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Critical Stroll: 2nd March precis


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Welcome to the Critical Stroll blog! Here is where I give a couple word precis of the roleplays in Casual Stroll, the epic RP by @Blitz Boom Parody, maybe informative? I will get many things wrong but will be fun to see if I can keep this up. Please do comment about your characters in this blog as it would be nice to get a bit more detail on them :P Pls don't be mad.

@Neoeryn Fright / Calamity Draconeqi

Tag-line

Calamity. More like Calm Amity. 

(amIfright)

Who?
Calamity – calm

Fright – motherly

What doing?
Being comforting

Where?
Chaos-ville?

@Catpone Cerberus Onache / Happy Hour.

Tag-line

Unhappy hour

Who?
Onache has a hive and a relationship with the kobolds. 

Happy Hour can siphon magic and has tech.

What doing?
Critiquing fashion. Fashioning plans and devices of evil.

Where?

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@Catpone Cerberus Scarecrow the plant pony and somepony else

Tag-line

Vachement bien

What doing?
Contemplating bovines

Where?
Valley near Apple family?

@Catpone Cerberus@Catpone Cerberus Ruby (transform into pony?) / Leviathan / Charir (dragon)

Tag-line


Does he like my pony cosplay?

What doing?

Showing off pony forms

Where?

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@Windy Breeze(Sorrow (changeling) / Windy / Cimex)
 

Tag-line

A changeling can change :3

What doing?
Talking about places:  Council of Queens; Moonlit Thicket the bat pony forest town. 

Where
Cimex’s hideout

@Silicon ChimeraOrchid (zebra)  Silicon (living plush)
Tag-line

Silicoraline

What doing?

Sharing backstory: "A filly had died, and ended up possessing a doll,  made to be her companion"

 

@CaliforumMagnolia + Gretha (dragon) + Zeehva

Tag-line

You either die a PC or live long enough to talk about socks.

What doing?
Talking about the past with Gretha.

Talking about socks with Zeehva.

 

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Thats hilarious! Magnolia was inspired by a character of an old friend. Her name was Magloria. @abrony-mouse

 

Magloria was born to 2 alicorn parents. Her father was the Alicorn of something to do with Snow, not quite winter. Her mother was, nobody knew. She had an older brother named Dunewave. Dunewave became an alicorn, I think he did something heroic, while Magloria would receive no such honor. She was basically abandoned by her father, all she ever wanted was to be noticed and respected but she never got that.

And to satisfy that, she would trap dozens, hundreds of ponies in a secret cave and absorb their magic. She would leave all them poor ponies trapped in there.

And I just remembered something about her! Dunewave even forgot who she was, and she befriended the heroes and her and Twilight were really good friends that was, until Magloria betrayed her. Imagine being such good friends with someone, and they betray you and steal everything you are and leave you in a pool of blood. Magloria was also impossible to hunt down and track down for some reason.

Magloria was also sort of like that all knowing friend you have, she wouldn't tell you things, yet you would feel compelled to fall for her trust since something about that smile of hers is just...inviting. 

She'd look at you and smirk coyly. "Oh, why don't we go take a walk? Its been a long day, you could use some fresh air." her blue eyes would be rather happy, her smile ever inviting.

That's basically how she lures you.

And from what I remember, she would never really insult you. She would still have that same smile on her face when she betrays you. The last thing you'd want to do is piss her off.  She only tortured Twilight specifically.

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@CaliforumThanks :3 Snow and deserts and daddy issues. Magloria sounds like a bad-flank. I love the way characters evolve.

Fuchsia actually comes from a dark-fic I wrote on Fim in which she was an anon tf'd into a pony, but now that history is nixed and been replaced with an RP family I made for a different RP. She was always an explorer though :3

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@abrony-mouse

Neat concept. :) So let's see if I can't puff in a few here.

Fright: This one were just a mixture of things I thought of. I had used a draconequus as a background char a few times, in speeches, that were focused on meditation. then came @Neoeryn and I figured I'd try and flesh her out. As I got to thinking quickly, the idea were just that she were a draconequus, that had changed what she did to something better. And then I figured, why not fear? SO going from terrifying others, to making them face their own fears, teach how to calm themselves, and so on. After that, it were just to figure out a look, and when in doubt of what fear is, start with a spider. Then since they are mixed creatures, I figured I'd go with a somewhat equine top, that were really bony, to where you could almost see the skeleton, and with hands like the pokemon Haunter. The gadgets were just for flavor that would come up in story later on. :) Fright is there for Calamity, to try and teach her how to turn something as destructive as Calamity, into something positive for the world.

Onace and Happy Hour: Onache is a recently reformed changeling queen, who used to roam outside Equestria, in a desert area. Small hive, focused highly on keeping the strong, and with a penance for mind manipulation. Lost her hive to Chrysalis, pre-invasion of Canterlot, and eventually got to the Everfree Forest, where a sphinx, some ponies, and a draconequus, tricked her into having to chose to become a reformed changeling. It was a weird chain of events. :D Anyway, she's trying to do better now, while still having to get used to ponies not being prey, or things to control. She's doing... Poorly, thus far. :)

And Happy Hour is her only drone, whom you have not yet seen. You've mistaken him for a guard of sorts, that @Catpone Cerberus also controls. :D This here's Happy Hour:

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In pony disguise, anyway.

Lyriel: She's the one with Scarecrow. They're visiting the Apple Farm, but are usually in the Everfree Woods. She's a dryad, and have just spoken with the cows. That's basically it. :) Normally Lyriel tends to the Everfree Forest, ever since getting there three weeks back. She were inspired by a need to have a char in during an adventure with some other folks who are no longer here, but she stuck around. :)

Leviathan: This is the one with Ruby and Charir, whom are siblings, and Ruby is the one who can transform into a pony disguise. You got that one pretty much. :)

And Leviathan is also a dragon. The oldest of them, yet medium in size. Mixed water and wind aligned dragon from Dragon Land, so slim, got gills, and strong wings. Also knows a good deal of weather magic. Based solely on me thinking it sounded cool, while we messed with other chars. :)

Sorrow: They're hiding from gang members after taking on a powerful poltergeist, which now resides with other spirits, in a skull Sorrow have around her neck. :) Cimex is the one that's hiding them, and it got a lil' bit spicy, 'cause it sounded like they disliked changelings as a whole. You mostly got that one, but it's a nother sort of weird one. :)

Sorrow is part of a family I have near that Moonlit Thicket, that I have used several members of thus far. OC family where the mares can all in some form, interact with spirits, and all have somewhat grim names. They're a hoot.

Orchid: ...Yeah, you got that one spot on, honestly. And Orchid is just a zebra botanist. He's hard writing for, as my rhymes are cheesy. :)

Gretha and Zeehva: Essentially what's going on now. Though Zeehva is a hero of sorts, that's helping Magnolia to reform from being a villain. She were inspired by basically me using a creator program, and then getting a pretty model. Same with Gretha, who is an elder dragon, they met while she were taking a nap near Deltrot.

Zeehva can siphon magic residue out of the air, and liquify them, before mixing it into magical potions. :)

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@Kujamih White Light or Light.

Who and what:

a dimension fixing earth pony with  weird artifacts embedded in his body and multiple cutie marks on him wich is numbered on how many he has with a roman numeral... Which is X.

Where:

somewhere where the Boom family is. 

 

Reason:

The Boom family has caused other higher beings to notice their dimension with their shenanigans and is now in danger. Light was sent there to investigate and to claim the dimension before other higher beings get it first Or destroy it so no one else will.

 

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@Blitz Boom thanks so much :) that's really useful. Have added those details. They will be great for the next episode of... Critical stroll *Mercer Face*

@Kujamih ooh you have chars in the Stroll too :3 will take those details in thanks :) 

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@Califorum I know quite a bit about Magnolia but not much about Cali... what should I know about Cali? What's he doing? Where is he? Who is he? 

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1. Windy Breeze

Windy Breeze, formerly Skyline Soaring is a pegasus mare who formerly lives in an coastal town of Hooveshores, she has two brother, a sister, a mom, and a dad. Don't forget she also has two grandparents. Unfortunately, she lost them along with the entire town to a terrible tragedy. She was found floating in makeshift raft by a manager of a beach resort who decided to take the position as a mom and raised Windy with all her heart, even giving her the name 'Windy Breeze'. Windy was raised without the knowledge of losing of her biological family and was very unaware of the destruction of her town. She soon worked as one of the staffs of the resort as a front desk receptionist and the weather manager. However, sometime during her life, an incident will left her in coma and also regaining her lost memories. Windy was not sure what to make out of it and decided to investigate. When she found out her memories are true she was furious at her adoptive but after a heated debate, they quickly get together. At some point, she left the resort to find a better job in Equestria and ends up practicing for the Wonderbolts before moving from Cloudsdale to Ponyville.

Windy is with Sorrow Inside Cimex's hiding place.

2. Luna Light

Luna is a young unicorn mare working as a night guard in Canterlot and formally Richville. She is born and raised in Richville. As a filly, she's always amazed by the guards and vowed she would someday become one of them, and that dream become reality.

3. Blue Wings

Is a young pegasus mare and a Wonderbolt cadet. She is born and raised in the town of Richville with a loving father and a xenophobic mother. Blue has a passion for races and stunts and has wanted to be in a group of pegasi who had the same interests. When she heard about the Wonderbolts, she go against her mother's rules and left her town to live in Cloudsdale and join the Wonderbolts as a trainee.

Both she and Luna are with Molotov, Cali, and Light.

If you have any questions, just tell me.

Edited by Windy Breeze
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@abrony-mouse

This is Cali,  she is an extreme egomaniac interdimensional shape-shifting and traveling thief. She uses all sorts of lightning magic and isn't from the pony world, but from the human world and  got her powers when she found a gem and its energy merged with her consciousness and energy in her nervous system. She goes wherever, does what she wants, and if anyone stands in her way to that she will fight them and turn into weird demonic mixes of vehicular equipment and farm equipment, and bizzare forms that make you want to vomit.

With all her powers, she prefers to do things simply, for the risk of death and adrenaline. She can do whatever she wants, yet she limits that sometimes to mimic the feeling of risk.

It's almost what she thrives on.

Cali is extremely strong willed, she will never give up on anything to achieve her goals however at the same time she is a coward who would flee from situations. It all depends on the situation, really. She is extremely intelligent and thinks rather quickly, though doesn't plan anything out. Thinks in the moment, in the present. Does not serve anyone, does not bow to anyone (or so she believes). Her electrical energy has an effect on her emotional level, making her extremely resilient, depending on the situation.

She is prone to getting angry in situations which makes her rather loose, unkempt and distraught on an emotional level which makes her prone to making oversights and mistakes in her plans.

While intelligent, she is also extremely stubborn and that often ruins her plans.

https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/804528940223561749/811129929558392832/75B824B8-8B06-44FC-94E1-83E0CFC970A0.png 

 

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@abrony-mouse

@Blitz Boom  already mentioned about it but 

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Happy Hour can siphon magic and has tech.

You are mixing up characters, The cyborg pony is my character Solar Silver https://mlpforums.com/blogs/entry/25250-solar-silver-oc/

But since it seems to be the trend here, I'll also summarize my characters here (and link their pages if they have one.)


kobolds https://mlpforums.com/blogs/entry/25677-sheska-and-trox-oc/

Kobold siblings from dystopian futuristic world who have been transported to this almost utopia-like world after getting imprisoned by Nightmare Moon's guard for being too rebellious (literally rebels) and are now trying to figure out how to exist in this new found peace and safety. Their arrival spot happened to be inside to be changeling hive ruled by Onace 

They are currently in a hospital...in Ponyville if my memory serves me right, Blitz can correct me if I'm wrong, and you already know what they are doing.

 

Solar https://mlpforums.com/blogs/entry/25250-solar-silver-oc/

A super soldier from the same world as the kobolds, used to serve Daybreaker (corrupted Celestia) until he got transported 'here' under mysterious circumstances (year or two ago in the RPs timeline). He now serves Celestia as part of the Royal Guard, doing his best to atone the awful things he has done in his life, also working as the (currently) only defense against the threats his world may bring to the better Equestria. 

He's currently somewhere doing guard things waiting for a good moment to bother the trio again, next appearance most likely related to the kobolds' arrival place. 

 

Scarecrow  https://buffy.mlpforums.com/monthly_2020_03/themonster.thumb.png.7dc94bbcd75d9d92634191ddff062496.png

Undead and mutated pony who would give anything to get the "un" part away from his existence, he wants to die, that's what I'm saying. He isn't good per say but he has decided that doing good things instead of evil things is better for his changes to get what he wants. He's hanging around with Lyriel (who is almost the exact opposite of him, being a being of nature) and has a freak of a bird given by a draconequus that makes him look like a natural being called Evergrown when it lands on him. The bird that turns into a hawk when touching Scarecrow, is called Crow, because reasons.

where and what you got already

 

Ruby https://buffy.mlpforums.com/monthly_2018_08/dragon-pony.thumb.png.e89dbe4026e823d91b781c2116cdd601.png

A young-adult dragon with the ability to turn into a specific pony, carrying a possibly cursed dragon eye on her neck hidden under/inside a necklace given by a zebra. She can also sense anything that shines with extra sense she has and she has fire magic that she has no idea how to control. 

She's a dragon with awful life, having been badly abused by her own mother until she was literally thrown out, she then fought a relative good life for herself, until an attack by her mother caused a chain reaction that lead to her hit the rock bottom, both figuratively, and literally, as she experienced the worst moments in her life at the bottom of a deep ravine. After few happenings and conveniently placed books, she had taught herself to read, an another language, magic and had learned about Equestria, 

She then with the ability to disguise as a pony came to Equestria to see what it was about and to prepare to kill her mother.

So now this harder than steel dragon (both mentally and physically) is struggling with new feelings and thoughts as she's trying to act like she doesn't care for what basically are her surprisingly old girlfriend and adopted son (that happens to be her brother), but I don't think she's fooling anyone.

They are currently in a forest near Canterlot and are heading there soon enough

 

Charir 

Ruby's very young half-brother with quite a spark B) (he has electricity magic). Having same mother as Ruby, his time under her care was equally awful, if not worse, because males are seen as the inferior sex/gender in their culture (or lack of it) and thus they are treated as such. He's also stunted in growth, so that makes it even worse for him.

Having gotten enough of the BS that was his home, he took flight in random direction and ended up in Equestria, then almost drowned, because he flew into a hunter's net and was too tired to get out of it as he landed into water. Luckily to him, and to everyone's surprise, Ruby saved her. But turns out that Ruby looks like her own mother (how unexpected :P) and poor Charir got scared...but he's better now (: 

Currently he's enjoying his existence with two mothers as they are heading to a city full of talking prey animals.

 

I realize now that my OCs while not the stereotypical tragic backstory, really don't have good lives, or un-life :P poor fictional characters.

If there's something specific you want to know about them, just ask :) 

 

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Huh.. since everyone else is putting info about their OCs, I suppose I may as well. This is pretty much for my AU, but it's also the only information I actually have... so I guess it's just her actual backstory now?
Erebus and Lavan are G1 villains, but I'm rewriting them. Same as Catrina, who was originally redeemed.

Spoiler

 

Calamity was created by natural forces due to Equestria being thrown off balance, which was caused by the First Alicorn Order being kidnapped by Lavan.
She and Erebus were rivals who fought to also gain Catrina's amulet  -the one Discord had stolen from her, and the one that Tirek gained from his 'brother'- although he just found it under Canterlot before being thrown into Tartarus. Only then was the amulet given to Scorpan by Star Swirl, as a symbol of protection and strength.


Everyone eventually fled the Realm of Darkness to Equestria, which resulted in legends about her, tales which had made their way to Discord, so he knew quite a bit about some 'tall tales' of her before he found her, but he had never actually seen her until he brought her in.

Celestia and Luna eventually used the Elements of Harmony upon her, which was the cause of her banishment to the Chaos realm and her memory loss. They agreed to never mention it to anyone, however, Celestia allowed Star Swirl to keep a secret record in the archives.

Eventually, many years after, Discord finds her floating in Chaosville unconscious. He decided to just take her in and eventually taught her to control her magic. After introducing themselves and finding out who she is, he only taught her to control her magic because, as much as he hated to admit it, he was terrified of what she was capable of

She becomes a student at the School of Friendship, and really only cares about the friendship history class. She ends up finding out about her history through the records in Star Swirls wing, as does everyone else, causing the new Elements of Unity to be used on her, with the magic of Catrina's amulet in which she is concealed.

A few years later, Tirek once again escapes from the deepest part of Tartarus, only to find the amulet had been locked away there as well. He uses it, not realizing that the magic isn't from the amulet itself, but Calamity, and ends up releasing her from it. From there, they form a team-up, and take over the Realm of Darkness.

 

However, in this RP, I'm assuming Lily Pad/Fright is trying to help prevent that ending.

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This is great! Thanks everypony :yay:

@Catpone Cerberus <3 those stories. Definitely needed the background because I found yours hardest to intuit - from now on I am going to try so hard to portray them all in the cutest light possible :P

@Neoeryn thanks! I have seen these two villains ages ago. Time to rewatch some G1 :D 

 

 

Anyway I hope she overcomes her dark past - she seems sweet :3

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@Neoeryn

More or less. What you presented is one potential timeline. In this, Fright will attempt to make her into a more constructive version of her potential self. :) In which case, there wouldn't be a need to banish her for any reason. Which would not go well either, as Fright might be meek, but she will not stand for her students being harassed like that. Especially not other draconequui, if they have potential to turn things around.

Haven't gotten to it in the RP yet, but the names on the rings on her legs, as well as the golden icons that's floating in her hair circles, are symbols of those of her kind that she have *saved*, if you will. Or if not that, then at least changed them to both make things better for others, and prevent them from being seen as issues that needs to be solved. Which includes herself. She were the first of those she helped to reform, in some fashion. And yes, she aims to have Calamity's name inscribed on one of the rings as well, in due time.

I got some plans with the two of them for the time being, but a lot will be on the fly, and then we'll see how and where it goes. :) Hopefully not to banishing territory though. That ain't cricket.:)

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