writing Agatha- A WIP Story I'm writing

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                   Agatha

                   By: Pinkcupcake21                               Chapter One

                                        First Day

Agatha Grimm hopped out of her old car and stood on the concrete. She turned to say goodbye to her parents. She waved, and they gave her a simple nod back. Her parents didn’t like talking in public. They even considered sending her into a private school or maybe even homeschooling, but decided against it. Agatha watched as her parents drove away from Stellar Heights Middle School’s drop-off area. She watched her beat-up black car drive away until it disappeared into nothing. She turned to face her school. She glanced at the tall brick building for a brief moment, but hung her head low again when people started walking by. She quickly trudged up the rough concrete and up to the wide door of the school. She pushed it open and stepped inside.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Note that this IS a WIP And isn't finished. I'm not even to the meat of the story yet. I was inspired to write this from a story I'm writing in school called Murder at House 5291. Agatha was originally a very undeveloped character who stays in the shadows. I decided to do a book on how she sees the world. Oh yeah, and I'm using my main character from Murder At House 5291. 
 

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I can't wait to see more! This seems like an interesting story.

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I hope it will be. I have some interesting ideas for this character.

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I hope it will be. I have some interesting ideas for this character.

Awesome! ^U^ I love it when I have interesting ideas...like the one I just got tonight *shivers* I better not start talking about it, 'tis not yet fully fledged.