Slice0Pie 815 September 28, 2014 Share September 28, 2014 Just a normal 13 year old artist drawing ponies Anyways, I drew this right now, and I'm really, really, really proud of this! I really need critique from experienced artists because I want to improve badly! Anyways, this is just a head/chest shot, and I used colored pencils for the first time. Anyways, here it is 5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mrbrunoh1 2,990 September 28, 2014 Share September 28, 2014 I liked, its simple but correct, cool drawn xD 2 My Ocs: Violet Margaret , Violet Niwy I'm a Illustrator...SPITFIRE IS THE BEST PONY Channel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stormlight 1,371 September 28, 2014 Share September 28, 2014 It's nice! Better than what I can draw 4 Credit for signature goes to Eazyfries Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Star-Gazer 202 September 28, 2014 Share September 28, 2014 God damn, you can draw well. Beautiful style you've got there, too. I've no critique, and I'm not exactly in the position to do so anyway, because reasons. c: 2 Signature made by Sparkle Speed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
That Horse 41 September 28, 2014 Share September 28, 2014 Well, In my personal opinion, this is pretty nice. 2 You're looking at my signature, so you must be Royally Boned.. Also, I now have a forum for communication and roleplay! Check it out! http://techquestrianbloc.freeforums.net Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
碇 シンジン 27,437 September 28, 2014 Share September 28, 2014 I wish I could draw that well. The mane looks beautiful good work 2 Rarity Fan Club Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Foxx 258 September 29, 2014 Share September 29, 2014 (edited) Haha, I'm right there with you on the young artist thing(I'm a mere 13 myself). Anyways, this is a stunning style. The prominence of the bone and muscle makes for a style that resembles a real horse which I am very fond of. The ears are very cute and expressive, so a round of applause for that. The eyes are a good size and shape and I love that large, stylized tear duct. Those eyebrows remind me of Spirit, and can help give your character a lot of expression so another well done on that aspect. Now for the, err, not so positives...The highlights on her hair are a bit nonsensical. If you are going to make her mane shiny, keep in mind the direction of which the light is coming from. Here the shiny areas are place willy nilly, but with some work, they could be very effective in making the hair pop. The curls in the mane are a bit off. This bit would best be explained with some visual aids so hop on over to that spoiler to check it out. I spend a lot of time around and riding horses and I have come to known their anatomy fairly well. That chest juts in weirdly, which would be a life-threatening characteristic on a real horse as it would leave no room for the heart and lungs. I hope this has helped you and I look forward to seeing more art from you! Stay Foxxy! Edited September 29, 2014 by Foxx 1 Aim high kid, but don't aim for the impossible - Rainbow Dash ^Amazing Signature by the great and powerful Lunia!^ >My Request Shop< MLP Forum's self-proclaimed evil enchantress. > My Deviantart< Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yeet 2,027 September 29, 2014 Share September 29, 2014 inb4ghostie It's good. I see you made her seem very, horny, in this drawing. Yeah it's good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Birdwing 87 September 29, 2014 Share September 29, 2014 Beautiful, unique style. She's lovely. I love her eyes! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smokie-Horse 83 September 29, 2014 Share September 29, 2014 Don't change it, it's a unique style and that's what I think should be respected the most in art. If anything, maybe make her mouth a little more defined. But other than that, no comment, just nice! "I will pre-emptively ask you to pay no attention to the poorly informed simpleton above." -Smokie-Horse's future self Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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