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writing First short story "Vision of a Forest"


Virgil

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I have a lot of stories floating around in my head but this was the first time I've ever wrote one down. I wrote this I was just coming out of a bit of a bout of melancholy, so I felt like I was almost under a compulsion to write it. It was rather cathartic... but anyway please let me know what you think and no need to hold back ( even the harshest critique won't put me in a bad mood, I like honest criticism actually ). I do realize it's very short, but I suppose I was more concerned with expressing a very specific set of ideas and emotions without any additions. Interested to hear people's feedback. :)

Vision of a Forest.docx

Edited by Virgil_Harris

I know there's a place you walked
Where love falls from the trees
My heart is like a broken cup
I only feel right on my knees.
I spit out like a sewer hole
Yet still receive your kiss
How can I measure up to anyone now
After such a love as this?

       The Who

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