planning A new life in ponyville.

[Revertz 159]

Hey everypony this is my first time starting a roleplay and i was wondering if anyone can help me with planning it!

heres what i have so far.

 

Onyx winced as the train conductor yelled "final warning anypony getting off at Ponyville better do so now!" His eyes shot open as he realised this was his stop. The clumsy Pegasus quickly and franticly gathered his luggage, not knowing he had grabbed the wrong suitcase the young stallion rushed towards the exit, galloping down the isle still half asleep his legs felt heavy, his mind was a haze quickly signalling the conductor to hold the door and started to slow to a trot his cheeks burning with embarrassment as everypony was looking at the frantic stallion he gave a slight smile and a nod to the conductor and stepped onto the train platform and began to slowly trot towards his new life in Ponyville. He smiled as Celetia's beautiful day shone upon his grey coat, the cool breeze that ruffled his charcoal coloured mane carried the smell of the sweet apple orchards is the distance, the bright sun blinding him as he looked around at his surroundings slipping on his sunglasses over his emerald

eyes, he continued pass a local bakery not paying attention he tripped on the front stairs of the bakery just as a pony was exiting his glasses slid off his face and hit the stone steps both lenses shattering he quickly stood up and brushed himself blushing furiously. 

Edited April 30, 2014 by Revertz

[Contrast 292]

Since this is an open Rp, I guess I will just use my Oc Dreamless. (working on re-writing his page so I won't use the link)

 

A blue pegasus pony with a black mane that is messy and uncombed, there is a small part of his mane dyed purple in the shape of his cutie mark. The same for his tail: A bit longer than most normal male tails, spiky or messy, and has a larger purple cutie mark on his tail.

There's a fire fly in his hair (please don't kill it).

[dusk shade 205]

I'd be happy join with Storm Strafe-

a male skyblue pegasus pony with a sky blue mane and tail who blends into clear skies except his jade eyes and cutiemark (which is a typhoon with lightning emanating frim it)

[Concerto Dusk 240]

Ah, hell ill join if you accept minotaurs, unlike the equestrian empire

[Lighting Star 93]

i guess I'll join with Double Side 

 

http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/double-side-r6395