Oc review. Sinestro Coprs.

[Mr. Critical 434]

S'up ya'll. I need a bit of an OC review. Ya see, I have serious case of superhero fever right now and when I made a superhero RP, it didn't help. So, I may or may not have made a super hero OC... kinda. So, I wanted to see what you guys think. Here he is. Sinestro Corps. Aaron:

 

 

His backstory is that he was selected by the Sinestro Corps. because of her intimidating demeanor but was sent to some uncharted peace of space because he had no killing instinct. Basically the sinestro corps are the green lanterns, if they were comprised of psychopaths and serial killers. Since the rings are "The most powerful weapon in the universe" I placed a point system on him to give him some limitations. Ergo, no more points, no more powers. Even the ones that don't require points. Meaning he can't talk to anyone in Equestria, no flying, and probably no breathing. The powers include Illusions, creating constructs, intangibility, etc. I wan't to know what you guys think.

[SkyBound 829]

Hello @Mr. Critical.  As you are seeking critique and input for your character that you have created, your thread has been moved to the Non-Pony Artwork section.

 

Given that I know little pertaining to comic book superheroes, I would not be able to offer much help in fleshing out the backstory of your character.  The only additions I would suggest for the character himself is to add more about his personality, as all we know of him as of now is that he is rather intimidating but with not killing instinct.  You could also go further as to what brought about his selection to be in the Sinestro Corps and other such details.

 

On the drawing itself, however, is where I can offer the most input.  However, without more information on the character, my critiques could be found rather baseless.  Anyway, seeing as he seems to be in his teenage years, the attire chosen would be fitting (if a little overused) for one that would be considered a loner, which would also constitute to the intimidation factor.  However, the spikes on the shoulder seem rather unncessary to me and may be better off removed.  The proportions would also need to be adjusted, as his arms and legs are of differing lengths right now.

 

Keep in mind that these are simply my opinions but I hope they were a help in some way.  Overall, this is a fine start to a character with simple need of being fleshed out a little more in his backstory and personality.  Best of luck!  

[Mr. Critical 434]

@@SkyBound,

Thank you kind sir. Your feedback shall be useful to me. I shall take what you have given me and see what I can do with this premise.