Critique on my Fluttershy drawing

[SrFrog 927]

Yup, just wanted some constructive criticism on this drawing I did a couple of months ago.

P.s. I kind of edited it and cleaned it a bit since than.

[Boofyhooves 78]

Only thing is the mouth seems a bit light. I love it otherwise. It's boofiful.

[Little Miss Fluttershy 678]

It's so beautiful! <3 Looks like an awesome drawing to me! Nice work SrFrog! (:

[Daring Do 195]

Is great! This is, I presume, a sketch, so the rough edges won't be a problem if you draw for seriousness... right? It is somewhat difficult to critique, not knowing what the body looks like, but from what I can see, everything is a-okay!

[RomansIII 71]

THAT LINE IN HER HAIR JUST ABOVE HER FOREHEAD IS SENDING ME INSANE. Otherwise good job. I quite like how it looks drawn. A bit ruff is good

[Enigma 200]

Awesome~ The best advice I can give is to flip your drawing horizontally, whenever I do that with photoshop it's easier to see where you're going wrong. Even turning it upside down is a good way of checking proportions~

[Nah 3,182]

Not too bad, its really cute! :3

[SrFrog 927]

Thanks for the feedback and yeah this actually started as a sketch so it's really on the rough side.

[ZomBrony 347]

this is great, though I hope you keep working on it, colour always makes drawings look better