ThatGuyWhoAteTheCookies

Tune couldn't help but repeatedly glance at the elegant mare trotting down from the castle. He'd hate to admit it, but she was beautiful in that dress of hers. "No." Tune said to himself. "She'll just be like all the snobby ponies here. Too uptight for the smaller people." He convinced himself that she was of no importance and kept walking around.

Tune Twist looked around at his surroundings, hoping to find something more interesting then the royals and their scary guards. Other than a paparazzi waiting for that royal, there were few around, other than a grey pegasus mare with glasses and a deep blue alicorn stallion with huge wings. "Wait... is that Nightfall?" He whispered to himself. Nightfall was thought to be dead when he disappeared from Equestria when he was 16. Strange...

As Tune passed many street performers, tofu dog sellers and tourists, he finally reached the base of the Canterlot castle wall. On The Grand Staircase of the castle he noticed a gray, yellow and red-maned mare showing off her dress in the playful sunlight. Hmph. Those royal showoffs. Thinking they are better than everyone. Tune thought to himself enviously.

Tune checked the clock. It was already 10:52. "It's really late. Have you been sleeping well?" Tune's mother said, concerned. "Yeah, I've been fine. Had a lot of... stuff to do last night." He mumbled. "Alright, but don't throw your clock off. You won't wanna be late for your job at Joe's Donuts next week!" Tune Twist groaned. "Do I really have to? I mean, I won't be able to hang with my friends that much." "Oh please, you don't hang out with your friends that much anyway. I keep saying you should, but you just listen to your music all day instead." She said, still keeping a concerned tone. "Yeah, but it's better than hanging with any of the ponies here." He whispered. "What?" She said, stopping from doing the dishes. "Nothing, nothing. I gotta go meet my friends at Cane's Coffee." He lied, while swiping his MP3 player and headphones from the counter using his magic. "Ok, Tune. Have fun!" Tune rolled his eyes as he exited the house and levitated his headphones on his ears. He decided to head North, near the castle. That part of Canterlot usually had interesting things going on.

Tune Twist lazily rose up out if his messy bed, his headphones still in his neck. The tune of "Moonships" by Niki Maroj rang in his ear, and he realized he had left it playing all night into his tolerant eardrums. He switched off the music and rose off of his bed, lazily got himself together and trotted downstairs into his family's kitchen. "Morning, Tune! You're up late." His mother, Diane Twist, said cheerfully as she washed dishes.

It's awesome. Now all you need is colors... Yes, COLORS GOOD SIR! Colors. Also, I would put the leader, (Presumably you,) in a more facing forward position, and make his hind legs farther apart. Names for the changelings: Left: T.O.P., Hat, Sile, Bullet, One-Shot-Kill, Right: Suit, Tux, Business, Auto, Trigger, Just some suggestions. Give me credit if you use any of them!

Why not Tune Twist? He could use a fanfic to be in, check out his backstory. http://mlpforums.com...une-twist-r1194 I know it says he is in Canterlot, but you can change things up and put him in Ponyville for your fic. I also enjoy writing, in fact, I am currently writing a fanfic and I would love to give you some advice if you ever need it!

That first part in finding Nemo when all the goldfish eggs get eaten. That scene never leaves my head. Oh no... I'm gonna cry now!

I have some experience with roleplaying, and I like to write a fanfic in my free time, so I would like to be signed up. http://mlpforums.com...une-twist-r1194 There we go.

I sure do love staring into air.

Those moments when I drift off into my own little world of endless thought where the ideas seem so good are what inspire me. When I am inspired to do something awesome and I make it, I never really end up making anything more. It's always a one-time sort of thing for me. I wish that I could go to that thought world anytime I want and find a good idea, but I rarely get anything good.

A filly Rainbow Dash. Everyone loves filly Rainbow Dash. My Little Dashie was the best thing ever. I think I will cry now.