Sky Warden

Sky Warden opened his eyes. The house below him was filled by happy chat and laugh. He sprawled and stared at the sky.She's right. I have to get some friends.He sighed and stood still for a second.Allright then, here I come.He dived to the ground and expanded his wings. He fluttered his wings heavily and landed with his back legs. He knocked the door.(OCC: Sorry for the awkward scene. I have no other idea how to start.)

Wow, that's awesome!Well, The pose is good but I think it will be better to close the eyes. You know, something like he close his eyes in agony, that is if you don't mind it. Thanks.

Sky Warden expanded his wings still, letting the warm air stream blew him across the gentle blue sky. He landed on a cloud and unleashed a yawn. A little far from him, a white maned mare landed next to a house and she knocked. He snorted and closed his eyes. A Party A breeze blew softly from the east, it felt so comfy on his silver mane. He smiled. I have the sky. That's all I need.

Well, thanks. That's great., but I'm expecting something which is more "painful", hehe. Don't worry, I will post it as soon as I think it's decent for everypony.Oh, if there's anypony who want to offer me their cover, just post it. I will use this one at the moment.

Thanks. I will check this topic everyday.LOL, Shepherd?By the way, I see that there's no notification whenever my post get a reply. Is it a bug?

Thanks guys. Nice to meet you.Actually I'm looking for the cover right now, but don't worry, I would still post it even with no cover.I'm not very good at writing, but you may ask me for advices in writing or share your tips with me. ;)Anypony like RP?

Well, since my fanfic is free, I'm afraid I can't pay anyone for the cover. I only request for a simple cover and I want to mention that I would still post the fanfic, even with no cover.Your arts are amazing, but sorry, I can't afford it.

Ahoy everypony! This is my OC. My name is Sky Warden. : Nickname : Sky. Mane color : Silver (white is fine). Coat color : Light sky blue (hex: #afecfd). Eye color : Dark purple. Unique physical attribute : Big and strong wings (I resize it to 120% in photoshop), but slow. Personality : Kind, patient, calm, wise, and mercyful but slow, dull, passive, lazy, "colorless", loner and social awkward. Cutie Mark

Aye, your grammar and spelling is pretty good. The description is nice as well.But I think you need to work more on character and story arcs.

Well, I've read it. The story is pretty interesting, got to say (I love adventure stories especially with magics). I'm a fanfic writer as well, and I'm making one right now. If you don't mind to listen advices from this total newbie writer, then here are some: 1. You don't have to use "he said" or "he asked" tag in every dialogue. Put tags just to make it clear on who is speaking. 2. Try to "show" the reader, don't just "tell" the reader. I quote this from Sir Anton Chekhov, "Don't tell me the moon is shining; show me the glint of light on broken glass". 3. Instead of using "he said" or "he asked", show the reader that "he asked". Readers know that '?' means that he asked something. Use some actions or expressions like "he raised an eyebrow" to make the dialogue more "lively". 4. Similar to the 2nd and 3rd advices, don't tell the reader that "she was angry", show the reader that "she was angry". Use description or play more expression for this. Sorry I can't give you an example, I'm a newbie and I think you know exactly what I mean. Using capitals, '!' or '...' may help. 5. Use active voice more than passive. It's stronger and brief. Eliminate any "was" or "had" and replace it with some active verbs. Use "had" only to make the timeline clearer. 6. Instead of using adverbs like "darkly" or "slowly", show the reader that it was darkly or slow. You may spend more time on thesaurus for this. 7. Please give more details about the setting. I honestly can't imagine how the place looks like. 8. Give us more details about your characters. This is more personally, but I think you need to work more on the characters name, hehe. Again, I'm a totally newbie writer. I would be glad if you listen to my advices. And enjoy writing!

Hello everypony! My name is Sky Warden. I'm writing a fanfic titled "A Howl in The Sky". It's a romance and tragedy fanfic. At this time, I'm ready to post the first chapter, but I need the cover. I'm not good at drawing, so I humbly ask for your help. I put the picture of my OC in the file attached. Here is more details about my OC, Coat color : light blue (hex : #afecfd) Mane color : Silver (white is fine) Cutie mark : Eye color : #2c25a5 (dark purple?) Unique physical appearance : Big wings (I resize the wings by 120% in photoshop). Well, since the title is "A Howl in The Sky", I'm thinking about a backflip in the sky with closed eye and opened mouth like howling, but you may come with your own idea. That's all guys. If you want to help, please post your cover in this thread. I will give you the credits if I use it. Thanks.

My Favourite Mane 6 Pony: Rainbow Dash How did you find MLP Forums?: I found it in google. I love foruming and I love this show, so I looked for the forum. Here I am. How you became a fan of My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic: I'm a meme victim, LOL. I saw many memes about ponies. They said "I watched 5 episodes and I'm hooked" and similar, so I tried to watch 5 episodes. For episodes 1-2 my reaction was "Geez, girlish show", episode 3 "Hmm, not bad", episode 4 "Pretty good moral education and interesting story", episode 5 "I'm bucking love this show!", LOL. I'm a writer and a computer engineer. Well, writing is just my hobby. My main study is computer engineering (I almost finish ). I'm writing a fanfic right now. Additional info : I'm a nice person who kind to people and wont hate people just because they do a bad thing, so feel free to talk to me.