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@Lo Wang,

 

Creamy saw the phone and decided to ask Raze something. One problem, she didn't know his number, but then she saw the room number. And next to it was the room number's phone number. She called, waiting for a voice to say, "Hello?".

 

She thought about what she was going to say. She thought, *hey raze! I was wondering if you wanted to go to the cafe with me and Shooting tomorrow?* "Hmm." The unicorn said. Maybe I should say that, she said to herself, whispering.

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@Lo Wang,

 

Creamy saw the phone and decided to ask Raze something. One problem, she didn't know his number, but then she saw the room number. And next to it was the room number's phone number. She called, waiting for a voice to say, "Hello?".

 

She thought about what she was going to say. She thought, *hey raze! I was wondering if you wanted to go to the cafe with me and Shooting tomorrow?* "Hmm." The unicorn said. Maybe I should say that, she said to herself, whispering.

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((OOC: Ah, dilemmas! Conflict sucks, eh?))

 

Raze was lying in his bed thinking about things, when all of a sudden, the phone rang. He slowly got up from his bed to answer it.

 

Huh, wonder who it is... he thought.

 

He picked up the phone and started to speak.

 

"Hello? Black earth pony speaking."


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@Lo Wang,

 

"Hi, it's me Creamy.. I was wondering if you wanted to come with me and Shooting to the cafe tomorrow afternoon. I hope it's not trouble!". The unicorn breathed in and out because she was nervous he would say no, she has had trouble making friends since she was a filly because they thought she was stubborn. She waited for a response from the black earth pony.

 

She thought, (what if he says NO!). She got even more nervous and started sweating. She thought, (ugh I have to take a shower too!), not that she was disgusted about it. She just wanted to be Raze's you know who.

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"Oh, hey pretty- I mean CREAMY! Well, seeing as I have nothing planned tomorrow, sure, I could go."

 

I seem to be doing a lot of stuff with both Creamy and Shooting. Not that I mind it or anything, he thought. 

 

"So, what time are you two going there, so I can meet up?" he asked her.


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@Lo Wang,

 

"Two o'clock. Oh, and I heard you say I'm pretty. But that's ok. I actually heard you telling Shooting the same thing. Yeah, you yelled.". She giggled as she said that.

 

"So? Can you come? It's okay if you can't.". She heard "hey pretty" in her head and blushed a little.

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"Heh, yeah, sorry about that... yeah I think I make it. Uh, could you hold on one second?"

 

He put the phone down, buried his face deep into a pillow so no one could hear, and yelled "SONOFABIATCH!!" as loud as he could. He quickly picked the phone back up again.

 

"Hey again, sorry about that. So I guess I'll meet you at two. Oh, and, uh, about that 'hey pretty' thing, I apologize for that. I, uh, don't know why I said that, it's, uh... yeah. Don't want you to think I'm a creep or anything. Ok, bye..."

 

He hung up and sighed. Greaaaaaat job there, he told himself in his mind.

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@Lo Wang

(OOC: I hate school... You guys posted when I was either walking or on the bus home.)

 

"Y-y-yeah. I'll see you tonight." Shooting said. She walked over to her room and went inside. Shooting flopped face first onto the bed. I have dinner with somepony tonight and I don't even know what to do. Shooting thought.

 

She rolled over and sat up. She started unpacking her stuff.


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@Lo Wang,

 

"Yeah, bye..". Creamy hung up because she kind of heard what he did when he said hold on.

 

Well anyways, she was tired so she got under her covers, turned her lamp and tv off, and fell asleep.

 

(OOC: this is her dream)

 

At the cafe with Shooting and Raze, they talked nonstop, ignoring Creamy and never heard any of the conversations she wanted to talk about.

 

Raze was saying, "Excuse us." and Shooting and Raze ran off.

 

They didn't come back for at least 5 minutes. Creamy was starting to get worried. They finally came back, and when they did, Raze and Shooting were stuck tight to each other. Raze said to Creamy before they left to go back to their room, "Sorry, you just weren't cut out for me..".

 

(OOC: end of dream)

 

Creamy woke up screaming, "WHY HER?!?!?!?". She got nervous and just watched a filly's show for a few minutes and fell back asleep.

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Raze was sitting in his room, thinking about things. 

 

What should I do? he thought. They're both so nice... hell, I don't even know what they think of me... probably they really do think I'm a creep... hmmm...

 

He looked at his acoustic/electric guitar. I guess some music will take my mind off of things...

 

He unpacked it, grabbed the amp from his bags, plugged it in, and began to play softly, so he wouldn't disturb anyone.


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Creamy was laying down, rolling around and ended up falling down.

 

"Ugh, I can't sleep! I'm probably just homesick...". She decided to call her birth-mom, Octavia. (OOC: ya u heard me)

 

"Hello, mom? I can't bother to even sleep.". Octavia answered with, "Oh honey, you're just homesick, precious.".

 

"You're right, I guess I'll go somewhere." She hung up and tried to remember what room Raze was in.

 

She remembered. She got out of her room and knocked on Raze's door.

 

"Hope he doesn't suspect me as a creep..." She waited.

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Raze stopped playing when he heard knocking on his door. He left his guitar on the bed, approached his door, and slowly opened it. It was Creamy.

 

"Uh, hey there," he said with a slight smile. He looked around.

 

"Couldn't wait for tommorow, huh?" he said jokingly. "You can come in, if you like."


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@Aiden Pearce, (OOC: feels weird, I was about to type Lo wang)

 

"Thanks for letting me come in.. I just can't sleep at all, I even called my mom." She said surprised. "coughoctaviacough, well anyway, she said I needed to be with someone I Li-KNOW!". Saying in embarrassment, she flopped on the bed next to him. "Heh, sorry about that. I get weird sometimes." She blushed and got under the covers of the bed and immediately said, "Um, I don't know why. But it feels more comfortable being here then at my room...". She blushed again, but it was super red, and Raze noticed her cheeks red.

(OOC: I'm going to watch something so respond, so when I come back I can respond.)

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((OOC: Actually, to mention someone, you highlight a post they've typed, and there should be two options. You pick the option called "@Mention"))

 

Raze smiled a bit when he saw Creamy blush. "It's fine, I don't mind it really," He lied down as well right next to her.

 

"If you want, you could stay here..." He reddened at the thought of her staying in his room.

 

 

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(OOC: If your on a mobile device you can't do that.)

Shooting looked out the window. She smiled as she saw the busy town. Shooting looked in her bag and got her sketch book out. Shooting continued on her drawing. No, make the side more shaded. Shooting thought.


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((OOC: So, I think Chibi left the forum forever for some reason. Chibi, if you ever see this, please come back!))

Raze stood up. I need a bit of fresh air, he thought to himself. He turned to Creamy, who looked to be asleep. "I'll be right back," he whispered to her.

 

After arriving at the lobby, he went out, crossed the street, and sat a nearby bench. It was already evening, but the streets were still crowded with people. He looked up. He thought he could see Shooting from her hotel window, but he quickly looked down.

 

Never mind that, dude he said in his mind.


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(OOC: I think she just randomly died! That's my theory for most things. Also, will come back later, I have a dumb migraine.)

Shooting couldn't think of what to add to it so she lied back down on her bed, her hooves sprawled out across. For a second she thought she saw Raze outside and on a bench. It must be my imagination, that's all! Shooting thought. She stared at the ceiling, looking for silly and weird designs.


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Raze laid down flat on the bench, hooves pressed against the back of his head, admiring the night sky. Somewhere nearby, a group of ponies were playing jazz music. Passing ponies dropped bits into one of their instrument cases. Everyone around him was laughing and having a good time.

 

Yet another day in Manehattan...

 

He started thinking again about Shooting. He didn't deny it anymore; he liked her. But he also liked Creamy. They were nice, sweet, and beautiful.

 

Ugh, which one do I really want to be with? he thought.

 

(((Ooc: No, she definitely left , saying no one liked her or something like that. Poor Chibi... And yeah, take your time, migraines are a bitch XD)))

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(OOC: Especially when it's still light out so you can't fall asleep... I blame my glasses and being on a trampoline.)

@Aiden Pearce

Shooting giggled at the silly things she came up with. Almost as silly as when Raze started blushing at his stuttering. Shooting thought.

 

She looked around at her room. Pretty basic things but in a fancy way. She thought.


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((OOC: Trampolines... the scourge of this world...))

@@Harmony Cube

 

A couple more minutes of thinking, and Raze got up from the bench.

 

Alright, that's it; I'm gonna go see her.

 

He walked back to the hotel, took the elevator, got out, and found Shooting's room. He knocked at the door.

 

"This is totally not weird," he said quietly to himself.

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(OOC: Combined with glasses that can move so it messes with your vision... Never good... My migraines are ALWAYS on the left side, my writing side...)

@Aiden Pearce

"One second!" Shooting called. She sat up, sliding her sketch pad into her bag. Wait, who could it be? Shooting thought, getting up. She opened the door to find Raze. "Uh, hi? You can come in if you want." Shooting said.


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Raze laughed a bit. "Yeah, sorry. Creamy is actually sleeping in my bed, so I don't think I should disturb her. Said she was more comfortable over there for some reason."

 

He stepped inside, and closed the door behind him.

 

"So, we still up for dinner tonight?" he asked.

 

He wanted to tell her. How much he liked her, how her giggle made him smile, something cheesy like that. He just wanted to walk up to her and say, 'I love you.' He kept his mouth shut.

 

@@Harmony Cube


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"The voices in my head are telling me that's kinda creepy but at the same time, not..." Shooting said.

 

"Of course we're still up for dinner!" Shooting exclaimed. She sat on her bed and motioned for him to sit too. "You can sit if you want." Shooting said.


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"Yeah, I don't know what was up with her when she asked, but whatever... oh and thanks for letting me sit," he said, taking a seat next to her. "Hey, I was thinking, maybe tommorrow, you and me could take a walk around the city, look around, see what Manehattan has to offer, just the two of us. You want to?"

@@Harmony Cube

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"No problem. Who would force you to stand in a room?" Shooting said, giggling a bit at the thought of it.

 

"I, uh, um, s-s-sure, th-that sounds fun." Shooting stuttered. Stupid nervousness! I have got to stop stuttering like that! Shooting thought.

 

She thought of something. "How would you react if somepony you knew had a crush on you?" She asked. This stupid idea might just work. Shooting thought.


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Raze was a bit surprised at the question.

 

"I... don't really know how I would react. I'd probably be happy about it. I mean, you know that somepony likes you, which is great... I've never really had something like that, so I wouldn't really know."

 

He turned to look at Shooting.

"Why do you ask?"

 

@@Harmony Cube

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