fan fiction The Purist Soul [Prequel To A 2nd Chance]

[ANGEL33 87]

It was a quiet Friday afternoon at Indiana University in Bloomington, Indiana. Class had just released for the day and the weekend. A girl with shoulder length brown hair, bright blue eyes, and a smile that could brighten anyones day. She wore a orange long sleeved shirt, a blue and purple striped sweater vest, blue jeans, and dark orange sneakers (http://fav.me/dxgs2f) walked out a building and was headed towards the dormitory building. "Oh what a beautiful day the lord has given us." As the girl approached the dorms, a group of girls walked by her. "What do you mean by her eyes were black?" "I'm saying her eyeballs were black. And she drew some symbol on the wall with blood then snapped her own neck." The girl stopped dead in her tracks and her happiness turned to fear. "B....black eyes?" She shook her head. "Joyce Brown, get ahold of yourself. They were probably talking about a scary TV show with Jensen Ackles and Jared Padalecki as the heroes." Joyce laughed and kept walking towards the dorm building. "I wonder if Dorothy finished that big story she was so focused on all week?" After Joyce went inside, a man with a flat-top brown hair, glasses, a blue long sleeved shirt and jeans appeared outside the dorm building. He stood staring up at the building. He smirked and his eyes turned black. Then he disappeared in to thin air. Later that night. Joyce, and her friend Dorothy (http://fav.me/d2yvbdz) walked out of Chic-fil-a with a bag in their hands. "So why did Walky not wanna come with us again?" "He said something about buying the DVD Box set for a Japanese show called Kamen Rider: Decade." Both girls laughed and began to head back to the university. "What are two pretty girls like yourselves doing out here?" Both Dorothy and Joyce nearly jumped in to the air. They turned in time for Dorothy to be smacked away. "I know you, you're Mr. O'Malley!" Mr. O'Malley smiled then grabbed Joyce by the throat and held her in the air. "Please let me go, Mr. O'Malley." Joyce watched in horror as his eyes turned black. "Sorry, I have been ordered to take you with me." Her vision began to blur from the lack of air. "God, help me please!" Just then a ball hit Mr. O'Malley in the side of the head. Causing the grip to loosen from Joyce's neck allowing some air in to her body. "Who the....." "ATTACK RIDE: ILLUSION (http://zedge.net/r606415?src=ios&v=2.1.1)!" The ball flashed a purple light and let out a purple smoke. "Hey there, ugly. Did you miss me?" Mr. O'Malley turned and saw a man with short black hair (like this http://37.media.tumblr.com/485bdf3ecb16b846d9133ea00d25572a/tumblr_mmxpyi0lFp1rlxkmko1_500.jpg), wearing a black leather jacket, jeans, and black boots. "Whaddaya say you put the girl down, and we handle this like men or whatever you are." "If I don't?" Joyce noticed the sky had become cloudy and lightning began to flash almost every 5 seconds. "Then I'll get angry, and you wouldn't like me when I'm angry." Joyce looked at the man and saw big beautiful white wings coming from his back. "You're no angel!" "Do you really wanna risk that?" Mr. O'Malley dropped Joyce who fell to a coughing heap. "Fooled you!" The man quickly drew a golden desert eagle and shot Mr. O'Malley in the head.

Edited August 19, 2014 by ANGEL

[StitchandMLPlover 930]

Great job! Joyce is cool. The black eyes are scary and a neat way to add suspense. 

[ANGEL33 87]

The man holstered his gun on his hip and began to make his way towards Joyce. When out of nowhere a girl in yellow body suit with a big blue letter "A" on her chest, a blue mask over her eyes, blue gloves and boots, with a blue cape and short brown hair landed in front of him (http://fav.me/d5yashc). "STOP RIGHT THERE!" The man stopped and sighed deeply. "You do know the Comic-con is in San Diego this year right?" "I will not allow you to hurt this innocent civilian!" "Why the hell would I do that, after I just saved her?" The girl looked to Joyce and the dead body of Mr. O'Malley. Then looked back at the man. "I don't know what your intentions are but you have commited murder." "First of all, my name is Michael Saint. 2nd had I not put a bullet in that guy's head he might've killed her. So if you're done, I would really like to check on the girl." Michael walked past the cosplayer to Joyce who was still in a heap on the ground. "Hey, are you ok?" Joyce looked up in to Michael's eyes and saw they were beautiful blue. "I'm fine, thank you." Joyce kept stairing in to Michael's eyes. "Are you........Really an angel?" Michael laughed at Joyce. "No, I'm no angel. It was a special gas that made it look like I am." "You have to be an angel. I asked God to please help me. And then you show up and saved me from that demon." Michael sighed again and looked around a bit. "I'm not an angel, but you can think of me as a kind of stand in if you want. I don't mind if you do that." Joyce smiled at Michael happily. "Wait, where's Dorothy?!" Then the superhero girl came to Michael's side. "She'll be fine, she may have pain in her face later." "AMAZI-GIRL, YOU'RE HERE TOO?!" Michael looked at Amazi-Girl. "What?" "Seriously?" "Shut up, it works great." "I'm not saying it's bad, it's better than what I thought it was."

Edited July 26, 2014 by ANGEL

[StitchandMLPlover 930]

I like the super hero girl and Michael. 

[ANGEL33 87]

Joyce was so excited being near two heroes she began to feel woozy. "Oh no, not again." Michael crouched next to Joyce and put his hand on her back. "Easy all the excitement is going to your head. Any more and you could blackout." Joyce smiled and leaned in to Michael's chest. "Thank you, Michael." After thanking Michael, Joyce blacked out. "Great, just what I need a blacked out college girl. Explaining this should be fun." Michael looked up and found Amazi-girl had vanished. "Oh that's so damn cute! Doin' the Ninja Vanish trick to get out of helping me." Michael looked down at Joyce who was still out cold and smiling. "Well I guess about 5% of this job is done. Now I just need to stay by her and maybe find out who the Devil is that wants this girl and why." A few hours later, Joyce awoke in her top bunk. "Huh, was it all a dream?" Joyce climbed out of her bunk. "Sarah's not here, she must've went out or something." She opened the door to her dorm and was suprised to find Michael asleep in a chair with a golden desert eagle in both hands. "Oh my gosh, he's real!"

[StitchandMLPlover 930]

I like how we think she had a dream then she finds out Michael is real. Cool.

[ANGEL33 87]

Michael woke up and looked up at Joyce then smiled. "Hey, how are you?" "How long have you been there?" Michael looked at his watch. "All night, your R.A. was sure suprised to see me here. But had a floor meeting where I introduced myself, and stated my business here." Joyce sat down on the floor next to Michael. "What is your business, if you don't mind me asking?" "To protect you, and keep you safe from demons." "I thought demons stayed in Hell?" "Most do, others find a way out and terrorize humans. But there are a few that fall in love with humans." "No way, they're the spawns of evil!" "But they were human at one point. So they still have emotions. It takes the one human that is romantically appealing to that demon. To flush out the emotion to love." "So what happens then?" "They date, get married, and have kids. Just like normal people." Joyce looked at the floor. "I had no idea, demons could do that." Michael sighed deeply. "Let me guess, you had Youth Pastor Rick?" "How did you know that?" "Lucky guess, that guy could never get his facts straight." "So Michael can you tell me a little about yourself? What do your parents think about what you do?" "Dunno, I was abandoned at a church as a baby. Father Murphy and Mother Ann raised me as their own." "You poor thing!" "Yeah, I've heard it all before. The sisters at the church really became my sisters." "They don't know who your parents are?" "Nope but the one thing that confuses them is that I had/have a tattoo of wings that go down to my waist." Joyce covered her mouth in shock. "Who would do such a thing to an innocent baby?!" " I dunno."

Edited August 1, 2014 by ANGEL

[StitchandMLPlover 930]

Fascinating! Especially the part about demons and love,and the tattoo. 

[ANGEL33 87]

Michael looked at his watch again. "Hmmm....I thought it would have been noticed by now?" Joyce looked at Michael questioningly. "What?" Then came a voice that Joyce would never forget, one that chilled her to her very soul. "Hey!" Joyce looked down the hall. It was Ryan the very guy who tried to rape her at a party. "You Michael?" "Depends, are you Ryan?" "I heard you had some pics of that girl." Joyce's eyes widened in horror. "No.....She was fooled again." Michael stood up and pulled something from his pocket. Joyce caught a glimpse of a pic. "Wait those are...." Michael handed Ryan the pics. "Time to see what you look like na....huh what the?" Ryan threw the pics at Michael. And Joyce finally saw that the pics were really cards. Kuuga, Agito, Ryuki, Faiz, Blade, Hibiki, Kabuto, Den-O, Kiva. (http://zedge.net/r839120?src=ios&v=2.1.1) "WHAT DO YOU THINK YOU'RE PLAYING AT!" "Well I think I just played you, you black eyed son of a bitch!" Ryan's eyes turned black. "He's a demon too?!" "No matter I'll just take her myself!" Michael punched Ryan so hard, Joyce heard his neck break. "No black smoke. Meaning this was Ryan's true demon form." Michael picked up the cards, and put them back in to his pocket. "But......you said...." "I had pics of you? Come on, I was raised in a church. Plus I did say I'm here to protect you." Joyce was so happy that Michael hadn't betrayed her, that she hugged him tightly, and nearly cried.

Edited August 21, 2014 by ANGEL

[StitchandMLPlover 930]

Slick move of Michael to use cards to make Ryan think he had photos. I'm glad Michael didn't betray Joyce too. 

[ANGEL33 87]

Joyce went with Michael who carried Ryan's demonic corpse to the dean's office. Michael walked in and slammed the body on to the dean's desk. "You wanted a demon corpse, here's one. Now put Devil's Traps at every known entrance and exit to every building on campus! Oh, and deal with that it's starting to stink" The two left the shocked dean and went to the front of the girl's dorm and met up with Dorothy. "Hey, how's your face?" Dorothy happily hugged Joyce. "It's fine, but what about you?" "Well I would be with God early, if Michael hadn't shown up and saved me." Dorothy looked at Michael and smiled. "Thanks for saving Joyce." "Anytime, anywhere, and anyday." "Do you have a crush on her?" Michael held up his hand and showed a small amount." "That's a small crush." "Sorry if I burst your bubble, Joyce." Joyce smiled at Michael. "It's okay, I have a boyfriend anyway." "She kinda has a boyfriend." "How the hell does she kinda have a boyfriend?" "He's gay." "Then how is he dating her if he's gay?" "I'm..." Dorothy gently covered Joyce's mouth. "It's complicated." "I'll say."

[StitchandMLPlover 930]

The dean scene is funny and so is the "gay" part.

[ANGEL33 87]

Just as Dorothy removed her hand from Joyce's mouth. A woman with long orangish blonde hair, wearing a World War 2 helmet, blue goggles, and purple mechanic coveralls rode a motorcycle into an empty parking space. "There she is!" The woman climbed off her bike and pulled her helmet off then sat it on the seat. She pressed a few buttons and walked away. "YOU KNOW I'VE BEEN WAITING ALL NIGHT?!" "OH BE QUIET, IT TAKES HOURS TO GET FROM HAWAII TO HERE!" As the woman walked towards them she pulled her goggles to the top of her head. "Who's that, Michael?" "That is one Gadget Hackwrench, one of the biggest mechanical geniuses in the world." Joyce looked at the ground. "She's barefoot, does she know?" "She does, but where she came from she ran around like that." Dorothy looked at Michael. "Where's she from?" "Another universe, and back then she was literally a mouse." Joyce and Dorothy looked at Michael wide-eyed. "She's from a Disney Universe, but the man she's closest to doesn't know which one." Gadget walked up to Michael. And hugged him tightly. "How are you?" "I'm great, Gadget."

Edited August 24, 2014 by ANGEL

[StitchandMLPlover 930]

What a cute idea to add Gadget!