OC feedback *Evil Nightmares*

[Evil Nightmares 552]

Hey guys, so i've been meaning to do this for a while but i never got around to it.

I'm looking for feedback on my OC, Evil Nightmares.

Body:

Head:

Information

 

 

-Male

-Earth Pony

-White body

-Brown hair

-Average height for a stallion

-Black eyes

-Red snakelike pupils

-Oddly pointed ears

-"Skin and bones" thin (Very very skinny)

-Grey hood

-Large pointed teeth that are always smiling

-Deep sown up cut across the throat

-Deep sown up cut across his back left leg (about half way up)

 

 

 

And in this case, i'm only looking for feedback on his physical appearance, NOT his background information and story. (I'm still working on that)

I want to know what i did right and what i did wrong.

What should be added or removed.

Any and all feedback is welcome.

And please keep in mind that he is a grimdark OC.

 

Side note: I'm still working on a cutie mark, so if anyone has any ideas then please let me know.

~Thanks all

[Espurr 449]

Nice. I like the drawing, but I also think it's a bit creepy.

[Pinkamena-Pills 6,839]

You did a good job,looks very evil-ish.

[Clod 8,294]

Amazing. I was thinking for a cutie mark maybe a knife, but maybe that's too predictable.

[Evil Nightmares 552]

Nice. I like the drawing, but I also think it's a bit creepy.

Thanks. And the creepy feel is what i wanted with this OC, so that works i guess.

 

 

Amazing. I was thinking for a cutie mark maybe a knife, but maybe that's too predictable.

Yeah, i've thought of different cutie marks: Knives, swords, machetes, a big smile, etc....

But i never found anything that really stood out as unique.

[M'aiq the Liar 5,804]

Very nice,certainly fits the vibe that you are known for.

You could always use the operator or observer symbol for his cutie mark.

[Fantasma Phantasm 673]

O.O .....*Shoots a gun at my head but the bullet just bounces off* Right... That is some Scary stuff! I mean jeeze! I'll have to draw something like that... Very very impressive!!