Ask Riley and Anala

[FortyTwo42 1,287]

If you're such an expert, let's see what you push out! *throws pencil at 42*

Hey, I'm not a writer either! Besides, it'll take ages to rewrite the whole story! Perhaps if I just try to rewrite a few lines?

 

"And finally, Riley and Anala reached Doom Mare's castle stronghold, fatigued from their lengthy journey. They checked over their supplies one more time to make sure they had enough to break into the castle.

'Are you able to keep going?' Riley asked out of concern for Anala. 'We can rest up if you want.'

'And give Doom Mare a chance to escape? No, we need to do this now!' Anala exclaimed.

Then suddenly, an alarm went off, and a spotlight fell on Riley and Anala.

'We've been spotted! We need to get out of here before Doom Mare's minions arrive!' Riley warned.

'Pfft. As if her minions can stand up to me.' Anala took her bow and nocked an arrow, aiming at the stronghold entrance where the minions should soon arrive."

 

Is that okay?

[Rainbow Eclipse 3,927]

Hey, I'm not a writer either! Besides, it'll take ages to rewrite the whole story! Perhaps if I just try to rewrite a few lines?

 

"And finally, Riley and Anala reached Doom Mare's castle stronghold, fatigued from their lengthy journey. They checked over their supplies one more time to make sure they had enough to break into the castle.

'Are you able to keep going?' Riley asked out of concern for Anala. 'We can rest up if you want.'

'And give Doom Mare a chance to escape? No, we need to do this now!' Anala exclaimed.

Then suddenly, an alarm went off, and a spotlight fell on Riley and Anala.

'We've been spotted! We need to get out of here before Doom Mare's minions arrive!' Riley warned.

'Pfft. As if her minions can stand up to me.' Anala took her bow and nocked an arrow, aiming at the stronghold entrance where the minions should soon arrive."

 

Is that okay?

That... was... AWESOME! You did a great job of capturing my personality! I'm AAAWWWEEESSSOOOMMMEEE!!!!!

[FortyTwo42 1,287]

It was awesome? Thanks! I didn't expect it to be that good.