open Time that Bonds~ RP

[Mr. Critical 434]

With Critical occupied and Lee intentionally getting himself lost, Sun Stone decided to have some fun with the only potential for it. Concentrating on her image, the tardis began to focus an image of herself around a hall that was close to Lee. She wanted to mess with the new meat recruit. With him turning a corner, Lee came face to face with the mysterious blue mare.

"Hey. how are ya doin'?"

She showed up out of no where. She began to circle Lee, a seductive and analytical look on her face. Her piercing eyes looking past his disguise.

 

"You know, if you wanted a tour inside me, all you had to do was ask."
She was trying how far she could go to mess with this guy. She would stop if she would go to far, she does have a sense of boundaries. Until that line is found, she'll just have some fun with him.

"You know, its so nice having new ponies around. Critical can get quite boring at times. But now we have some new visitors. Critical has taken a liking to Aixi quite well, and the new soon to be wed couple. And now you. A changeling without a hive. A very good looking changeling, if I may add."

 

@,

[Trevor Bright 872]

Lee was a little taken aback by the blue mare that appeared out of nowhere, but immediately recognized her and stopped himself from shooting at her. "Wouldn't do much good anyways, she's not physical." He thought this to himself all the while smiling at her.  "Hi. Pretty good. How about yourself?" Lee asked kindly in a conversational manner. "Hmm. Well, I didn't know where to find you, and I didn't want to very well walk up to a wall and start asking for directions. That would look silly."  His grin widened when she mentioned the newly soon to be wed couple. "Good times ahead then. They should make quite the meal. Glad my room is just across from theres." He grimaced as she mentioned his hive and spoke up to clarify. "Actually I have-had...have? Definitely had a hive. I was just banished for a crime I didn't commit. Not that I'd like to go back. Being a pony instead of a changeling is like taking a breath of fresh air after being crammed in to some place tight for a long time. It's amazing." He smiled a genuine smile at her compliment, but managed no to let any other sort of emotion show through, though he knew his grin must've been enough to give him away. "Thanks, but I don't think holes suit me that well, and I always heard that brown was the new black." He laughed at his own joke at the last part, actually falling in to a sitting position he was laughing so hard. "Wow, I am out of it. Laughing that hard. Anyways, was there something you needed? Or perhaps you are willing to give me that tour now?"

 

@@Mr. Critical

[Wayzer 1,418]

@@Mr. Critical, 

 

NightStrike was watching the three ponies getting inside the cart when the mare suddenly turned around and looked straight at him. He was shocked as under normal conditions it would be incredibly hard to see him. Did he move? No for as far as he knew he didn't even blink. His hiding place seemed fine too so that couldn't be the problem either. "Did my ability stop working?" he thought as he looked at himself. "Nope still almost perfectly with the environment." He had always had that ability. He didn't know how though. It was with him ever since he woke up on the edge of the Everfree forest with memory loss.

 

The mare seemed to have left the door open, it was obviously a hint to get inside. He was doubting whether he should go in or not when he thought: "Well if I can't trust them now, I'll never be able to trust them." So he walked up to the cart opened the door and looked inside. What he saw there dazzled him. The inside was made of materials he never saw anywhere before. Also it was surprisingly big, way bigger than it looked from the outside.

 

When he started exploring he was glad to have a good sense of direction because it was enormous. He just hoped he would stumble into somepony soon.

[PurplePony 484]

@Mr. Critical, The Dragonborn, Wayzer

 

Critic had at last rejoined her party, however now that she thought about it he did not return alone. Aixi felt two more souls present. They were familiar, although she only recognized the most recent one. She sensed him not all that far away. Smiling to her self she thought 'So, they have come.'

She felt slightly uneasy, but there was no turning back. She just had to be cautious. 'I must behave properly.' 

Aixi straightened herself out, siting up tall. She took a swig from her bottle and giggled thinking not everything would change. She put the bottle down and looked towards Critic, "So, the others have arrived? I wonder when they will make an appearance. I am sure they both have questions of sorts, not only directed at me I suppose either. This place rather intriguing, it truly is remarkable." She finished smiling at Critic.

 

Aixi's stomach roared and rumbled, she placed the bottle to her lips once more in hopes of filling the empty void. It was begging to become unbearable.  She knew it wouldn't stop, at least not tonight. 'I will go out tomorrow morning before we set off again.' She thought to herself, attempting to convince her body to stop making those awful noises.

Edited January 27, 2014 by PurplePony

[Mr. Critical 434]

@@PurplePony,

Critic heard the groans from Aixi's stomach. Intrigued and worried simultaneously. He put on afake smile.

"Yeah. It is. But it does get kinda dull around here. Sure the observatory, pool, and hugeness of it is rather amazing. But don't worry about them."

'wait, them?'

"Sun Stone will take care of them if they had any questions. I addressed Lee on the certain places to avoid, and basic ground rules. He should be fine. I haven't met the other one though, but I'm sure he will be fine."

Critical looked towards Aixi. Her stomach began to rumble once more. Bringing Critics interest and worry with it.

 

"Aixi, are you feeling okay? Do you want something to eat, or something? I can probably get it for you if you want. Just ask and I can get you it."

Critic didn't like this rumbling. Aixi didn't really eat anything, she was most likely hungry. But secretly, yet not enough, he was eager to please her. He had always been at the front line of everything, it was nice to be following orders for once. He just wansn't about to admit it to anypony.

[PurplePony 484]

@Mr. Critical,

 

She smiled, Critic looked genuinely shocked. He didn't know the other pony had arrived. 'His skills will clearly come in hoof,I just have to remain weary.' She thought cautioning herself.

"That is good. I am glad that at least some being is aware other than myself. Also that is convenient. I do so appreciate Sun. She is wonderful and quite the pleasure to have around." She said sincerely.

 

Aixi noticed Critic staring, and by now she felt the others to. "No, I don't get hungry. I am fine right now. I don't actually need to eat food. So please don't worry. I will head out tomorrow morning and take care of it before we go hopefully. I do not wish to go out tonight, so it best wait till sun up anyway." She smiled at Critic and kissed him softy on the cheek after speaking.

She knew Critic was concerned and only wanted to help her, but she wasn't sure if he could do anything, or if she would want him to for that matter. 'For now, it is best not to worry about it.' She said to herself.

 

Aixi looked about the group and pondered a moment before she began, "Well, this is your celebration, Night and Vi what would you guys like to do right now? It's your choice." Aixi finished cheerfully.

[Wayzer 1,418]

@@PurplePony, @@Mr. Critical,  @, 

 

NightStrike was wandering around in the Tardis. He was still amazed by all the technology and the sheer hugeness of it. There where so much rooms. He just couldn't imagine how this all would fit in such a tiny cart. He even found a pool somewhere. "How is it possible to have a POOL IN A CART!" He thought to himself.

 

But after a while, he had quite enough of it. After all he was still searching for that group and they have to be around here somewhere. So he spend the next few minutes actively searching for them, but with no luck. He couldn't find them at all. He was about to give up and just get some sleep in one of the rooms when he heard ponies talking. "Dang am I glad to hear that!" He thought to himself while walking in the direction of the voices.

 

The closer he got the more he could hear. 2 mares and two stallions. Probably the same ponies he saw before when he followed the group. He was both anxious and eager to meet the rest of them. When he finally found the room, he approached it, coughed and knocked the door. 

[Mr. Critical 434]

@@Wayzer,

Critical heard somepony knock at the door. It was probably Lee come to introduce himself to the rest of the group. But upon opening the door, he was greeted by a stallion he did not recognize. He couldn't be a threat, the tardis would have locked itself if anypony so much as reached for the door. He began to eye the mysterious the stallion. Then it hit him, this must have been the contact that Aixi was supposed to meet. Critic put on a greeting face.

 

"Hello. You must be the contact that Sun Stone went to meet earlier today. Welcome to the tardis; my home."

Critical gave a small bow to the guest, inviting him to his odd home.

"I suppose you have some questions you would like to have answered. The other guy had some questions, so feel free to ask away. And to get some questions out of the way. This is a time machine. It goes to any point in time and space. Its bigger on the inside, which I'm sure you already noticed. Just don't ask about your future or anypony else here. Now, is there any questions you still have that you want to ask?"

 

@,

"Ooh, eager to see around, I see. Alright then. I'll show you around."
With that Sun Stone began to lead Lee through the infinite interior of the tardis. Showing him the various rooms within. Lee pointing to various rooms at random, each of which they visited for a short while. Such as the Grand Library, the Olympic size pool, the Observatory, and various other rooms. Their wasn't enough time to look at them all, such a tour would take days to complete. She enjoyed showing the stallion her interior, Critical had been there for so long, his sense of wonder was all but lost by her. She felt nice knowing somepony else was admiring her with a sense of wonder again. Even if it was for a little while.

 

Concluding the tour at the console room, She felt it was time to bring the tour to a halt.

"And this, Lee, Is the console room. It is how Critic flies me. Don't bother trying to fly it. The controls are isomorphic, only responding to his touch. So to anypony else, their just pretty buttons that do absolutely nothing. Now, have I satisfied your curiosity about me?"

Edited January 27, 2014 by Mr. Critical

[Trevor Bright 872]

All the while walking around, Lee was looking in wonder. This was amazing. It was bigger on the inside! Nothing like that had ever even seemed possible before, even in Lee's imagination. As they looked through the various rooms, Lee smiled in wonder and delight. He'd have to remember the library, he loved reading. Sometime soon, he should come back and read as many of the books as possible. Then they came to the pool. "A POOL? Isn't that just a bit over kill?" Even though he was being sarcastic, he was very impressed. He thought of jumping in to the pool and swimming around a bit, but Sun Stone started to leave so he ran out after her. They eventually ended back at the control room. Sun Stone explained how Mr. Critical controlled her. A sudden urge compelled him to test what she said. What came over him he wasn't sure. Even though it was stupid, he thought he'd try.

 

She asked him if he had any questions.

Lee nodded, then smiled. "Yes. Did you forget I was a changeling? And that I could do this?" With a burst of green flame he turned in to a perfect replica of Mr. Critical. He then walked right over to the control panel and pushed up on the first lever he saw. 

 

@@Mr. Critical

Edited January 28, 2014 by The Dragonborn

[Wayzer 1,418]

@@Mr. Critical,

 

NightStrike was waiting in front of the door when it was opened by a stallion. He greeted him:  "Well it seems that you're the owner of this so called time machine am I right? To be honest, I don't understand a single thing of it. For example I don't know, and actually want to know how is it possible to cramp up so many rooms in such a small cart. It's unnatural I guess, if you think I can understand you can try to explain it to me, otherwise don't waste your time doing so." He smiled at the stallion.

 

He was kinda anxious talking to this new stallion, but he was sure he would get over it. Finally, he would meet some other ponies, it had been way too long.

 

"Well ehm before I join you all and such, do you want to introduce me to your companions? I already met Aixi, and met this Sun Stone." He said, he was still wondering how she got out of his room back in the hotel without him noticing.

 

Then he realised something: "Oh no, speaking about introducing, I haven't even properly introduced myself. I'm NightStrike, I can't really tell you much about me as I don't even know that much myself. The only thing that might be important now for you to know is that I'm an archer, though I can handly myself pretty well with a knife too, So, how do they call you?"

Edited January 28, 2014 by Wayzer

[Mr. Critical 434]

@,

Sun Stone gave a chuckle at the changelings attempt to control the tardis.

"No, mister Lee. I know that you are a changeling, but it only responds to Mr. Critical's bio-signature. He can shut off the isomorphism, but occasionally to show a guest, but guests are very rare. You may look like him, but, not on a genetic level. But, I do find your efforts very adorable."

Sun Stone flipped the switch back to its original position. And disappeared. She then reappeared above the console, bigger and bluer than before (See link in signature to get an idea of it.)

"Well, that concludes the tour of me. Do you have any other questions?"

 

@@Wayzer,

Critical looked to Nightstrike. Greetings, I am Critical; Mr Critical. Pleased to meet you."
Critical turned around to point to his friends.

"That over there is Night Song and his lovely fiancée, Violet."
The two gave a wave, greeting the new companion.

"And That over there is Aixi, which you have already met"
She gave a wave to Nightstrike as well.

"Great, now that we are all aquaintesd, do you need anything, want anything?"
 

[Wayzer 1,418]

@@Mr. Critical,

 

NightStrike looked around the room and greeted the others. Then he turned to Critical again: "Well you surely have an impressive home here. I have to say so. It's wonderful, nothing like I've ever seen before. Well not that I've seen much except for the forest but I guess you get the point. There is just this one thing that has been bothering quite a while. It's Sun Stone, she did things I never saw a pony do before. First she vanished, one moment she was still there and the other moment she was just gone. And then the sect time, I was hiding in the shadows and she turned around and just looked me straight in my eyes. Like it was totally obvious I was there. I never had that before, how does she do that?

 

NightStrike was also feeling quite sleepy, he didn't really sleep for most of the night, and didn't sleep much before that either. He might not get tired fast, but even he has his limits, and he was exhausted now. So he said to Critical: "Well I'd surely like to talk to you ponies some more, but it seems that I'm really really tired. Is there any place here where I could get some rest>"

[Mr. Critical 434]

@@Wayzer,

Critical gave a small chuckle at Nightstrike's question. He wasn't aware of the connection between Sun Stone and the tardis. Might as well enlighten him.

"The way she disappeared is because what you were talking to wasn't a real pony. In fact, you were talking to nothing and something."
Nightstrike was confused. And Critical wasn't doing a good job at explaining.

"Sun Stone was an image cast by the tardis. In fact, you were talking to the tardis itself. And for how she knew where you were. The tardis sensed your presence. And as for looking at you. She was just messing with you. She likes to mess with ponies like that."

Nightstrike looked agitated at the blue mare's actions. Critical assured him it was all in good fun.

 

After Nightstrike was feeling tired, Critical escorted him to an empty guest room.

"This shall be your room. If you want something changed, just tell Sun Stone and she will make the changes. I'm sure you don't want me to explain this to you right now so I'll just let you sleep. Also, before I go. If you want to go to somewhere, just think of that place and it will take you to there."

Critical opened his door to reveal an empty room with a bed and blanket.

" Good night, Nightstrike. We shall speak in the morning."

[PurplePony 484]

@Wayzer,

 

Aixi saw the dark stallion enter the room, 'Ahhh night Strike. I was indeed right about your presence being near.' She thought to herself. 

Getting up she walked over to Night Strike And looked him over carefully.She smiled to him as she spoke, "I see you have found your way to us. I trust that it wasn't too difficult.."

 

"I am terribly sorry to have to leave at this moment, please do excuse me. I have some personal business to take care of." She turned her head as she talked adressing the entire group.

Mr. Critical

She kissed Critic gently on the cheek, "Love I will be back sometime tonight, I will see you then alright?" and with that she started out of the room.

'I just can not stand this any longer. I need to find something to fill this emptyness my stomach just wont stop.' She complained to herself '

 

Aixi was just about out of the room when she turned abruptly realizing she had forgotten something, or rather somepony, "Critc, I feel fine now, but I may need some assistance in a bit. Would you acompany me for a little while?"

Edited January 28, 2014 by PurplePony

[Wayzer 1,418]

@@PurplePony, @@Mr. Critical,

"Nah, it wasn't a real problem finding you. I thank you for your offer to me to join your group. Otherwise I would probably still be 'secretly' following you." NightStrike replied. He chuckled a bit at that last part. "I'll go get some sleep soon, so I guess we can talk some more tomorrow."

 

He followed Critical to his guest room. He was still amazed at the number of rooms and the sheer hugeness of all the hallways and corridors. When he arrived to his guest room he heard Critical saying something about changing his room. He was eager to try it, but felt too tired to do it now.

 

He trotted over to the bed and thought about everything that happened during this day. He always did this before he went to sleep, it helps him to form plans if necessary. and it's a good mental exercise. "Weird" He though "I both can't wait to get to know them and tell them things, but I'm also really anxious of doing so. But yeah, I'll try to get to know them anyway."

 

After summarizing the whole day and the day in his head, he quickly fell asleep. It didn't took him much effort at all,

Edited January 28, 2014 by Wayzer

[Mr. Critical 434]

@@PurplePony,

Critical gave Aixi a kiss back before she left.

"All right beautiful. I'll be waiting in bed. I'll leave the door unlocked for you."
With that, Aixi departed to do... what ever it is that she does. Critical began to make his way back to his quarters and prepare for bed. It was pretty late, even for a light sleeper, like Critic. He was almost there when Aixi returned, asking for Critical's assistance with something. He was more than happy to assist her.

"Of course I'll help you. Just lead the way."
Aixi and Critical began to walk to the console room.

 

Eventually, curiosity won over Critic. He was not one for prying into other pony's business, but his lost to his own sense of wonder.

"So, Aixi. What is it that you need me to do? Just a little heads up at what I'm in for."

Critical opened the door leading to the outside. They both stepped off the stair and onto the cold ground. Critical awaiting an answer, stood and looked to Aixi, awaiting his answer. Hopefully it will be simple for him to accomplish this goal his lover requires of him.

[PurplePony 484]

@Mr. Critical,

 

Aixi chuckled, "I suppose I should tell you that part hey? follow me and we shall talk." She said to Critic as she took the lead,walking off into the forest.

 

"Well, I feel like I should be slightly more intoxicated," Aixi began.

Critic followed closly listening to her, "I feel that once I eat I will feel a lot better, but I think the affects of the alchol will hit me at full force. I am not the best with directions normally, I fear I wouldn't make it back until morning." AIxi laughed at that, she knew it to be too true.

 

The couple trotted off deeper into the forest together, Not too much later the two came into a small clearing,  Aixi trotted off to the center and took a seat, Aix closed her eyes and concentrated on her spirit energy pushing it deep within her. Her body had a familiar shimmering white glow and as she opened her eyes only the whites could be seen. In a transe like state Aixi opened her mouth, as she did a strong wind came rushing towards her from all angles, The wind seemed to envelop her as she threw her head back and let the waves of spirits rush over and into her being. When at last the 'wind' died down Aixi spoke, "Take thee away, it is not my place bestow judgment upon you." Aixi muttered in a low mallotic voice. For a single moment multiple spirits danced and rejoiced around Aixi, visible only for a moment, for as soon as they appeared they had once again vanished.

 

Aixi collapsed into the soft grass she felt her body give way as she rested a moment.

[Mr. Critical 434]

@@PurplePony,

Critical watched her performance. The energy she emitted was not like anything he had encountered. She began to feed on the spirits. the winds rushing them into her mouth as she engulfed them one after the other. To most, they would find this terrifying. Yet Critical found it quite intriguing. After she was done taking her fill, Critical could here her mumble some words, he was too far to hear her, unfortunately. After a while, Aixi collapsed to the ground. Worried, Critical wen to go and see if she was okay.

 

Critical reached her and began to see if she was okay. Critical could feel her breath. It seemed normal, so that eased his worries a bit. However, he couldn't just leave her there. Picking her up and placing her on his back so she wouldn't fall off, Critical began to carry her back to the tardis. He knew he could just summon it to them, but he liked the idea of helping and escorting a lovely mare to her home, when she wasn't able to do so herself. It made him feel a bit chivalrous. It was a bit of a walk back, but it didn't bother Critical much.

[PurplePony 484]

@Mr. Critical,

 

Aixi felt herself being lifted up and carried away. She felt her body move without instruction, but she couldn't move it on her own. The world spun so fast. She felt dizzy and ill. When the world snapped to and Aixi realized she was a top Critic. She smiled realizing that he was taking care of him, "Thank you." She breathed quierly to critic.

 

Aixi used her wings tos push herself off of him. She landed on her rear making a rather loud thump. The alchol finally set in, Aixi didn't feel a thing. "Thank you *Hic* for coming with me *Hic*. I can walk though." She complained walking slightly into Critic.

 

She smiled and laughed. She felt good, she felt better and more confident as well, 'I didn't think I could bring that many to me, I am getting stronger as well.' She beamed at her thoughts. 

Aixi quickened her pace and leaped in front of Critic And kissed him, "I just want to than you for everything you have done for me I don't know what I can do to re pay you. I am just so happy and you mean the world to me Critic." She said nuzzling him affectionatly before toppling over.

 

Aixi giggled and rolled onto her back, "The stars are so pretty." She smiled feeling satisfied.

Edited January 28, 2014 by PurplePony

[Mr. Critical 434]

@@PurplePony,

"Think nothing of it, Aixi. You have no need to repay me. Helping ponies is what I do."
Aixi gave Critical gave him a kiss, and he could taste the alcohol on her lips. He didn't mind it. After breaking the kiss, Aixi began to nuzzle his short mane. After a bit, they fell over onto the ground. Critical nudged himself over to get closer to her. She was complimented the stars on their beauty.

"Yeah. they are pretty."
'But not as beautiful as you, Aixi.'

"Would you like to stay here for a bit?"
She gave a nod, or at least he thought it was a nod. The two lovers laid on the ground, gazing out into the vastness of space.

 

Nudging Aixi a bit, he pointed to a blue star.

"See that star..."
He waited for her to find it.

"That star will be apart of the solar system that will hold the Princess of the Equestrian space empire. The grand daughter of Twilight Sparkle. And that one..."

He pointed to another.

"That one is currently home to the largest bazaar in the universe."
 Critical wanted to share his knowledge of the universe of the stars and the other races residing in them.

[PurplePony 484]

@Mr. Critical

 

Aixi layed back in wonder and amazment, Critic shared such amazing stories. They left her in awe. She cuddled close still gazing at the stars. Breathing in slowly and deep, exhaling all just the same. It felt so good to breath in life, to smell the air and the sweet grass. It felt wonderful. In between hicups she asked "What else can you show me?"

Her ears perked in interest and hope. So many things to learn, the possibilities were endless and the few pleaures that Critic allowed brough Aixi great enjoyment. She loved to learn. "I don't want to know anything that affects me, but what else can you show me?" She exclaimed excitedly jumping to her hooves.

 

As soon as she had jumped up she was down again, she giggled to hide her embarasment. The alchol was clearly taking affect, although she was not intoxicated she was feeling a happy buzz.

"Whoops." She said placing her hoof over her eyes.

 

Batting her lashes at Critic she held out a hoof and asked sweetly, "Can you be a dear and help me up? I would be ever so gratful to recieve the help a such a fine young stallion."

Edited January 29, 2014 by PurplePony

[Mr. Critical 434]

@@PurplePony,

Giving a chuckle, Critical arose and pulled her to her hooves.

"Why of course. I would be honored to help a beautiful princess.

On her hooves, and a bit wobbly. Critical was there if she fell again. She wanted to know what goes on in the rest of the universe and Critical would be happy to.

"Well. Theres the diamond falls of Itio. Or maybe the Grand Library, that holds every book in existence. Or..."

Critical gave her a deep kiss, tasting a strange taste on lips. It was there yet not.

"Maybe the falls of love on Tripticata. Anywhere and everywhere in any point in time, right before our very hooves. All you need is ask and we can go there."

 

Critical gave her another passionate kiss. Accidentally letting out a slight moan. Hopefully she didn't notice. Critical loved her, willing to show her things no other pony could see for centuries. He wanted to protect her from her fate, and he was going to. Breaking the kiss, he looked into her eyes.

"So, Princess Aixi. Is there anything you want to see, any sight you wish to expieriance? I am at your beckoned call."

[PurplePony 484]

@Mr. Critical

 

Critic had pulled her towards him, to give her a kiss, she noticed his soft moan, it pleased her to feel his happiness.

Aixi thought for a moment, there really was only one thing she would like to see. She just wanted to know to see, but she knew she counldn't, she never could. At least not in this life. Pondering a little longer she began, "I would like to see a distant planet something obscure. Something I would never be able to see!" She grew excited by her words.

"Could we really go some place like that?" She marvelled at his power.

"Oh, Critic could we go and visit another galaxay, one that's beautiful and not heavily populated. I want to be alone with just you and an amazing breath taking world." She hoped he would say yes to her request.

 

Although it would not bring her the most joy, thinking about it now it was a pretty good alternative. Sloppily swinging her hooves around his neck she hung off of him getting as close as she could. Aixi kissed him deeply and passionatly, almost unwilling to let him go.

[Mr. Critical 434]

@@PurplePony,

Her kiss was intoxicating. He enjoyed his time with her, and if there was a world she wanted to see. One that was obscure and yet beautiful. And he knew just the world in time and space that she would enjoy greatly. Though he would have to break the kiss. Seperating from her, he answered her question.

"If a new world you wish to see, then so shall it be."
Sending a message to the tardis, it materialized before them. With a clop of his hooves, the doors opened. Escorting her in, holding her hoof, Critical went over to the console. Aixi was ecstatic. A new planet to see. Placing the coordinates in the tardis wheezed to life and was taking them to their destination.

 

Within seconds, the tardis landed on the surface.

"Well, my lady. Welcome to the beach of Ta'kiil. 30,000 years in the future."

Critical walked over to the doors and opened them to reveal their destination.

 

 

The sight was breath taking. The mountains and the planet rising above it. All new to the mare. This was their time to be alone. The others were asleep for the next few hours so it was just them.

"Well, my princess. What do you think?"

[PurplePony 484]

The planet was breath taking. It was stunning. Aixi looked about her mouth gaping wide. "Oh Critic!" She exclaimed.

"This is fantastic." She breathed.

She stars shimmered with such brilliant radiencey. "Is it safe to walk about outside? I would love to explore with you, maybe find a nice quiet spot to just talk and be ourselves." She asked hoping to get to see more.

 

She simled to herself as her thoughts ran rampent, 'Oh, this could be fun! I want to take him. I want to be away from the others.. I know our room is sound proof but there's something about being confined in a space that I don't much care for. I would much rather be free.' She chuckled at her daring side.

In reality she didn't care who watched what. It was what is spoken she kept heavily guarded, other than that she enjoyed all attention be it good or bad. Her thoughts wandered a little more off track as she dreamed away.

 

Snapping back into reality Aixi realized something else. Critic hadn't exactly responded yet, or at least she didn't notice if he had or not. She had been too busy with her own thoughts to pay any mind, She stared blankly at Critic swaying back and forth.