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This is my Teen Wolf oc Carmet Bizet. And don't worry, the show may be called "Teen Wolf" but she is legal so she is okay to be nude anyway. Censored or not. XD

 

I hope it's censored enough for the site D: if not, I will take it down and such.

 

Anyway, I'd love some critique! The red lines were already done by my good friend.

 

[Mlpfan185 1,763]

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[Quarium 108]

Good anatomy, I like it a lot. I am not too experienced with humans myself but I can tell how much of a good job this is. Keep it up.

I believe the right leg might be bending inwards a bit much though.

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Overall it is a very good design, however, I feel like you might have struggled a bit with the posing. I mean, it is very good, but I can not quite put a finger on what is off. I am going to give you my little secret. This is, well, the best thing ever.

 

http://www.alienthink.com/

 

I bought and took this course, wow. It is crazy amounts of good. If you don't believe me, the first 12 lessons are free.

 

Thank you! I was actually thinking the same thing... my biggest problem is the visible arm :/ I just feel like I can't get the angle right.

 

But oh! O: Thank you so much! This is so cool! I'll definitely check it out

Good anatomy, I like it a lot. I am not too experienced with humans myself but I can tell how much of a good job this is. Keep it up.

I believe the right leg might be bending inwards a bit much though.

Thank you! As for the right leg? I know what you mean D: I'm going to try and "twist" it around a bit so it's not so weird-bendy stuff

[Jammo 986]

Does your OC have a phone number?

I um.. Want to share keen interests with her. Yeah. Keen interests.

What's her favourite candle scent? Lilac?

I uhh.. Want to know for my own interests. Not planning anything.

[Quarium 108]

Thank you! I was actually thinking the same thing... my biggest problem is the visible arm :/ I just feel like I can't get the angle right.

 

But oh! O: Thank you so much! This is so cool! I'll definitely check it out

Thank you! As for the right leg? I know what you mean D: I'm going to try and "twist" it around a bit so it's not so weird-bendy stuff

 

Good, good. Is okay though, you seem to be more skilled than me at human anatomy, I draw in too much of a cartoony way to have a great grasp on this and I don't practice realistic either cuz I'm dumb xD

 

but shiz, do you have a thread or gallery I could look at and follow? a tumblr would be preferable! Thanks so much~

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Does your OC have a phone number?

I um.. Want to share keen interests with her. Yeah. Keen interests.

What's her favourite candle scent? Lilac?

I uhh.. Want to know for my own interests. Not planning anything.

1-555-555-5555 C:

Keen interests: murder.

Favourite scented candle: sandalwood

 

XD

[Mlpfan185 1,763]

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Good, good. Is okay though, you seem to be more skilled than me at human anatomy, I draw in too much of a cartoony way to have a great grasp on this and I don't practice realistic either cuz I'm dumb xD

 

but shiz, do you have a thread or gallery I could look at and follow? a tumblr would be preferable! Thanks so much~

EHHHHHH, I dunno. XD Skilled? I guess. Sorry for being modest but like, I barely draw humans XD I'm honestly terrible at it. I'm so much better at drawing ponies and animals! And cartoony is the best style <3 C:

 

UHHHH well, I literally just made a Deviantart today XD my username is chai-wolf on there. As for Tumblr? I don't post my art there (barely ever) but it's barred-owl CX I follow back

"The man in black fled through the desert, and the gunslinger followed."

If you are quoting Stephen King to me... then it's been decided. We must marry.

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Then you would travel East with me, sai?

Was there ever a trap to match the trap of love?

[Mlpfan185 1,763]

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"The road and mysteries along it calls out to none, as it calls to the young."

*raspberries* Oh jeeze... it's been so long I can't think of anything good to say back. XD Allow me to fetch my copy and re-read it XD;;;

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I have a bookcase dedicated to Stephen King. Between Douglas Adams, Daniel Quinn, Stephen King, and Eoin Colfer; they have shaped my world as a writer, and as a person.

I don't have enough Stephen King to fill a book case on its own, but I do have enough to fill two shelves! Including works when he was writing as Richard Bachman. I've never read anything by Daniel Quinn or Eoin Colfer though O: what sorts of stories do they do?

[Mlpfan185 1,763]

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OH MY! You have missed out.

 

Ishmael - Daniel

Artemis Fowl Series - Eoin Colfer

 

Don't get me started on Stephen. You will have me derailing this thread and jabbering all night.

I've never heard of Ishmael... but I remember the Artemis Fowl series from when I was a kid O: My brother read them but I didn't... I'm definitely going to check them out, though, because I'm pretty much out of books to read XD;;

 

Technically we've already kind of derailed... XD but if you want to jabber we can start a Stephen King discussion thread or go to private messages

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Does your OC have a phone number?

I um.. Want to share keen interests with her. Yeah. Keen interests.

What's her favourite candle scent? Lilac?

I uhh.. Want to know for my own interests. Not planning anything.

 

All I hear out of you is this:

 

[SFyr 1,982]

Your sense of human anatomy is enviable. Seriously, it looks like you captured it impressively well.

And relatedly, you're a little too far above my level to offer critique.

 

Keep doing what you do, and please post your art about so people like me grow in their desire to improve. 

[ninjamon102938 222]

She's very pretty (pervert inside me says, SHE'S HOT!!!)

[~Chaos~ 3,967]

You're quite good at human anatomy, much better than what I could do!

 

Good work here.

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Looks good but her pose looks a bit forced.  Like she's using a lot of effort to stay in that position.  :c  Not relaxed at all.