr. Critical 434]

Critical sat up on the ground, clenching his flesh wound. Pinkie tried to get him to lie down. Critical wanted this bullet out, and now. Pulling out the sonic that was sent to them, he pointed it at his chest and began to find the sonic frequency. He began to cringe in pain and dropped it. He could here more gun fire in the distance. Picking it up once more, he aimed it at the thug's guns and found the proper frequency, making the guns jam and fall apart. Unfortunately, the screwdriver short circuited and fell apart as well.
"Oh crap. Oh well. "

He fell to the ground, breathing heavily. His gaze came to Pinkie.

"Hey, why the long face. I didn't know party ponies could where a frown."
Pinkie tried to force a smile, pulling him closer to her. Tears falling from her face.

[OG Blaze 269]

@dashian500

@Mr. Critical

"Damn it!" The assassin said aloud "you!" He said as he kicked Pinkie away and punches Critical, the assassin put a grenade in Criticals hand and pulled the ring "we're leaving and your going to sit and stay here, John were moving" the Assassins dashed away and ran through the hallways leaving critical with an explosive surprise "I've got them!" Blaze yelled as he took off after the two assassins.

Edited January 25, 2014 by Burning Endurance

[Mr. Critical 434]

(Wait. Are we anthro ponies, or normal ones?)

 

@, @@dashian500,

Critical looked to the explosive and threw it into a direction outside out side of the shields. He got up and brought Pinkie inside the tardis to protect her. He struggled to the tardis console and materialized the tardis around Steel, Blaze, and Fluttershy.

Edited January 25, 2014 by Mr. Critical

[OG Blaze 269]

The assassins could hear the explosions as they ran away, "idiots" one of them said aloud, they were too afraid to look back, they kept running forward hoping they wouldn't come to get him, they got outside and both started motorcycles off and driving away

 

 

"Damn it there getting away!, let me out of the shield, we have to get them!" Those two assassins could have jeopardized entire mission, now they were escaping, hopefully they would learn and not come back again

 

@Mr. Critical

[Mr. Critical 434]

@,

Critical placed the pink mare on the sofa. She saved him after he saved her. Wobbling to the console, he began to look to the monitor and found the assassin's escaping. Critical heard Blazing's order, and was more than happy to follow. Bringing him inside along with Steel and Fluttershy, Critical began to have the tardis fly after them. The Tool Shed crashed through the ceiling, giving chase to the assassins.

[dashian500 194]

Steel had been shot in the shoulder he put his blade away

fluttershy hugged pinkie "I missed you so much" flutter shy said

Steel sighed "I'm going to go get this taken care of" steel said as he started walking off to the medical wing

Flutter shy hadn't recognized steel until he said something

[OG Blaze 269]

@dashian500

@Mr. Critical

Blaze watched on the monitor as the Tardis gave chase to the assassins, one of the assassins put on glasses pulled out something miniature, bent back on his motorcycle and aimed at the Tardis "uh Critical I thought you said we were hidden!" The assassin looked right at Blaze through the monitor, he pumped something "oh god a grenade launcher" Blaze muttered "Everyone brace for impact!" Blaze yelled as a grenade shell flew the air and hit the Tardis spot on

[Mr. Critical 434]

@,

Critical looked to the monitor and saw it as well. He forgot the cloaking device shuts off when he needs to take flight. THe thing takes too much power to do both. The thug shot a round at the tardis. There was a light rumbling inside.

"Don't worry guys. Princess Celestia and Luna couldn't break into this thing. I highly doubt a weapon the likes of that will make a dent in the exterior."
Another rumble was felt.

"Maybe I should avoid those."