planning (searching)A journey through time and space. (adventure)

[Mr. Critical 434]

Plot: for four years now, Mr. Critical has lived in ponyville under the guise of a film critic, working for the ponyville daily. But he has a secret. The Critic has intelligence to vast for any normal pony to have. But then again, he's not exactly in the demographic of normal. Some strange events are unfolding through out the universe, and Critic is dead set on finding out what it is. But he can't do it alone...

 

OOC: this is my first rp. And im doing a two person rp, because its easier to keep track of only two people. Yes I know this a shameless self projection and ego booster. I project because it helps me rp better. Its called immersion. Besides, people say an ego is good to have. At least the ones I talk to. And yes, I am a fan of doctor who, which explains the whole... tardis thing. But, I will use my own ideas and won't directly steal from the series. I will make up my own ideas. And you are free to contribute.

 

Rules:

-This is an adventure rp(and depending on who joins and where they take this maybe some others) so stay with the critic unless you want to make things more dramatic. In which case, let me know if you're going to do that.

-No godmodding. I will not stress this enough. Don't. Do it. But I may throw in some convieniances in there to assist the heroes. Hey, good guys gotta win some how. But I will try to make it as plausable as possible.

-I'll be making an OOC if you want to talk off... screen? So we can discuss where we would like the story to go.

-No mary/gary sue. Even my character has limits. Don't need yours to make him look bad with their... perfectness.

-Keep it clean. I will allow swearing, but if things get a little, um... "hot", I must advise you to keep it pg-13... or do it off screen. Speaking of which...

-adding characters are advised. There are only the two of us. And you can't have a story with two people. So, I was gonna do that later. You can too, but tell me first.

-and anything else I forget. You know what they are... hopefully.

 

Players:

Commander Tangent - Dr. Icarus

Appleshy - Appleshy

||FlyingGrace|| - Suki

Thunder-dash - Thunder Dash

Lonewolk1735 - Casual Connor

 

OOC area.

http://mlpforums.com/topic/82889-ooc1on1-a-journey-through-time-and-space-adventure/

Edited December 24, 2013 by Mr. Critical

[Anon In Equestria 57]

Hay man I this sounds good I wouldn't mine doing this here is my oc casual connor let me know if that's cool

 

http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/casual-connor-r5086

[Mr. Critical 434]

Holy criment, someone actually wants to join. This has completely shattered my perspective on life.

[Anon In Equestria 57]

So are we a go

[Mr. Critical 434]

I don't know. Not a lot of people were responding, and to be honest I'm having second thoughts. I think I'm gonna kill this rp, until I can rebuild it from the ground up. Maybe I'll remove the 1onq thing when I do.

[Pat.Rio.T. 305]

Actually I think this idea is pretty interesting, but somepony already responded so...         (I wonder if that's what everypony thinks.)   

Edited December 23, 2013 by Pat.Rio.T.

[Commander Tangent 861]

@@Mr. Critical,

 

I would be up for this as well. But you seem to have already found a person. 

[Mr. Critical 434]

I never started the rp. I was thinking of ending it because the response was slow. But if you want to play I guess I'll checknout your ocs and see which would be good for the role... or I could remove the 1 on 1 thing if no one else joins.

[Courageous Thunder Dash 7,825]

I'm pretty interested in this RP. I'm still debating on what OC to use though. 

[Mr. Critical 434]

Well, if people are actually interested. Then... alright. "A journey through time and space is back on. I put the discussion or OOC page in the first post. Put your oc here, and we can discuss where this rp will go.

[Courageous Thunder Dash 7,825]

@@Mr. Critical,

 

Ok, it's time travel, so I think Thunder Dash will have to do. Disregard the "brother of Rainbow Dash" thing, as that was way back when I first put him in the OC catalog and replace with a random pegasus, if you want to.

 

http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/thunder-dash-r1861 

[Mr. Critical 434]

Ya may want ta fix the link to your character.

[Courageous Thunder Dash 7,825]

http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/thunder-dash-r1861

 

There you go. Here's the right link. 

[CeruleanPoptart 14]

If you don't mind i want to join!

With my oc Governess Aka Suki!

shes not dead Thats just her hole story from beging to end 

I would like to start the rp (IF I GET TO BE IN IT) as her 7 regeration

[Mr. Critical 434]

Starting to really considering removing that one on one thing. If you want to join, I'll need a profile or an mcgee page... or both.

[CeruleanPoptart 14]

http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/suki-mengle-grace-r4537

btw heres the link just in case u were to silly to look in the sig

[**Appleshy** 19]

I'll join, if that's okay. I'll use Appleshy. She's quite the genius, too.

[Commander Tangent 861]

Ok, I think I will use this guy if we are doing a time travel setting http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/blood-rift-r5365

 

If not him, then possibly this guy. http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/dr-icarus-gold-icarus-r4796

Edited December 24, 2013 by Commander Tangent

[Mr. Critical 434]

Okay, this is how this is going down.Since more people joied than anticipated, I changed the number allowed. So,nif your name is up on the first post,nthen you're in. There's a link in said post taking you to an OOC page for this rp. There we can discuss where the story will go. If you want to try something unexpected and want it to be a suprise to the other players, message me and I'll think about what you will propose. Since we have some lovely ladies joining us today(like it says in the rules, I think) I will allow romance. If there are any other questions, head to the other page.

Edited December 24, 2013 by Mr. Critical

[Dawn Arethia Whooves 9]

just like to ask could my character dawn be in this, i have many different back stories for her many of which include the doctor (right now her backstory is the one where celestia banishes her for 3200 years sooooo) and i am also a doctor who fan so i know everything,the only thing you have to judge dawn off of is her personality so here

 

considering she was banished for 3200 years,dawn has now become half self absorbed half seeing the world in eyes that tell her a lot of things are cruel and hate her although she's recently learned that isn't the case the world doesn't give a crap about her and that's led her to be a bittersweet character,she'll be nice one minute and horrifically mean the next although her "bad side" as she calls it only come's out when she's really angry with some one.She can act selfless if given the chance and prefers to stay to the shadows but once you have her on an adventure no matter how hard you try,you can't lose her,she may stray behind but she'll catch up later,even if she gets lost mostly,she's a nice alicorn with a lot of potential she just doesn't know because she's still ajusting to society

(NOT over powered she can't use magic for anything but levitating something light or kinda flying) 

 

wow...i didn't mean to make that so long.....well there's dawn for you! hope you like her..oh yeah and theres this WHOOOLLLEEE part about the doctor that i didn't put in so i'll just put it reeaally simply 

 

met the doctor,went on adventures never got a good bye 

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