Part of Story - 2017: SCP-Xanix Conflict

[Wolf General Alpha 636]

It was the next morning, everyone was asleep. I was having another nightmare, this time it was a normal one, then I heard something familiar. There was a soft humming noise and it was getting louder and louder, then there was a faint whistling noise. The boat rocked back and forth, there was a loud explosion coming from above. We woke up startled and tried to find out what happened. As I walked out of the room and into the hall, Daniel and the colonels were running to the top decks of the boat and ordering people instructions that I couldn't make out, for I was momentarily deafened by the explosion. We ran up to the top deck and found the ship was on fire near our cabins and then we looked around us, the other ships were being engulfed in flames and smoke. There were planes flying over the ships, dropping bombs onto the decks, and we could see the interior parts of the ships becoming more and more revealed with ever explosion.

We ran up towards Daniel and asked what was going on, he then told us in a calm but worried voice. "You need to get somewhere safe, it is dangerous here. The North Korean President has informed us that an unknown terrorist group infiltrated the meeting and is planning to sink the major ships of the fleet." Daniel was saying before another explosion stops him, he starts to finish the sentence "We need to get you somewhere safe so that we can leave this area". We were about to follow him, but we stopped and covered our ears as the main turrets blindly shot down some of the planes out the sky. It was awesome to see the ships in battle, but we couldn't stay long on the deck. so we ran into the bridge so we could meet everyone else.

 

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