Dark Qiviut
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>tfw you created some annoying errors, so you decided to edit, resubmit the "Thank You to Pony" letter, and hope the newer submission is used once the project's complete (if mine are used at all)…
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@ShadOBabe I quad-checked mine (
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From this:
QuoteIn Winter Wrap Up, Twilight Sparkle tried her hardest to be a part of Ponyville's teams. She tried to help lead the weather, but couldn't fly. She tried to landscape, but couldn't create a proper nest for the birds. She tried to help feed animals, but needed a tomato juice bath. Then she tried to use magic to help remove the snow…only to worsen the problem. However, none of her previous struggles take away one of her biggest strengths: to organize and lead a project.
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QuoteIn Winter Wrap Up, Twilight Sparkle tried her hardest to be a part of Ponyville's teams. She wanted to help clear the clouds, but couldn't fly. She tried to landscape, but couldn't create a proper bird's nest or score ice. She tried to wake up the animals, but got stung by bees and needed a tomato juice bath. Then she tried to use magic to help remove the snow from the farm…only to worsen the problem. However, none of her previous struggles take away one of her biggest strengths: to organize and lead a project.
Hopefully, my report to remove the older entry comes through.
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