The Enchanted Pond

[Foxx 258]

Hey there!
So, bored kicked in uninvited and I wanted to paint my OC Snowbound. This is what happened:

I'd like your critiques, thoughts and opinions, both positive and negative.

Stay Foxxy!

Edited May 20, 2014 by Foxx

[Your Nightly Spectre 1,061]

1/10 because of the terrible pun "Stay Foxxy!".

Other then that I can see that the place is all magical but it does not feel magical or enchanted. It just feels like boring water with blue flowers and grass around it. I guess those bubble sparkly thingies were suppose to make it magical but they didn't work. 

 

Maybe if you put in a night sky and moon and some sort of fog in there it would give it all a nice glow'y effect. 

In fact that is the main thing you should try and do. 

Edited May 18, 2014 by TheDarkStar

[Umbral Noir 1,556]

I like it! I get an almost "Dr Seuss" feel from the scene, creating an even more enchanted, magical place. The pond's colour itself is very interesting. It looks almost celestial to me, like a clear night's sky. The greenish blues of both Snowbound and the grass add to the otherworldly look. Overall, I think it's a very good piece of artwork! Well done! 9/10

 

I can't see very much to criticise on! Though I guess I will say DarkStar is right about maybe thinking of making the scene a nightime scene. That would indeed add to the mystery and wonder of this ethereal pond.

Edited May 18, 2014 by DJ-BRONI3

[Casy 238]

You improved.. a lot... thats all what i can say

[Foxx 258]

You improved.. a lot... thats all what i can say

I don't know if you mean that in a good or bad way... But my spirits are high, so I'll take it as being positive.

[Casy 238]

I don't know if you mean that in a good or bad way... But my spirits are high, so I'll take it as being positive.

 Well definitely in good way!