Drew My OC. I Think it Turned Out Okay...

[FlutterShay 46]

 

Ack. This took a while.

So this is my OC, and her name is Bea. (Thinking of renaming her. Any suggestions?) I drew this using Firealpaca. How'd I do? Anything I can do to make this better? (Her cutie mark is a quill, sorry you can't see the whole thing.)

Edited December 9, 2013 by FlutterShay

[Courageous Thunder Dash 7,825]

That's pretty well drawn.

 

My only gripe is the head and muzzle, looks almost like half-male-half-female. Otherwise, really nice pic!

[FlutterShay 46]

That's pretty well drawn.

 

My only gripe is the head and muzzle, looks almost like half-male-half-female. Otherwise, really nice pic!

 

Agreed. I spent so much time trying to make the muzzle look okay that after a while I just kinda gave up. 

[RainbowGlitter 13]

The fact that you didn't close up the bottom section of the eye bothers me. A lot the lines are also very wobbly in some places (bottom part of the chin specifically). Lastly could use some shading too but if you are not quite ready to do that, then its understandable.

 

Good work though, its a simple design but its very cute. For a name I keep thinking "Bec" or "Becca" I definitely think a name starting with B feels right but thats just me.

[FlutterFerret 39]

AMAZING

For the name: Author's Quill, Quill, Aurora, Bonnie, Bo.

[Milk Wave 454]

Nicely drawn, though the black eye kinda scares me a bit :3

If it's actually a black eye, then i'm okay with it. It's just you rarely see it on ponies, evar~

I didn't have any trouble thinking it was a guy/girl from the snout, even though I admit it does look slightly boxy. Snouts can be a hard thing to draw, but the outcome usually is quite nice.

 

Oh and one last thing.

 

"GIVE ME A HUG."

[Skylar 1,641]

Pretty nice, only one thing I would say are the eyes are a bit scary, and the lines overall are a bit jagged, but it's a pain in the ass and very tedious to get all the lines smooth  

 

Well done  

[UserNotFound 964]

It's great, I've got nothing more to add to the other comments... If you want a really smooth line try something like Inkscape... It has a smoothing option there